Xiaoluo and Eevee came to the Pokémon world and embarked on a wonderful journey.
What is hidden behind the giant Pokémon?
What can you get after communicating with Mewtwo?
Is the league championship just the beginning?
Reader comments
Thank you very much for your support. If you have any opinions, please feel free to raise them. Xiaoluo will consider making corrections.
Xiaoluo wants to quibble about the rhythm, bah, please explain. The pace is indeed a bit fast for the plot, but Xiaoluo's focus will be on the back, and he won't write too much about the slow growth process. The stories of these gyms will pass quickly. The turning point has been foreshadowed before and will appear soon.
Let's work hard together!
The level divisions are unclear, combat details are lacking, the relationship between the protagonist and the elves is rarely described, and the character color is not outstanding. The author works hard! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][ Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like ][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
The theme of this novel is very attractive, but the pace is too fast (the main plot runs too fast, just like a joke) and the details are not well described. (You can add more "watery" content without deviating from the theme, and bring some emotions to the protagonist) Some sections are too long (long sections are easy to get confused), the potential is very high, and there is a lot of room for improvement. I should be a novice author, come on! Make persistent efforts!
The author's writing is very good, but it's a pity that only two people can reward it.
Come on, author, don't force yourself, just write less!
Today I'm here again to cheer the author on
Don't know how to post more comments? Can someone tell me if I can post more?
I personally like Ibrahimovic and I hope the author can have more Ibrahimovics.
By the way, I personally think that the author can create several Eevee with different attributes, such as dragon, rock, etc.
Big cheers for the author (ง •̀_•́)งFive stars
After reading a few chapters, I feel like the pace is too fast!
Okay, okay, it would be better if there is no female protagonist in the future. No poking! ! !
I hope to keep writing.
Dear author, will you get Eevee Z in Alola in the future?
Can the author update six pages a day? It's so beautiful. I hope I can collect all eight Eevee soon.
Finally found a book with Slowpoke in it, come on!
It looks good, cheers for the author [Like]
Sirona Serina Meiyi
Can we add another Ibrahimovic? Please please🙏🏻
I really like it, awesome
The author's writing style needs to be improved.
Enter the group and pass it
Author, your book is good to read, but it's not enough. It's too little.
I give the author a five-star rating, hehe😘😘😘
How can it only have 8.5 Stars? (I'm not confident enough. After reading it for so long, I actually forgot to comment)
This book is great! I hope the author won't write a bad novel or stop updating it (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ) It's not easy to find a novel that I like, and it's not bad.
It's great. I've always wanted to see a collection of Ibrahimovic.
Personally, I think it's feasible. Although it's fast-paced, it's overall good. The author should definitely not let it go unfinished! I'm going to stay for a long time 😂
It's pretty good. The author put a lot of effort into it.
The function of the GS ball is to summon the mythical beast Celebi, but it is better not to convince him.
Thank you very much for your support. If you have any opinions, please feel free to raise them. Xiaoluo will consider making corrections. Xiaoluo wants to quibble about the rhythm, bah, please explain. The pace is indeed a bit fast for the plot, but Xiaoluo's focus will be on the back, and he won't write too much about the slow growth process. The stories of these gyms will pass quickly. The turning point has been foreshadowed before and will appear soon. Let's work hard together!
The level divisions are unclear, combat details are lacking, the relationship between the protagonist and the elves is rarely described, and the character color is not outstanding. The author works hard! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][ Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like ][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
The theme of this novel is very attractive, but the pace is too fast (the main plot runs too fast, just like a joke) and the details are not well described. (You can add more "watery" content without deviating from the theme, and bring some emotions to the protagonist) Some sections are too long (long sections are easy to get confused), the potential is very high, and there is a lot of room for improvement. I should be a novice author, come on! Make persistent efforts!
The author's writing is very good, but it's a pity that only two people can reward it. Come on, author, don't force yourself, just write less! Today I'm here again to cheer the author on Don't know how to post more comments? Can someone tell me if I can post more? I personally like Ibrahimovic and I hope the author can have more Ibrahimovics. By the way, I personally think that the author can create several Eevee with different attributes, such as dragon, rock, etc.
Big cheers for the author (ง •̀_•́)งFive stars
After reading a few chapters, I feel like the pace is too fast!
Okay, okay, it would be better if there is no female protagonist in the future. No poking! ! !
I hope to keep writing.
Dear author, will you get Eevee Z in Alola in the future?
Can the author update six pages a day? It's so beautiful. I hope I can collect all eight Eevee soon.
Finally found a book with Slowpoke in it, come on!
It looks good, cheers for the author [Like]
Sirona Serina Meiyi
Can we add another Ibrahimovic? Please please🙏🏻
I really like it, awesome
The author's writing style needs to be improved.
Enter the group and pass it
Author, your book is good to read, but it's not enough. It's too little.
I give the author a five-star rating, hehe😘😘😘
How can it only have 8.5 Stars? (I'm not confident enough. After reading it for so long, I actually forgot to comment)
This book is great! I hope the author won't write a bad novel or stop updating it (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ) It's not easy to find a novel that I like, and it's not bad.
It's great. I've always wanted to see a collection of Ibrahimovic.
Personally, I think it's feasible. Although it's fast-paced, it's overall good. The author should definitely not let it go unfinished! I'm going to stay for a long time 😂
It's pretty good. The author put a lot of effort into it.
The function of the GS ball is to summon the mythical beast Celebi, but it is better not to convince him.