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Ahhhhhh, this book is not like other binding systems for female protagonists, with countless opportunities and smooth sailing along the way. Instead, during the long journey of cultivating immortality, when I was practicing with my brother, although it is not amazing, I am not the kind of person who hugs my brother's legs and asks for shelter. This book is really to my liking, but I just can't read it.

Although this book is also about system cultivation, unlike other heroines who rely on the system to sing their songs all the way, the heroine also suffered a lot. The system is a cold system, and the direct interaction between siblings is very loving. It's just that the parents appear too little. The whole family, 70% of the time, is just the elder sister and younger brother.

I really like the two siblings practicing together! ! ! ! ! ! Don't separate ヽ(≧Д≦)ノ

After reading 👀 dozens of chapters, I feel that the author's writing is not enough, there is a lack of psychological description, and there is a lack of communication and interaction between the characters. When I look at it this way, there is basically no description of the parents. After all, it is a time travel with the whole family, and there must be a portrayal of family affection. Otherwise, it will always feel dry. It is not interesting here and not interesting there. The fights were a bit inexplicable, and it felt a bit silly for my brother to start fighting whenever they disagreed. There is also no acceptance process for a younger brother. Although the family really wants a younger brother and son, there is no acceptance process and no transition. There is basically no communication between the younger brother and his parents. In short, the characterization is not good and vivid. I hope the author will write better in the future. Now that I have read the beginning, I am still looking forward to this article. I don't know if the author can see my comment, but I don't mean anything malicious, I'm just expressing my opinion. To be honest, I always feel that this article is in the style of a male video, not very delicate. The author cannot be a male video author←_←. I will comment again after reading it, hoping it will change my mind.

It's very interesting. This is the only book that I have been following every day these days. The heroine has a good personality and loves her brother very much. Hahahaha, no matter how powerful a brother is, he will still be bullied in front of his sister. It's so true! Very nice to look at. M( =∩王∩= )mHappy Year of the Tiger

It's really interesting, and I was so cute by the interaction between the siblings. I really hope that my brother, Mumu, will be the male protagonist. QAQ. For this book, I found a few sister-brother CP novels and read them, because I was really afraid that I wouldn't make it. Emmmm I really don't understand the plot development now. The sister and brother have been looking forward to CP for a long time. Now they just cut off their love, are they planning to take the CP-free path? (Sad So sad… I hope I can recover [crying][crying] And it seems like a comment? I can't find it either, it's weird

It's very interesting and doesn't make me have the urge to skip chapters. There's no character who looks like the male protagonist. I don't know if it's a CP-free novel, but it's classified as ancient romance, so I'm quite curious about the role of the male protagonist.

I think it's quite interesting. The heroine is not particularly powerful at the beginning, but slowly becomes stronger. I really like the interaction between the heroine and her brother, I like the heroine practicing with her brother, and I like how the brother is sometimes helpless towards the heroine. I have read Chapter 116, and there is no male protagonist yet. I just don't know if there is a male protagonist. I really like this kind of subject matter. It is very comfortable to read and not very confusing. I like to read this kind of simple novels now.

OMG, it looks good. I hope the author can update it soon! ! !

I like it very much. The heroine came up step by step. She is not the kind who is invincible at the beginning. There are also family scenes. I can only say that it is very good.

It's great, very beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, I hope the heroine and her brother get together! ! ! ! , But the villain An Tong is a bit miserable, she just likes the wrong person, Qiu Jichen is not destined to the heroine, but this is not important, the important thing is to let the heroine and her brother be together! ! !

Is one of my favorite novels at the moment

This book is so good. As a bookworm of three years, I didn't jump at all. When I was a little bit disinterested, I read the whole book. The rest of the book didn't jump over me willingly, which really surprised me.

It's exciting and worth watching. Does the heroine have CP? I forgot, here are some of my opinions: I think the author can greatly modify the effects of those foods. Those effects are too great for others. They can casually enhance physical fitness and enhance abilities. Then not everyone can become an immortal. It's just an opinion. If you don't like to read what I say, don't read it.

