The Quick Travel System Has Been Plotting Against Me for a Long Time

I am a third-year junior high school student. I will take the high school entrance examination in a few months. In order to prepare for the exam, I may have some interruptions. Please forgive me! Although not many people have read this book, it can even be said to be very few, but it is better than nothing! I know what I did before was not very good, it could even be said to be terrible, but I am trying my best! Although it has no effect! After all, my original intention was just interest, because I suddenly had some inspirations and ideas. I don't know why I thought of these. I can only say that sometimes imagination can also create a book, haha! I would like to thank several friends (readers) for their good comments and gifts. This lets me know that there are still people who support my book! By the way, I also saw your reminders, there are quite a lot of them, tsk tsk, I have to say, I still have my charm! (Let me be narcissistic haha), I hope you can bless me and I will definitely pass the high school entrance examination! Hmm... The character plot in the first world is confusing, just skip it! Don't let the content of this world put you off! In fact, what I write later is pretty good hehe.

After reading the whole story, the author's writing is actually quite good. At least I didn't find it embarrassing or dramatic. My writing style is pretty good. I believe I will improve if I write a few more books. (Many authors get better as they write more.) But there are some places that I personally feel are inappropriate, so let me talk about them a little bit. One is the use of emojis. It's not that it can't be used, it's just that it appears in non-dialogue parts, which personally doesn't feel good. And even in the dialogue part, it is not used to communicate with normal people. Unless you are communicating with the system and the emojis should also be issued by the system (personal feeling) The second is the change of scene. Generally speaking, one line is empty between paragraphs, and two lines are enough when switching scenes. The third is the background and life experience of the characters. Various settings such as character settings and world view are best interspersed in the text (if they appear together, it will inevitably make readers feel cumbersome and they will glance at or even skip them). Of course, it's okay to write a separate part when writing the background story. Fourth, () should appear as little as possible. If you want to express the progress bar speeding up, you can use the time jump method. For example: XX years passed in a blink of an eye

The content of this book is quite good, especially when the author described the second world, I pictured it directly in my mind. Come on, author.

After reading the first plane, some words can be omitted. Come on, author!