Rise from Civilian Pokémon

I am a new writer who has loved novels since I was a child. I hope my books can give everyone a little more fun when they are bored.

Don't pay too much attention to reconciliation, what you write is reality, not a game

It's so beautiful. When the teacher was teaching, he said to use an elf around level 10, but he ended up with a level 55 elf, which almost tied the protagonist's level 10 elf? I can only give it five stars, otherwise I would definitely give it 100 stars! I can't just disgust myself! Take a look at it more

I don't understand why Dianxi uses the light of destruction. Isn't this the exclusive skill of the Eternal Flower? Isn't this the same as other elves using Diancie's Diamond Storm?

The author thinks that Tadpole can be special. For example, it can have two personalities, the fast-swimming frog is aggressive, and the bullfrog is cheerful, and can be switched at will. (Also, please update the author soon!)

I don't know why, but it's a good thing

In fact, from the perspective of the work, I think this book is not worthy of five stars, but in my opinion, the 6.9 Rating is indeed not the true level of this book. Giving five stars is just to increase the rating a little bit. It can be seen that the author is still serious about writing this book, but there are still many shortcomings, such as too many battle plots, insufficient description of daily life and side plots, and the author is not stable enough when it comes to the protagonist's strength improvement. For example, I think it is more appropriate to have a level of around 35 when entering college, so that the heroine's strength in her junior year is more consistent with the setting of over 50 levels. The most important problem is that the time in college passed too quickly (it feels like the author wanted to finish it quickly). This stage should be the focus. The writing is too hasty, and the supporting roles are not vivid enough (especially the heroine, who has not been released for a long time). There are still some problems with the setting of the article. There are many questions, but I still hope the author can work hard and write a good book Forgot to mention, I think the real level of this book is about 8 points.

This book is quite good, but the only flaw is that there are too few people reading it. It's not interesting to read alone. I thought about recommending the book.

It's okay, but waterfall climbing was written as a special attack move by you.

The author can write this book slower, but the current speed is too slow, and each chapter is too short [please update] The pace is really too slow, it's almost 100 chapters and only around level 16

I really like this kind of warm daily elf writing that accompanies each other to grow up. Although the author's writing is not satisfactory in some places due to the newbie, it is still very good in general. The author is also very open-minded. He will correct the basic problems mentioned in the comment area and listen to reasonable suggestions. Keep up the good work, author.

It's a pity that the electric type has been caught, otherwise the male protagonist would have missed it. Zeraora's color scheme is very similar to that of the kitten monster, both yellow, black and blue. The male protagonist bought an elf egg that was identified as a kitten monster and hatched Zeraora. You can write about the rainy day team, otherwise it would be good to have a skirt lady.

How do you explain the two forms of the author's protagonist, the elf? It's impossible not to be discovered by others. Is it possible that the author plans to cultivate a trumpet (mascot) later?

May I ask who the heroine is?

I think there still has to be a supporting character of comparable strength, otherwise the protagonist will be too invincible. Ye Tian is pretty good, but he just can't have better luck than the protagonist, otherwise it would be a bit outrageous. After all, Ye Tian is not the protagonist.

Very good, author. Come on (﹡ˆoˆ﹡)

I hope the author can stick to his hobby, come on

The author is awesome, answer every comment. But don't reply too much and use too many characters [laughter]

I want to say something, if you are fighting against an organization like Team Rocket in the wild, don't you want a big and meaty elf like Boscodora or Big Steel Snake? Of course, if you only go to play games, you will pretend that I didn't say anything.

I have read a lot of elf books, and this one is really good. (If you want to read cool articles, turn left) I hope the author can describe more skills and pay attention to the development of the protagonist

Cheng Ye CP is the eternal god

Big cheers for the author!

Come on keep it up

Well written, cheers to the author

Not bad, very good. Let me ask weakly, "Is Bai Yuling the heroine?" A female junior, holding a golden brick. [Laugh][laugh][laugh]

Why does Ye Tian know that his elf has no genetic skills? The protagonist has a system that can see it and the explanation is reasonable. But what about Ye Tian?

Please make the author of Rainy Day Team super cool.

It's a very good book. If you continue to read it, it will still be good. It is the second book I have read after "The Elf in Pants".

A very good book, don't skip it later

The author makes a Thorny Dragon King