It's great. I can't wait to read the next one. Please give me more support from the author.

The early part was well written, but later on when it was revealed that the male protagonist was Mu Yun, I was still a little shocked. Personally, I was more attracted to Qiu and the female protagonist. When I saw the male protagonist confessing his feelings to the female protagonist, I couldn't wrap my head around it. If you like to watch sister-brother romance, you can read below.

It's good to watch, highly recommended (but not everyone likes to watch it, so don't criticize it, it's just a personal preference)

Oops, I'm very satisfied with the ending. Haha, the relationship between sister and brother is perfect. This article on cultivating immortality is very good. The whole family has a system for traveling through time, just to save this world of immortality. It worked in the end. They are also good friends with the male and female protagonists of the original novel. Recommended I have also started the exciting journey of the next book

I feel that the plot of this book is quite good. Qiu is considered to be the second male lead. I feel that the sibling relationship in this book is relatively natural. In fact, as long as I look at the timeline, I will find that the relationship between the heroine and Mu Yun is not unexpected. Mu Yun knew that he and the heroine were not relatives in the ruins, but they stayed in the ruins for five years, and then in the outside world for several years, so more than five years was enough for Mu Yun to confirm his feelings for his sister. The biggest flaw of this book is actually that after Mu Yun came out of the ruins, he took An Tong with him and went to the Demon Sect alone. He thought about Xianyun but didn't tell Xianyun about various things, but overall it was good.

The heroine is very hard-working, and the plot is also very funny. It is different from other novels of the same type, and the subject matter is novel. In short, I like it very much!

It's quite interesting. Although the heroine is a chef, she doesn't write about cooking all the time, or even just copy the recipes. Instead, she focuses on how the heroine practices, and makes the knife skills appear reasonable. Disclaimer: The author changed the male protagonist midway, and the male protagonist is the unrelated brother of the female protagonist! ! ! (Although I personally feel that the author never wanted to pair up the heroine and Qiu from the beginning)

It's so good to watch. I thought the male protagonist was Qiu Jichen. I almost gave up on the article. I felt like there was no sense of CP here. After reading the comments, it turns out that my younger brother is the male protagonist. I really like it [Adore][Adore][Adore] I love it.

It feels pretty good for now, I hope the following episodes will be more and more exciting

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good! ! ! ! ! Although it is not very sweet, it is rich in plot. The heroine's character is neither vicious nor saintly. Treat the enemy very hotly. The author writes the characters very well, and the word count is not too high. Male protagonist: Lu Muyun Female protagonist: Lu Xianyun

It feels pretty good, the heroine has a special plot. I don't understand why the heroine has an emotional line. Even if she has an emotional line, she is stronger anyway. Why is it the one named Qiu? I'm speechless.

I discovered this book after finishing it, so cool! There aren't any big flaws, right? It's just a suspense at the end, and isn't it just the two realms of immortality and mortals from beginning to end? Where did the Three Realms come from? Could it be the world before time travel?

It's great, unlike the kind where the male protagonist appears from the beginning. Then the male protagonist is much stronger and shows off in various ways. It's very simple and basically revolves around the heroine and her brother. The only flaw is that there are too few scenes of the parents. And don't let it end badly. I've seen too many crested and pig-tailed ones. Hope the author is great. (◍•ᴗ•◍)

A very nice novel. The plot is also very good, without the clichéd plots such as intrigue, conspiracy, and killing of fellow sects that are common in immortality novels. Moreover, because the heroine and her parents traveled through time and changed the fate of the original hero and the second hero, everyone was happy with the ending, which made me happy. It would be great if the heroine's parents had another son, and she would have a child with Mu Yun in the finale😁

It's very beautiful. I think the family interaction between my brother and Xianyun is very heartwarming, but there is no lack of exciting fighting scenes. Qiuqiu's sense of justice and brainstorming ability are really amazing haha, but I really can't stand the little witch An Tong and our brother [crying]

Sorry, it took me so long to comment. This book is probably the most natural sister-brother romance book for me to transition into. I especially like the second half where the older sister is rushing in front and the younger brother is protecting the back.