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The subject matter is very novel, and we are preparing to create a new genre.

The plot is good, especially when cultivating the planet, but the connection between the plots is a bit cliche, but this does not prevent us from seeing the unique color of this book. We will feel sorry for the experiences of each character in this book, but the ending will still make people feel gratified. When I calm down and ignore some of the plot, I personally think this book is not bad. I look forward to the author's next work. I read Chapter 153 from Chapter 0, and he said that I read for less than 30 minutes. What does he mean [angry][angry][angry]

At least it looks very good now.

What I like to read the most is the development of the planet. Other similar novels have very little ink on this aspect, but this one spent a lot of ink on it. I really like it.

I like this book. Maybe the rating of this book is a little low, but it is my favorite type.

The foreshadowing is particularly good, giving people a new world view. The content in the middle is very interesting and lively. The only flaw is the ending. It's a bit watery, but I can't say it's a bad ending. Anyway, I'll give it a good review [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Update it quickly, it's not enough to watch. If you don't update it, go home and farm! [Laughing][laughing]

This book could have been a god, and according to the author's ideas, it could have become a new star in the novel. The plot in the early stage is tight, but the progress in the later stage is too fast. The growth of the protagonist and the confrontation of wills in the later stage are probably completed. If it can be supplemented during the period, it will reach more than 1300 chapters. Overall, it is a good book, but it has a few shortcomings: it is too short.

I started reading novels in 2019, and this novel is one of the most exciting books I have ever read. Both the early and middle stages were enjoyable. Although I was disappointed in the later stage, I don't think it was a bad ending. After reading it, I was still unsatisfied. Highly recommend reading this book.

It's good. At least I can read it. Don't take those ratings. It's more than 9 points. The novel that turns out to be full of water is much better. But it also depends on personal preference. Some people don't like to read this (╥╥). Then the rating they give will definitely be low. I can't say that this novel is well written. I can only say that this novel can be read when you are bored. It won't make you want to sleep while reading it like other novels. I was wrong. I only saw the front part and gave it a five-star review. From chapter 26 onwards, I was so poisoned that I couldn't take care of myself.

The writing is very good. Although the author... The ending is not bad, but it doesn't make sense. All in all, it's okay, what can I say? It is already a very favorite theme on the Tomato platform. But it's really not very friendly to new authors. It's good that he can write like this, and his writing style is not bad, but at the end, I still feel a little bit regretful. But it's also the first online article I've read, haha. Anyway... Finished with flowers. For my favorite characters, all I can say is - "We can only accompany them so far, but their stories are not over yet."

The previous ones that wrote about reality were pretty bad, but the ones in the world are pretty good, and the recent ones are all very good. As long as you don't write people in reality too stupidly, you can get a rating of about 9.0. The author can look at how others describe people. You don't have to write too well. As long as you don't write people too stupidly, and it fits your writing theme, it's a good book.

It feels so good. The development of the planet is the same as our earth now. And the author seems to have done a great job, adding all your characters and abilities from other anime. Thumbs up for you. The back is so bad. How could it have such a tragic ending? Score 0 points.

Rabbit, I prefer active authors who interact more with readers. One update a day is fine. You can also find inspiration in the comments. I like this book very much. I'll keep an eye on you. If you see it, reply to me.

I think it's very good, although it's short, and the second half has a very fast tempo. I think it's very good, although it's short, and the second half has a very fast tempo, but what should I say? It has a beginning and an end, which is very good for a novice. When writing a novel, the story is spread out. The most difficult thing after writing is nonsense literature, and then how to make a clever and good beginning, and the end without a beginning. I think it is very good that he can write a beginning and an end, although it uses a method similar to outline escape. Although there is nothing noteworthy about the writing style, are there any major problems? For example, the logic does not make sense, there are typos in the text, and other big problems. There are not even obvious gaps that are not filled in.

