Elf System: I, the Strongest Champion of the Alliance

This is the best-looking Pokémon I have ever seen (this is my own feeling, maybe it's because I have limited knowledge and don't like to spray it by mistake). It's well worth watching.

It feels very good. The battle scenes are well written, but there are too few~~~It's not enough to watch~~😭The best elf novel I've ever read is from Kanto to Kalos. It's really a lot of fun. Come on, author.

This is the only Pokémon novel I have read so far that I can keep reading. The author writes it very well, keep up the good work! ! ! Don't stop updating it for me, otherwise I will send you the blade directly! ! ! !

Good looking, some of the best Pokémon books [Chigua]

The high rating makes sense. Bad smile, super good-looking, highly recommended. I don't understand why there are negative reviews. Everyone who has seen it says it's good! ! ! ! ! ! [Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned]

This is definitely the best elf book I have ever read. Unlike other books, which are boring invincible novels, chaotic plot development, and cliched plots, this book does not have these things. It only has passion, and the system only adds characteristics. Most of them rely on the protagonist's talent and combat experience. Novels like this that do not rely on the system are rare. I highly recommend this book. If it can be done without being unfinished, this book will become a god!

The perfect elf text allows us to follow Xiao Chi's growth from a God's perspective, including the daily care with Xiao Zhi and the passion during battle. The only flaw is that the main line is too long, but that doesn't matter at all. I will wait until the moment when the flowers are finished [please ask for more updates][please ask for more updates][laugh][laugh]

The smooth plot is one of my favorite novels. Reminds me of when I watched xy. Chi Ye's scene. I was very excited when I saw it. After all, unlike Xiaozhi, Chiye fought all the way up.

I have read a lot of Pokémon books, and this one is my favorite. Although it is the main plot of Ash, it does not belittle the original characters. (Chief fans really like it very much) The characters are very well drawn, and the characters in the original have not lost their character. Chi is really handsome [laughing]

Come on! This book is the best Pokémon book besides The Strongest Leader (old name: Elf Leader), but it's not enough to read. I'll reread it first and keep it up. The author is about 69,000 words away from reaching 1 million words. I wish the author will reach 1 million words soon.

Pokémon, or Pokemon, was my favorite animation when I was a kid. When I was a kid, I didn't think it was anything when I watched Ash's battles. When I grew up, I realized that Ash had so many regrets. The author's books tend to make up for the regrets. This is what I want to see. Then this book is the one with the most Pokémon captured. I personally am a collector, and I also like that the protagonist can conquer many Pokémon. The author also gives each Pokémon a chance to appear, which is very careful (I hope the author can let Xiaochi conquer a Wind Speed Dog, I really like Wind Speed Dog). Regarding the author's writing style, I think this is very good. Please help me. Recalling the plot, the writing is relatively bland (but I still hope that the battle will be more exciting, I feel that Xiao Chi is too strong and the battle is a bit boring). Finally, I hope the author can stick to it. Some of the Pokémon books I have read are either discontinued or only updated after a long time. My student party cannot provide material support, but I sincerely hope to see a perfect ending. Come on, author!

I just reread XYZ and found that this novel is quite good and reasonable in all aspects. Rereading the part about Master Zhi's departure feels like a big plus. After that, I hope to have some mega, bond evolution, Z-move, and Gigantamax (the first two can be more, six can be all), especially the bond evolution, which is also related to the characteristics of the elf. It can't be justified if there is not one [smile] Of course it is the best to have a plot that beats a dog howling. No matter how poorly written it is, it must be praised [Blowing Kiss] By the way, if there is a heroine, I hope it will be based on Ash and Serena: the hazy love carries their respective futures [Shy] I couldn't stand watching the rest of it [crying]. The battle plot started to feel rich, but then it seemed dragging. The details were not very good, and the pace felt a bit slow. Some of the problems with complicated plots appeared (it may also be because I am playing the seventh generation recently and want to see it soon). . . I am also a little disappointed with the setting of bond evolution. I don't particularly like elves at the moment. I hope to see Ninja Frog (XYZ is so handsome and very popular) and Z God (who doesn't like Gundam) in the future [facepalm], give it a try and look at it later. . . [Think]

The plot of this book is very good. I feel that when I fully integrate into this world, my strength will be further improved. In the description of the relationship between men and women, I feel that the protagonist is a bit cold and cold. If he hadn't mentioned being kissed, it should be the gloves given to him by the heroine. I even suspect that he has sexual orientation problems. Sometimes the relationship between men and women can also be a clue to the story. I don't know if you have read it. "Pokemon: The Moment of Awakening" is also written in one region like the author. I feel very good. The relationship between the protagonists is well handled. It would be great if the Elf Bond evolved in the early stage, and then I found or gave a super evolution stone to a friend. Also, how do I calculate this time? Can traveling in a region make me one year older? How long can it take? Chi, Zhi: I don't want to be ten years old forever

It's so good. I've been reading Pokémon novels for so long. This book ranks among the best Pokémon novels.

Very nice. It does not destroy the original plot of Pokémon, making people want to watch it. Moreover, the character of the protagonist is also very cute. It adds a bit of liveliness to the original Pokémon. It is highly recommended.

Overall it's pretty good, unlike other elven stories that start with a bunch of mythical beasts that are invincible without training. It doesn't deviate too much from the main plot. You can write less about the extras and select a few important ones, otherwise there will be too many later areas to finish. The battle description is also very good, and the sense of immersion is very strong, but the update is too slow. It was a bit awkward in the later period. It was relatively simple, basically just go to the gym after catching the elves, and then the theatrical version felt that there was no focus or highlights, and there was very little interaction with the elves, and the daily life was relatively small. Compared with the early stage, one area had more than 300 chapters, not including the theatrical version, but the latter area only had 200 chapters including the theatrical version, which was obviously reduced.

