Genshin Impact *********

In terms of universal rationality, your idea is indeed feasible, but you still have to respect your own ideas and do not deny yourself because of interference from external objects, because what you are writing is a world, a non-realistic world that belongs to you. Do not change the settings you have made at will. This is like a contract. The content in the contract cannot be changed at will, because if you change it at will, the contract will be invalid. This is like the world you wrote. If you change it at will, the world you wrote will collapse. 🐶

It's quite interesting. As long as the author can persevere, it won't collapse. Also, please work hard on writing!

Has anyone told me that this is the first time Mr. Diluc has appeared ten times in a row? He is not normal.

Author, if you read it, I really hope to get your response. I have always liked your book from the beginning to the end, whether it is the setting or the plot. The protagonist's hard work to defeat the gods and demons in his heart, and the first time he slaughtered the sea ghosts all made me think that he is a determined person. But in the last two chapters, when I saw the scene where he peed in fear, it was really hard for me. Suffer, a man's dignity has been completely lost from the moment he was frightened to pee. From then on, even if he is strong, he will not be able to face that person. No matter how you write about him in the future, we male readers will probably always define a label for him in our hearts - "a kid who was frightened to pee". I carry this label because I like "original" books Therefore, there is a kind of disgust with a little bit of reluctance. No matter what you write in the future, the author, if you make him stronger and kill the shadow and the general, it will be okay. You cannot remove this label in our hearts, but it is impossible that you will not write the shadow to death. At most, you can let the protagonist overcome his fear. This will make me feel more disgusting, so I regret that at the beginning One of my favorite novels has become like this. I don't know if the author is a girl and doesn't understand the dignity and glory of men. But if the author publishes other books, I hope you can listen to my opinion. In my opinion, if a man is scared to the point of peeing, then he has lost everything in his life (after all, all supporting characters in anime who are scared to the point of peeing have no hope)

This is the only Genshin Impact novel that suits my taste. The others were either harem or harem, which made me vomit.

The only Genshin Impact novel that suits my taste so far, I hope it doesn't suck

It looks good. I have saved it and will update it. Give you a five star and write more chapters.

This book is very nice, but the author is a bit lazy and doesn't read much.

Your article is not decorated with gorgeous language, but with plain truth. The emotions move the readers, the sentences are smooth and coherent, and the psychological portrayal and details are The descriptions are very successful and give people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary perspective Speaking of it, the selection of materials is very novel, the angles are clearly visible, and the language is plain but not Losing style, concise and full of meaning, it can be called a model of the article! This article The article shows extraordinary literary skills in the ordinary, it can be said that every word is Pearls, every classic, have reached a height that is elusive for us. Degree, from an artistic point of view, this article still needs to be improved, but Its meaning is far greater than success itself. And there are punctuation marks The application is just right. I read your article word for word Finally, my heart couldn't be calm for a long time! How could there be anything else in this world? Such an insightful article? I couldn't believe my eyes. You let me I deeply understand the saying "There are people outside the world, and there is a sky outside the sky". After finishing the article, I didn't dare to reply easily. I was worried that I would be vulgar. Words will taint the rare articles in this world. But I still reply , because I feel that if I can't stay behind such a wonderful article If I leave my own footprints, it will become a regret in my life. Please forgive me My selfishness! No matter how gorgeous the words are, it can't be described. How wonderful this article is, so I just want to say: your novel So touching! How about......... Another chapter? (◦˙▽˙◦)

The Jade Emperor caressed the sword and sighed: "When I gave you this natal magic weapon, I didn't expect you to grow it much. After all, you were just a straw mat seller at the time." He stared deeply at Xuande and found that he really couldn't see through him. The Jade Emperor shook his head, "I didn't expect that you could practice it to this point, and even have 90% of the power of the Xuanyuan Sword!" It's just that little bit short!" Xuande remained silent, just waiting quietly for the Jade Emperor to finish. "Awesome!" Qihuo sighed in admiration, "If it can be improved again, wouldn't it be another peerless sword?" Xuande was silent. He knew all this. "However." The Jade Emperor changed his subject, "It is difficult, too difficult to break through this last line. Your sword incorporates your five strongest ways, so it needs to be refined with five kinds of original divine flames for decades before it can become an existence like the Xuanyuan Sword. The Jade Emperor looked at Xuande, but found that his expression had not changed much. The Jade Emperor couldn't help but said, "These five divine flames are the Crystal Flame, the Hunyuan Flame, the Fengluo Flame, the Tianxing Flame and the Sith Flame. I have the first one, and the remaining four are extremely rare. Even your ancestors never had them! Do you understand?" Xuande looked at the Jade Emperor and said, "I have the last four. Only the first one is missing. The Jade Emperor was stunned. How is it possible? ? How could he have it!? Could it be Kong Ming? The Jade Emperor raised his head and couldn't help but ask, "You came to me just for the crystal flame?" Xuande nodded and said, "Yes, I came here just for the water experience. " Hahaha!