The whole book seems to be a pity. Such a good subject matter ended like this. If I keep writing like this, there will definitely be no problem in writing hundreds of pages. The outline of the main line is also quite clear, and it doesn't feel like it's going to collapse. It just ends suddenly and inexplicably. But overall, the basic early and middle stages are still very well written, and should be able to reach a relatively high standard. There are no particularly big flaws. It's just that the later stage ended suddenly, but overall it can be regarded as having a beginning and an end. It's a pity. If I find someone to continue writing, It would still be easy to write hundreds of chapters, the main plot is also very complete, and the early foreshadowing is also very good. It is still easy to continue writing, but in any case, this book is still worth reading, and the ending can barely be said to be satisfactory. [Smile][smile][smile]

I have now read Chapter 50. There are some flaws, but overall the writing is quite good. Many people in the comment area who maliciously give low scores comment after reading Chapter 7 or 8. What I want to tell you is that you should read this book and stick with it at least until Chapter 20. Believe me, you will not regret it. Finally, cheers to the author!

It's a good book, the writing is not bad, the subject matter is good, the plot is good, the world view is quite big, but the ending is bad, and the bad ending is quite sudden, that is to say, it is good except for the last dozen or so chapters. The last few chapters are not bad, but the ending is too fast. I personally think it is better to leave a thought. I have also read the last two chapters. The writing is good and the plot is okay. It is about Tenanai's appendicitis.

It's really interesting and interesting, but I shouldn't have skipped the ending. It feels unacceptable to jump to the back all at once. I sincerely hope that the author can continue from chapter 166, and the ending is interesting enough to keep. I can't see enough [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][Cry][Cry]

This is the first book I have read back to reading novels, and I have finished it. I like this novel idea very much. Although the content and fighting routines have been used countless times by countless authors, it is a classic within a classic, but the description of cultivating the planet is quite novel to me. Maybe I will try to read this kind of novel about cultivating others to strengthen themselves (I hope my friends can recommend [eat melon]). The novel is quite novel, but it is a pity that it is unfinished, but I can understand [face covering]

I read this book, which has more than 100 chapters, and found that the author wrote it very well. Moreover, the protagonist he basically wrote in this book is very powerful. The background of the protagonist is also very good. It can be compared with the God of Destruction.

From chapter 0 to 175 pictures, although it is unfinished, I personally think it is very good. After all, this is just written by a new author. What touches me the most is the sentence at the end: Immortal is nothing more than that. I still remember it now. The author is very good at writing like this. I look forward to his next work. [Top post]

It's good, I really like it. Reading novels just makes me feel good. It's not too outrageous, so I'll just read it. After all, if it's too selective, there won't be many novels to read.

I have read a lot of articles, but not many like this. Although it is very short, it is very exciting at the end. It may be that I was rushed from level 3 to level 9 in the middle. If you say so, keep writing. This article can be 9.0. The highlight of this article is at the end. It is exciting, but it is also the most exciting part of the whole article, but the concept of the world is small.

This book is the best book I have ever read, but it is a bit short. Even if I expand the progress, there are more than 150 pictures! The minimum standard for personal opinions is 1,300 pieces. The first two early and mid-terms are great articles, but the latter part is a bit unfinished. They broke through from the third level to the tenth level all at once, and finally gave up. If you say that after breaking through the tenth level, they can continue to have stories together, then there are still more interesting suggestions for improvement. Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking

Even though I cried until the end, I still smiled. It is indeed a good article! I am always deeply shocked by this when I think about it again.

I like this book very much, especially when I was cultivating a planet, it made me immersed in the situation, as if I was really the god who dominates all things. I just felt that when the male protagonist competed with other planet owners, the previous dialogue was a lot redundant. If there were more chapters, it would definitely be enjoyable to read [shy][shy][shy]

The subject matter feels good, but we mainly want to see you develop the planet, and we should write less about other things. But it's okay at the beginning. I hope the author will continue to work hard😊, come on [Like]

As a cool novel, overall it felt good, although the first few chapters were a bit outrageous. It was outrageous to go out with my sister and end up leaving her where she was for a naughty kid. But other than this, everything is okay, the subject matter is quite novel, and the update speed is also very fast [please update]

The writing is very, very good, the novel's topic is newly introduced, and there is not too much nonsense. The plot is smoothly connected. I suggest the author write less about a single character when writing about the planet. For example, there was too much about Long Tian in the back, so I skipped it directly. There's nothing else except this. Don't stop reading it just because you read my advice. It's really well written. Also, the author updates so slowly [smile]