Mortals Are Cultivating Immortality and Guarding the Ruined Alchemy Room at the Beginning.

After ten years of fighting on the street, I still haven't written a good book. It's my first time to try mortal flow. I have many ideas and am very scared. I want to write this story seriously. In terms of details, some places may not have been well thought out when writing, but I hope you will understand! ! ! Regarding the plot, I hope everyone will correct me if it is unreasonable. If you can, I will correct it. If not, I will try to pay more attention to it later. Mutual encouragement!

It's well written, well laid out and well written. But the pace is a bit slow and the protagonist doesn't grow up fast enough.

The writing is good, the plot has ups and downs, and it also shows the protagonist's broad mind.

The storyline is fascinating

There is no love and affection, the family is short-lived, the protagonist is as smart and cunning as a fox, can endure loneliness, has many bloody encounters with death, and stumbles along the way, the plot has ups and downs, the writing is fluent and impressive, and it is still a masterpiece of cultivating immortals.

I have read a lot of cultivation novels, and I think this one is really good. The author is very imaginative and the plot is full of twists and turns, which is quite interesting. When I have nothing to do, I will open it and take a look. I don't think the emotional line is not obvious. I think it's obvious who the real heroine is. The main heroine is so powerful. It's impossible to fall in love with Su Twelve all at once. She must have experienced something together. The two of them lived and died together and gradually got to know each other. Su Twelve's character is actually not the type that easily likes others. I feel that such a long-term treatment is quite reasonable and very good [Like][Like]

Nice! But the protagonist has too many hardships, right?

Very good, I want to continue reading. Although it has shortcomings, the plot is still very exciting.

Overall, this book is pretty good and enjoyable to read. The psychological description of the characters is very good, but the plot is not perfect. You can't just fight across levels every time, then be seriously injured and healed like this. It's better to let the protagonist and the reader relax a little bit every once in a while. It would be better if the protagonist has more insights into life! Come on, author, keep working hard

The writing is wonderful, the plot is ups and downs, and exciting. It is also considered a good work in the world of immortality.

The plot is compact, the characters are vivid, the writing is vivid, the story is exciting, and the updates are slow. The post-baby content is becoming more and more procrastinating. Now it's enough to read only 20% of it, and my patience to catch up is almost gone.

I have read more than 600 chapters and come here to write a book review. From an overall perspective, the plot of this novel is well connected, and every foreshadowing is followed by plot echoes. It can be seen from this that the author still has overall logic and writes very seriously. The only shortcoming is that there are too many holes in the details and it is not rigorous at all. Maybe new book friends don't understand what I mean. You'll know after reading a few chapters. Generally speaking, this book is considered to be a medium-to-high-quality work on Tomato. When compared to the entire online literature on immortality, it can barely pass. Four stars

Very satisfied with this book. Too proud. It's a masterpiece

The plot is fascinating, cleverly conceived, and interlocking, making you want to stop reading it. So far, there is no unnecessary plot, and the characters are well portrayed. One of the best fantasy novels I have read in recent times.

The storyline is exciting and makes you want to read more. This book is worth reading.

There are more and more bad books. This software only has few good books. This is the only miracle left [laughs]

It's very beautiful, better than any other genre I've seen! At least for now.

Overall, it's okay, but the "hum" sentence made me feel too uncomfortable, but the author used it very smoothly. No matter what the situation or mentality, it always sounded like a "hum" [face covering] I once read a book, and the writer's use of "choking" was so good that I gave up the book with sobs [almost crying] [almost crying]

Great book! The plot has ups and downs, # is full of foreshadowing, and has climaxes one after another, which is exciting! The language is concise and the sentences are crisp! Characters are depicted with different images; gods, demons and immortals are included in the universe, good and evil are beautiful and ugly, and judgments are made immediately; intrigues and deceit are natural! It's logical to ascend to immortality! Haha, it's the most bloody fantasy novel I've ever seen with the greatest conflict and conflict between murder and treasure grabbing! [Cover face][cover face][cover face]

This book is really good, the plot and emotional description are unique and thought-provoking, and the writing is wonderful! It would be even more perfect if the details were strengthened! It's much better than those books with pig's feet and cocks blowing to the sky and full of harems! [Like][Like][Like]

Having no spiritual roots, carrying a blood feud, and carrying a valuable treasure, what kind of desperate situation is this! Fortunately, this kid is ruthless enough, tough enough, hardworking enough and lucky enough. Only then can you step into the path of cultivating immortality step by step. Qi condensation, foundation building, golden elixir, Nascent Soul, cough, climbing to a higher level is also inevitable.

Yes, it's wonderfully written. I don't want to go to work after reading it.

Compact structure. The plot is exciting and imaginative!

Yes, the novel begins to unfold gradually from point to line, and from line to surface. The protagonist gradually changes from weak to strong, and leapfrog battles are not too outrageous.

It's no different than Mortal Cultivation of Immortality and Immortal Deficiency. It's just that the update is too slow. If you can burst out occasionally, it will be enough to cover ten chapters a day. Four stars.

It's so beautifully written that I can't wait to read it in one sitting.

A very good novel, describing the extraordinary life of a person from a lower class background.

In the fantasy genres I watched in the past, the protagonists had extraordinary qualifications and were promoted quickly. Now this book starts from a stupid bird, and continues to work hard with luck, which feels pretty good. The rhythm is relaxed and relaxed. When I'm nervous, I can't stop watching it, and I stay up all night chasing it. There are also moments of relaxation that allow me to get a good night's sleep. Very cool

The plot is full of ups and downs, rich in associations and imagination, and the characters are well-developed and very attractive. The work is worth a look!

The overall structure is very good, and a lot of foreshadowing has been laid in the early stage, but there are also a few unreasonable parts, but overall it is still a very good work. It is also the longest novel I have followed online. There has never been a novel with more than 1,800 chapters. It's so long-winded. I only update 2 chapters a day. Forget 2 chapters. One chapter is only as long as a sheep's tail. What happened in one hour is something that the author couldn't finish in a month. I'm really convinced.