Refund for Being a Disciple: Isn't It Reasonable to Become a God Automatically After Becoming a Disciple?

The content is exciting but not boring, and there is nothing disgusting about it. I think if the protagonist is more motivated and there are more dangerous but exciting plots, the content can be more substantial. However, I think that the character of the protagonist and the treasures he gives to his disciples every time are too subtle for me. First of all, the protagonist has too many problems, which will make people have no sense of crisis, and the level of excitement will also decrease. I suggest that each time the enhancement is made, more treasures that fit the protagonist's current situation will be added, so that the protagonist's role can be saved at a certain moment, and the urgency and excitement of the content will be much better. I don't think we should remove some progress that makes people feel boring, such as the protagonist's physical enhancement progress. However, if the progress is too slow, the effect will not be reflected, and it will be really boring. I suggest that you either progress faster, or make the enhancement of the physical effect better, for example, at a critical moment, the physical effect saves the protagonist's life. Oh, by the way, don't have too many plots that are too depressing or infuriating. In this way, if we remember a certain plot that makes us feel bad, the overall rating will be much worse. It is difficult to control the plot of suppressing first and then promoting, not to mention that your subject matter is not suitable for suppressing first and then promoting. You must make readers happy. Your article mainly makes readers happy and has some inexplicable joy in the progress of your apprentice, so it will be better to write more content about the progress of your apprentice. Overall, this book is very well written, and the content is not too tortuous, but it made me feel really happy, both in the strength of my apprentice and in my own invincibility.

The writing is very good, please hurry up and get the Dragon Balls together.

Double the money back, this is the best book I have ever read. This guy's writing is really good, but can you please turn over the story about the main character eating Shui Yue Wang's soft rice? I really want to see those people get slapped in the face. Please turn it over if the author sees it.

After three days of reading dozens of novels, this one is of good quality. It's so hard for me.

The author greatly hopes that you can continue to write and don't end it and don't get depressed because of some people's comments! Come on, I will always support you!

This book is very good and has been completed. The overall progress of the story is very fast and the plot does not drag out. Nearing the end, the author also filled in all the pitfalls in the front. Overall, it is a relatively good-looking book, recommended by old bookworms.

Currently, I have read Chapter 169. At the beginning, when I saw the author's name, I felt familiar. After reading the author's book, I realized that the author's first book was one I had read before. At the beginning, I was deceived by the program team, and I was alone in a city. Later, I got a plug-in, established a territory, and got handwriting. The center of the city was the mother tree. I seemed to see the protagonist get the heart of Atlantis. Compared with the first book, this book is more beautiful. I read it in two days and made progress😜. This book is really good and beautiful! I'm following it!

The more I read this book, the more comfortable I feel. It is very contagious and attractive. I just hope that the author will not be like some people who have finally written a wonderful beginning and then stop updating again.

Water Moon King yyds, don't open a harem

It's been a long time since I've read a novel about game possession like this. Come on, author.

I have been chasing it until now and have never stopped. Xiao Ming has never stopped creating. This is a good work and worth reading. I am his fan and a reader. In the future, I will still follow the growth and maturity of his works. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง Xiao Ming.

It's very pretty. Don't collapse. Come on.

This book is very well written, and the early setting is quite attractive. I didn't feel tired or bored in the later stages, and I actually finished reading it in one sitting. It's very rare. It has a beginning and an end, and it only takes a few chapters to fill in all the holes of the protagonist's origin. Unlike some novels, where it takes dozens of chapters to play a passerby and a minor character, and dozens of chapters to write about the origin, this novel is very good.

Very beautifully written. The author is so good that he doesn't even let us read the advertisements. 

The language is humorous, imaginative, clear in thinking, clear in content, concise and refined without being edgy or greasy, and is well received. This book seems refreshing, comfortable, not depressing, and has good reviews. Special, recommend it.

This book can be said to be outstanding among similar books. Regardless of the driving, the plot, and sometimes it is not the car, it is time to take off, but it is not annoying. I rarely give five stars. Generally, I am afraid that the author will be proud, so I give 4 stars.

It's quite good-looking, and there's no heroine and no ambiguity. It's very annoying if I don't have a clear relationship with that girl.

