The Life of a Talisman Master Starting from Xiao Bai

New book is opening a pit, please give me more advice

Very well written, especially the last few chapters. Author, where do you live? Let's get together when we have time, haha😃

It's so beautiful, but I'm really too lazy to comment 😶

Very good, the setting is very good, but the fighting scenes are a bit bland and can be improved. In addition, the protagonist now lacks a motivational goal. Anyway, no villain can defeat Fu Zun, so the protagonist's sense of urgency is not that strong, so the main line feels not clear enough. Overall, I appreciate this theme very much: using science to explain the Tao of Talisman, in the future it can be the entire path of cultivating immortals. It is foreseeable that the protagonist will develop unique Fu Dao technology in the future. (Why do runes have to be drawn on small pieces of paper? Can't they be drawn on metal to make an engine?) One thing that seems very strange now is that I press the accelerator button on the novel from time to time, and from time to time I abbreviate a paragraph and then continue writing. It seems very uncomfortable. It just breaks the sense of the picture abruptly. Moreover, this book has too few climaxes. I couldn't light it up after reading it for a long time. Poor rhythm control

Chapter 71: Damn it, it's a knife. Chapter Seventy-Two: Damn it, he's resurrected, he draws his sword and looks around at a loss.

I have only read the first part so far. Overall, it is pretty good. I would like to give it five stars for encouragement. Let me talk about my feelings about reading this book: Maybe it is because the author is not very good at writing emotions, so it is difficult for me to get into it. Then it makes me feel that I am just reading a book, instead of immersing myself in the world and experiencing the experience of the protagonist in the book.

A very wonderful book with a very unique idea. The protagonist uses mathematics, physics and chemistry to realize his own power and reflect his own value. There are many women, but no heroine? That's probably it. There is no Madonna in the whole book, which is great! Also, when you read a book, read it carefully. It is recommended not to read the comments. The comments will affect your reading mood. It is fate to meet the author's book in the group of books. If you like it, read it. If you don't like it, just quit it silently. Don't complain in the comment area. It will have a bad influence. Finally, I would like to express my gratitude to you for bringing joy to my ordinary life [send heart][send heart][send heart]

The author hasn't updated for several days. Please give me a response, at least don't make me wait meaninglessly!

I don't know why you think Bai Xue is bad, I think this girl is cool, It's not harmful to control. Moreover, it's just a guess, and there is no confirmation. The original text also states that Bai Xue realized something was wrong with her, nor did she find that she was being controlled. After all, she was fine when chatting with the protagonist. No one could have imagined this. @Author, I want to ask one thing, will Bai Xue turn back into a little lolita?

Overall, it's good, but I have a small suggestion that I hope the author can see. When describing a woman's appearance, can the author use an objective third-perspective external description instead of a subjective description from the protagonist's perspective?

To be honest, most of the plot points with flaws have been criticized by the author himself, so there are not many comments, but the plot and characters are really good. Also, the author can't really be a high school student or just entering college.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I think the first chapter is very good. Although there are some minor problems, they do not affect the overall feeling. After the 100th chapter, the pace suddenly starts to rush. Although there is description and the story is good, it seems to be released in a hurry. As others have said, sometimes it feels like the accelerator button has been pressed. Maybe it's just an illusion? I will continue reading dozens of chapters. ≥≤ I feel very good overall now٩(๑òωó๑)۶

I'm reading chapter eighty-eight now. Overall it's pretty good, but there is a problem. Some plots appear too suddenly. At least two or three times when the male protagonist almost died, I felt it was very sudden, especially Liu. I think the main problem is this one! The pace is too fast! It's the kind of thing that you can't understand unless you look carefully. I still don't even understand why Su Jin is a tail. I feel that this tail can be found because of the protagonist's halo, which made Su Jin die near the protagonist, which happened to make Su Jin become a tail. It feels like it's too forced for this tail. I think it would be better if we rescue Su Jin, obtain some key evidence, and then assist Ji Shi Tang in the investigation, or help Ji Shi Tang defend the family later, and then use this as an opportunity to find a tail (although it is not much better in fact) How to say it? I feel like I really went off topic later on. I feel like the main plot is not about the male protagonist using the mathematics, physics and chemistry knowledge he learned in his previous life to draw symbols to become stronger, but about the fox as the main plot. There are still a few pictures to go until the finale, which I really don't understand. I've finished reading it. Overall, it's too fast. The pace is too fast. It's easy to lose track of it. A few tails come too easily.

