The Itch of a Long Marriage

This book is well written. It creates a male protagonist who is upright, kind, capable, devoted to his feelings, and able to be clean and self-reliant in this colorful world, which is rare in real life. The heroine likes to be clever and take advantage of others but doesn't want to pay the price. Such women also exist in real life. As a suspense novel, the overall plot is reasonable and not divorced from life, which is the most important thing. The language of the work is fluent, and the author's writing skills are quite good. Let's talk about some shortcomings. The dialogues of the characters in the book should not be like giving a report. They should be formal and formal, and should use more colloquial expressions. For example, when Yunfei's daughter Lele speaks to adults, she shouldn't add "xxx, okay" and the like.

What I most hope is that Nana and her ex-boyfriend Yu Wei did not cheat on each other, and that they just ended their emotional entanglement with a hug or a polite kiss when they broke up. After Nana Yunfei divorced for the sake of calm, after in-depth investigation, she discovered the culprit and the reason for the conspiracy to destroy their family. The two worked together to defeat the conspiracy, the bad guy was punished, and the couple reconciled and remarried.

The author's writing is good, there are no supernatural powers or golden fingers, only the conflict and struggle of holding a jade and its guilt, a typical ethics drama. It's just that the novel depicts the villain in a bad shape for the sake of plot, which inevitably arouses some readers' dissatisfaction. Whether fast food literature writes Return of the Dragon King or Hamlet depends on the author's choice. . .

Well written, I believe Nana did not cheat, but I think a divorce is still needed, because marriage cannot tolerate lies, nor can it tolerate mental cheating. When the spirit cheats, the physical body will be too.

The writing is smooth. The protagonist Shangguan Yuntian is full of positive energy. It's a pity that Nana didn't cherish every step and went astray. It is a pity that the love between husband and wife is exhausted by lying. I hope the two will get back together regardless of their past grudges.

Very cruel, very realistic, the true situation of today's society,

Read more than one hundred and seventy chapters. It was found that neither the male nor female protagonists realized the importance of "trust". From this, I feel that Nana's understanding of marriage is naive. Reminder: If the hero and heroine want to remarry, the question is not whether Nana is innocent or not, nor how much they love each other. The key lies in how Nana rebuilds the hero's trust in herself. Note: The male protagonist is different from the author and reader. He doesn't have a God's perspective, so he can't be sure that Nana is indeed innocent in many cases. Many times, the male protagonist's understanding of information only comes from the female protagonist's confession. However, based on previous experiences, the male protagonist's trust in the female protagonist has dropped to freezing point. It will be an extremely slow and difficult process for the heroine to rebuild the trust of the hero. Reminder: This should become the focus of the subsequent conflicts in this book and the highlight for readers. Trust is the cornerstone of married life. Even if the two fall in love again and remarry. If the male protagonist still can't believe it, whenever Nana speaks, he must first think about "whether it is credible" in his mind. If every time Nana goes on a business trip, the male protagonist will be on tenterhooks. If there is even the slightest suspicion or misunderstanding, the male protagonist will become angry and lose his temper. In this case, the remarriage between the two people will inevitably not last long. Expectation: In the follow-up, the author can create a wonderful plot around the conflict point of "recasting" trust.

The character creation is quite successful. The male protagonist is really tolerant and generous, full of positive energy, and very restrained. However, this also shows that the female protagonist is quite impersonal. The male protagonist has obviously done nothing wrong and puts herself very low. The female protagonist also acts like you don't understand me and is unwilling to say anything to the male protagonist. She does not regard the male protagonist as a life partner at all (whether it is before or after marriage, I can only say that I look forward to how it will be dealt with in the future.

I have read more than 280 chapters so far, but this novel is the weakest novel I have read so far. The plot is also quite good, and the male and female protagonists and positive energy are also well written.

I have read more than 30 chapters and it is well written. It is quite good in this genre. Unfortunately, it is still too short. I plan to save up some time and continue reading. I also suggest that the author advises readers in the book not to give spoilers in book reviews or chapter descriptions. This kind of book is boring if it is spoiled.