The subject matter is very good, the plot clues are gentle but not boring, there are witty and humorous parts, and there are also passionate parts. Although it is not high-spirited, it is not mediocre. It makes me feel plain and comfortable while reading. I like this book very much, but there are too few updates. Good luck to the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's very interesting to read. You will never feel bored no matter in the early stage or after. Although the plot uses some old routines, it is used vividly. It is a very interesting book. I give it five stars because the upper limit is only five stars.

It's very well written. I didn't really like reading this type of book before, but this book by the author is so original and unique that it's quite interesting.

Great writing, keep up the good work bah bah bah bah

Overall it's good, with a single female protagonist, 11 apprentices, and a pretty good ending. The middle section is really depressing, and the pace in the later stages is tight. If you like this kind of apprenticeship story, you can check it out. The presence of the system in the article is also relatively low, and you can't see the system unless you upgrade.

The writing is very good, the writing style is good, 9/10, you can read it. But the whole book is full of very subtle book-eating situations. In the book of Magic Sword, Prophet Luolan said that these people were afraid that they would not affect the overall situation. As a result, there were more people than this in any subsequent trap. The stronger the protagonist's ability, and found that the opponent could no longer play, he could only secretly strengthen the opponent, and various gods made secret moves. All kinds of contraband are broken through on the spot. Logically speaking, the fox is really standing here to fight against the opponent and directly shoot the opponent to death. As long as he has a deeper conspiracy, he will not dare to let it go. He can only say a few words at most. Then it will be over if he decides on the breakthrough before the battle. To put it bluntly, it is to give the protagonist room to play and turn the tide. Then I found that the opponent added too much, so I started to strengthen my own side. Then if it didn't work, I would assassinate to solve it. To be honest... I think there is a more reasonable solution than this mechanical deity. Why did the Dark Elf, the villain of the Council of All Races, die before being exaggerated? Why was there still a wave of cleansing? I just want to see her die miserably. Overall, 1 point is deducted, and the overall rating is 4 stars.

Finally finished watching (listening) and feeling a little tired In the early stage, the game settings and world view felt very incompatible. The integration of the copy with the whole world is also very interesting. The mid-term plot and early setting will go further and further, and the reading experience will be improved to some extent. Tribute (stitch) to a lot of classics? You can see a lot of skill settings and so on that you have seen before. I have to say it is quite interesting. Later in my life, I found myself listening to books and it was very painful. I was hovering on the edge of not being able to listen anymore and felt a little boring. Twelve disciples still feel like too many and the focus will be too scattered. It's not bad, not that bad, but I can't say there's anything amazing about it. The return category is indeed too easy to obtain, and there is no difficulty. Bon voyage Readers with average reading requirements can try to take a look But don't have too high expectations

It can create a certain degree of personality for most of the supporting characters and villains, instead of forcibly setting up some unrealistic cut-scene characters for the sake of the plot. This alone sets it apart from other online novels. Moreover, the writing style can be funny, but it can also be serious when it comes to shaping the atmosphere. The plot and settings are very relevant and rigorous. It can be seen that the author has written a complete outline and written the book well. This is also a quality that many online articles do not have. In short, I can see the author's passion and sincerity in writing a book, which is rare. Five stars is the first book review on Tomato. The last few dozen chapters were subpar, and they were obviously too late and ended hastily.

The plot clues in the article are very good, but the author seems not very good at writing lyrically. I hope the author can improve it. The characteristics of this novel are obvious. If the writing is better, it may become a popular book. The main reason is the sharpness of the writing style.

Not bad, not too bad, the plot is good, and the emotional line makes me envious. Especially if I have 12 apprentices, I like it to be lively, no more, no less. I believe that the author's writing style can be controlled and will not be unfinished. Come on author! [Please update]

The setting of this book is very rigorous, and the pitfalls in the early stage are completely filled in the later stage. The emergence of the system is also expected. The character development of each character is very good. The motivations of both the villain and the protagonist group are very reasonable, and the combat power is not overstated. A novel worth reading.

The story is very good. The story of the collision of two worlds has created a world view from the early stage. The beginning of the invincibility of the protagonist is also very rounded. It looks very interesting. Come on, update as soon as possible.

Overall it's good, but I personally don't like the love plot. If there was no love story, I could still watch it.