The biggest advantage of this book is that it uses scientific knowledge to explain Fu Tao. There are many ways to explain it, which is very innovative. The biggest shortcoming is that the world view is incomplete and the world layout is unreasonable. In terms of characters, the characters are incomplete, not distinct, and not very attractive. The plot arrangement is not dramatic enough and the coherence is average. Four stars is okay, five stars is almost meaningless. Come on, author, I hope to write more good books [Like][Like][Like]

It's quite interesting. Scientific cultivation is actually well-founded, hahaha. Unfortunately, the ending is too hasty, and there are some typos and typos in the names that the author needs to catch. Finally, I sigh again, the ending is too rushed, otherwise I would give it five stars.

The introduction doesn't say it's a single female protagonist, why did she become the male protagonist?

The story is very unique, the IQ is online, the writing is smooth, and the ending is a little too unexpected! Overall positive reviews!

It's wonderful. It's wonderful to transform the rules of the world of cultivation into practical scientific knowledge. The language is very bland and boring in places. The ending was a little hasty, and the plots of Jin Mingzhen, Chang Le and Miao Yin were not finished. Seeing that I kept talking about "the white fox in the upper world" and the like, I thought I would write a lot of actual plots about the white fox, but it turns out that the white fox has no role at all except to promote the plot. The fish scale sword also has no role. I was looking forward to it [face covering] At the beginning, I thought Ming Yue was the heroine, but at the end, the protagonist confessed to Bai Xue. It made me feel so uncomfortable. The protagonist's feelings for her were inexplicable. At the end, there was the setting of the eight-tailed white fox, and the souls of these eight tails exist independently and share the same body! It grosses me out [laughs awkwardly] I suggest the author not to write like this in the future. You have a single female protagonist in your profile. What's the difference between this setting and a harem? Just like a scam. But it's not hard for me to accept. After all, this so-called heroine really has no sense of existence. The explanation in the last chapter is also quite reasonable. It's still pretty ^ω^ The setting is quite good and the subject matter is novel. The description is not vivid enough, the plot is not tense enough, and the characters' emotions are not ups and downs enough. They are very flat. It has a sense of existence, but there are a lot of useless plots, which makes it cumbersome. The pace of the plot is a bit fast. The logic is smooth, the male protagonist's character is real and special, and I quite like it.

I like it. Compared with other fantasy books with brainless protagonists who are stronger, this book is very logical (other fantasy books are really hard to understand. Why can the protagonist be stronger than others without being reasonable because they are all human beings) [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

What? Read the comments: Is the heroine Bai Xue? I thought it was senior sister Mingyue...

I'll give it four stars. It's generally good. It's just that a few pictures at the end are duplicates of the previous ones. They look a little bit unsatisfactory. When the author updates more, I'll pay for it in installments and give it a fifth star.

Looks good, looks good, I hope you don't give up.

The writing is good, but the emotional line is rather sloppy, and the author's knowledge of mathematics, physics, and chemistry is limited. It seems that he is trying hard to show it. The ending may be a bit anxious, so the writing is more outline. However, the overall writing style is good and keeps people reading.

Come on, come on, come on! Don't stop! I have no choice but to go! No more sleep! Waiting for update😇

The author's writing style is quite humorous, but due to the author's writing skills, the advantages of this subject matter are not fully utilized.

Overall good, but the heroine is Bai Xue or Mingyue, I personally feel Bai Mao YYDS

Personally, I think 8.5 Is the limit. The core concept of the article is very good, including the beginning of the protagonist in the early stage. The failure is the plot of the heroine. It would be perfect if the author could enrich the plot. Please work harder.

It's quite fascinating. I read it in one sitting. It's novel.

The author's writing may seem soft and waxy, but upon closer inspection, it is powerful and powerful [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying], which is endlessly memorable and extremely exciting!

There are very few books on the subject of tomatoes. I hope the author will stick to it.