Raging Tides of the Rift Sea: My Girlfriend Is a Mecha Warrior

In the high sky, which was as red as blood, the wind howled, thunder and lightning flashed, and torrential rain poured down. Someone has cold eyes, holding a thunderous black gun, with murderous intent, cutting across the sky with one person's power, the black dragon roars at the moon, and breaks seven stars in a row! Some people are desperate and risk their lives, just to help the people in front of them and their hearts move forward, but they grow old after despair! There is someone who is as powerful as a rainbow, with silver armor and red makeup, a big halberd, and long hair flying. Facing the endless ferociousness, he alone controls the empty city, and says boldly, with Xuanyuan here, he can't even think of taking another step forward! There are even more people who fit their bodies into the sky and use their souls to purify the world, eliminate dust and eliminate evil spirits, wear peerless white dresses and have no regrets. There is a thunder sword unsheathed, a black sickle flying across the sky, a light feather washing away the world, an ice soul imprinting on the heart, a rock shield protecting it, and a mist wind howling. They and they protected the pure flames that would never return, turned into soaring phoenixes, and roared at the high blood moon, called human beings. But the bright fire has since disappeared from the eyes of the world. Never come back. Then he left and never came back. That is an era called the past, and it is also our era. People choose to forget painful memories, but I want to remember them and pass them on forever. I want to make it into a game so that people who come after us can experience and witness the story that belongs to us. What name should I give? I remember the air battleship named Christine, that was the beginning of our journey. I decided on this name. You think so too, right? ——Lin Yiyi's "Christine's Making Memoirs"

It seems pretty good so far, but there are some minor problems, such as the worldview is too big in the early stages and the attempt to express the entire grand worldview is too much, which will confuse readers and make many points difficult to understand. It is best to slow down the pace. Secondly, for the explanation and naming of various things, it is more appropriate to use nouns that are more understandable. Nouns specially designed to appear "epic" will make people look confused. Maybe a few people are pursuing this feeling because they can understand it, but this will make it difficult for a large number of people to understand in the early stage, so they will just read the next book. There is also the portrayal of the protagonist. Can the portrayal of the protagonist's character be deepened? The model of the entire protagonist has not become very clear after I read the more than 20 chapters that have been updated so far. On the contrary, what makes me feel more clear is the two people [the heroine] and [Ye Qiangwei], the protagonist. The portrayal of the protagonist is the top priority, and there are many ways to take advantage of it. For example, the protagonist of many film and television dramas has a personal return. Maybe the author has this idea, but this will be written later, but for now, the description of the protagonist needs this individual to come back to fill it, or there is a better way to write it. That's all I can think of for now, looking forward to the follow-up, I'll give it four stars.

The title of the book is unattractive and the girlfriend in the back is actually... A bit cliché but! The plot is really top-notch and the writing is a masterpiece.

The world view is grand and the plot has ups and downs. The author writes very well. I hope the author will work hard. But why so few people read it? I don't understand. As long as it doesn't end badly and the plot is complete, this book will definitely become a god. I look forward to the day when the author becomes a god. Don't forget me.

I gave it five stars because the author's avatar is that of a milk duck. May the fire be passed on and fight for all the good things in the world.

It is a pity that so few people have read such a good book. I highly recommend everyone to read this book, the content is relatively novel. Don't look at the cover, this book has little to do with Honkai Impact. There are also quick updates from Southeast.

If I changed the name to a nicer name, it would not be read by so few people and the ratings would be low. If I hadn't been looking for books with unpleasant names, I really wouldn't have been able to find them. Tomato has many well-written but unknown novels, this is one 😂😂😂

It's very good. I hope the author doesn't go to the palace. I will keep reading it! ^O^

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I have an unclear but powerful feeling