Everything about the plot is good. I don't play Yuanshen but I still like this novel.

It's pretty good, but there were some changes that caught me off guard, such as: the maid joined the Knights, Mandrill's karma was cleared, and Barbara actually liked the good-looking "Barbatos" Finally, the protagonist actually regards Hu Tao as his wife! I can't stand this! The walnut is mine!

Author, please listen to me. Your article is not decorated with gorgeous language, but it impresses readers with plain and true feelings. The sentences are fluent, and the psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful in one go. It gives people a sense of aftertaste. From a literary point of view, the subject matter is very novel. The angle is clearly visible. The language is plain yet elegant. Simple yet meaningful. This article is a model article. The literary skills that show extraordinary in the ordinary can be said to be precious every word. Every sentence is a classic. It has reached a height that is beyond our reach. From an artistic point of view. This article could be improved. But his meaning is far greater than success itself. There is also the use of punctuation marks. Just right. After reading your article word for word, my heart cannot calm down for a long time. How could there be such insightful articles in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. You gave me a deep understanding of the saying "There are people outside the world, and there is a sky outside the world". After reading the article, I did not dare to reply easily. I was worried that my vulgar language would tarnish this rare article in the world, but I still replied because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints behind such a wonderful article, it would be a regret in my life, no matter how wonderful the article was with gorgeous words, so I just want to say, your novel is so touching! How about......... One more chapter?

In terms of general rationality, it is a good Genshin Impact fanfic, but sometimes what was said above is repeated below. For example, in the scene where Keli fried fish, the protagonist told Wendy that there was no eye of God, but after purifying Tevarin, Wendy was shocked that the protagonist did not have the eye of god. There are some minor bugs, but overall it's pretty good.

The directory cannot be pulled (◦`~´◦). One chapter a week is fine. I'll watch it next month! (*σ´∀`)σ

The reason why I gave it four stars is because I am afraid that giving it five stars may be considered as a scammer hired by the author. First of all, generally speaking, this book is very well written, and there is no point that I don't want to read. In other words, is it that kind of brainless? He writes very well every step of the way. I saw this book at the beginning, but I saw some people in the comments saying it was very bad, and then I didn't read it, because I thought it was just a random author who wrote things by himself in order to satisfy his own desires. But when I got bored, I took a look and found that he was not in the same situation as before. It's well written, and everything written is very deeply rooted in people's hearts. There are no superfluous things in the story that are completely irritable. What happened in the main plot can be said that the character of the protagonist is very good and the portrayal is very perfect. I don't have anything to comment on next. I mainly give it four stars. The reason is because I am afraid that the author will think that he invited a navy army, and the tone is pretty good.

It's okay~ As long as the plot doesn't break down, it's just for the review after all! 😏😏😏

Work overtime! Update as soon as possible, come on, I believe the author's hand can do it! ! !

In my opinion, most of the books in Tomato are yy➕brainless niche novels, but when I saw this one, I felt that it was better among Genshin Impact fans. It was much better than the ones next door. The characters and historical background were also well integrated into it. I didn't feel much embarrassment. It was okay. I used the word "not bad" to describe it. Okay, in the eyes of us old book readers, not bad is almost a very high rating. I hope you will continue to work hard in the future. The unique style of the characters must be felt. Those messy people next door are really good. You should at least study this game and think about the NPCs in this game.

This is the best feeling I have read among the Genshin Impact novels The author has updated it! ! ! Not enough! ! !

Where is my Rock King Diji? Give it back to me, Diji😡😡😡😡😡

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There is actually a book about Genshin Impact. The writing is good, but it is too short (disdain), as for that. . Definitely next time

It's really good, at least it's not that kind of start. Long Aotian is invincible directly. There's another thing about this. He slowly trains himself to become invincible. Personally, I still like this kind of book.

Hello author: I am a reader from a remote mountainous area. We are very poor in the mountainous area. The donkeys in the village production team are always exhausted. The author, I advise you to learn more from the donkeys in our village. We have to watch the donkeys every day to remind you. Will your conscience not hurt?

The following words did not meet my expectations.

Originally, what I wrote earlier was very good, and the character design didn't break down. But when I returned to Inazuma, the protagonist fell apart. Although Thor is also very strong, I don't think it would make me pee my pants. After I adjusted my mentality, I can still watch it. I hope it will get better and better in the future.

It's so beautiful, it makes you smile in bed.

The initial impression is quite good, with a mortal body comparable to gods.

This is the best Genshin Impact 2 I've ever read. Keep up the good work and don't miss out on the rest.