It is passionate, not only has the system but also the original plot. The protagonist basically kills people all the way. The author updates 3 chapters a day. Each chapter has a new elf or character. The protagonist helps Xiaozhi in every chapter, and the elf battles are also exciting. A very good novel.

It's very exciting, it looks very emotional, and there is Xiaozhi's passion for challenging his opponents. The protagonist has a million more brains than Xiaozhi. The love and hatred between the protagonist and Banmu are so real. Great praise! ! ! I beg the author not to give up. Two chapters a day is good

The more I read the novel, the more comfortable I feel. This is the first time I feel like this, just like putting on new underwear on New Year's morning. I hope the author can work hard. You must at least give us more Carlos. Brothers, am I doing the right thing? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I personally feel this is the best Pokémon fanfic I have ever read. The only drawback is that the pace is slow and the length is long, but it is very passionate and not very brainless. The heroine hasn't been confirmed yet, I think it's time to confirm it (I think it should be Sirona, after all, the author dug a trap set by the heroine. Don't leave it unfilled!!!)

I wrote about the Pokémon in my heart, which is pure and innocent. Unlike me now, who only cares about data, race value, and effort value in Pokémon battles. Here I seem to see my old self. I don't care about the Pokémon's personality or race. I only care about the usage rate of Pokémon. I only care about the bond between included objects. If you can experience the fun of the Pokémon world in person, take a quick trip, have a passionate battle, make a group of like-minded partners, embark on your own Pokémon journey together, and create your own world! Come on, Pokémon!

I only discovered this book when the author updated it to the Hoenn chapter. It is very interesting, the bond between Xiao Chi and Pokémon, and the protection of Xiaozhi, a reckless brother. The most important thing is that this is a Pokémon article without cp. I give it four stars. I personally think that the theatrical version is too much, because I personally don't like the plot of the theatrical version. The theatrical version with so many small chapters in each place is acceptable, but this book has more theatrical versions, and each theatrical version can be regarded as a short article, so I give it four stars.

This book is not like other Pokémon books, where the main character is a quasi-god, and there are a lot of mythical beasts (I also like to humanize Gardevoir, which I don't like a bit), but this book has all kinds of elves, and there are not too many mythical beasts and quasi-gods. Some very common elves have also been subdued, such as Gala Gala, Giant Needle, etc. They all rely on their own efforts to become stronger (although there is a system, but there is no sense of existence), and the protagonist is Chiye. In short, this book is still good.

It's great. Compared to other books, the system is rarely used. Xiaochi grows up step by step, one step at a time, passionate but calm. The battles in the article are also very exciting. Xiaozhi and Xiaochi do not go together. Instead, they grow up separately and follow the plot closely, but have their own ideas and highlights. It is relatively refreshing and more in line with my personal joy. It is the only book I have been chasing. Finally, cheers! Come on! Sometimes studying is really tiring, but watching Xiaochi grow step by step, his enthusiasm sometimes drives me. When I am tired, it always cheers me up and keeps working hard. This is one of the reasons why I keep pursuing it. Of course, it would be better if there are more updates [shy]

I have read elf fan fiction, it is the best one, keep reading, it is not bad, it is definitely a sacred book among the sacred books. Come on !

This is definitely the best Pokémon novel I have ever read. The bonds between friends, exciting travels, cute and charming villains, and countless Pokémon, mixed with the long-lost childhood, are all reflected in this book.

Except for the fact that the protagonist seems to have too much luck, everything is pretty good. As a relatively new book, the protagonist is neither invincible nor well-written, and the emotions are more vivid. The personalities of each character can be separated. I really enjoyed reading it. There were too few yellow buttons that stopped me in my tracks. The author may keep up the good work.

A very nice book. This book deserves to be reviewed at 9:05 or more. I look forward to the author's update. I would like to send you a five-star review.

The power of this book is still a bit lacking, but it is a fanfic after all, so it is already very good. Some things worth comparing are the various movies and the author's own ideas. Personally, I respect the original work more. I could have given Xiao Chi a few old enemies, such as Qinglu, and the geniuses from the regions in the original work. The protagonist has too many abilities and looks so flashy. This is just a personal opinion. Some people prefer to read the Invincible novel. But personally, I prefer to see people like Xiaozhi grow up, as long as those things that shouldn't be removed are removed, such as Xiaozhi's childishness in the original work. Personally, I prefer Xiao Chi's main battle against Charizard in the original work. In fact, some things are not normal enough. The protagonist's fire-breathing dragon bloodline mutation, as well as the sacred fire and dragon inheritance, are still no match for an ordinary giant needle bee. [Come on]o(≧口≦)o

Although I haven't watched it for a long time, I have read more than 700 chapters, so I think I am qualified to post a book review Note: I think this book is average. I don't want to brag or belittle, I just want to make this book better. The text in the book is bland. It only talks about the protagonist Xiaochi getting badges, playing in tournaments, catching elves, and fighting elves. There is nothing new, such as some emotional aspects or innovative aspects. When I read this book, I thought of a saying said by the teacher in class, "It's like chewing wax." The author can read more high-scoring works of the same type written by other writers. Some articles have their ups and downs, which makes people want to read them. I hope the author can go further. Although the score of this book is as high as nine points, I feel that it is too high. It is really not that good-looking. It may also be that the works with a score of more than nine points on Tomato are just average. However, the author also said that this is his first time writing a novel, and I think it can be forgiven if the writing is not good. I hope the author can persevere and write masterpieces in the future [Like] [Like]