Mortals Looking for Immortals

It's pretty good. The plot doesn't drag on. Some unimportant things are skipped directly. But the current version is simply not enough to watch.

It's particularly good. The protagonist's IQ is online and the author's logic is rigorous. The most important thing is that there are no messy emotional lines, and there is no brainless plot like falling in love with the protagonist after seeing a woman. The male protagonist in this article is affectionate and righteous, has good intentions but is not a saint, and must repay kindness and revenge. All in all, it suits my taste so well that there is no female protagonist so far. It's best to have no heroine. If the author likes to write about emotions, then a single heroine is fine. Don't use a harem in the later stages of such a good novel. What I like most about this article is that the protagonist's golden finger is not exposed. The author respects the readers and does not rub the reader's IQ on the ground. In many fairy tales, the protagonist's golden finger is easily exposed to others or is discovered. Another point is that there is warmth and goodwill in the cruel cultivation of immortality. The Xiaohua family from the same village as the protagonist, Mr. Shu who sacrificed his life to save the protagonist, the protagonist's master Sixth Elder, and the master-disciple relationship between Wu Yong and his apprentice. The most touching and disappointing thing is Mr. Shu. There is such a person in the Blood Demon Sect who saves the protagonist's life and teaches him how to make alchemy. He is simply a ray of light in the darkness.

It's much better than the one I just read: Mortals Cultivate Immortality.

This book is great! Great! Got it! ①He doesn't have any big golden fingers, the only thing he has is a gourd ②This book still has a single female protagonist. To be honest, there are not many books like this (although the female protagonist has not appeared yet) ③The progress of this book is not very fast. The protagonist only completed the construction of the foundation of heaven in more than 290 pictures, but it suits my appetite. Finally, I hope the author will update it soon!

Yes, there are shadows of several books, and the combination is good.

Not bad, quite smooth, a bizarre book

Yes, it's good so far because the protagonist's character is well-written, and the character Shu Lao is well-written (Chapter 38). The settings in some places are particularly unreasonable. The ninth level of Qi training is comparable to a statement and is ridiculous. There are only 38 chapters to read. I take back the preface. This is still a fucking garbage book. Damn it, more than 30 chapters for a sect competition are really good.

Well written, very enjoyable and not sloppy

It's still my favorite type. The content is relatively compact and interlocking.

It's really good, and the writing has the flavor of cultivating immortality.

It's super good-looking, but I hope the author won't rush the schedule too much, and write more carefully, so that the plot connection will be smoother. If there is a female protagonist, remember to set up a foreshadowing plot.

I sincerely recommend this article. The article is not procrastinating, the ideas are clear, the mind is open, and the ability is outstanding. There is not much fluff so far, and the plot setting is excellent! There are also very few emotional scenes with women, which is good!

The author's writing is pretty good. I personally think it's good. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

This book expresses many characters and their personalities with delicate writing. Although the plot is a little familiar, it is still remarkable.

It is already well written like this. It is the third good book among the many books I have read. The content is quite exciting and not cumbersome, and it is interlocking. I have the urge to read it all at once. I hope the author will update it faster.

Great, the plot is very attractive, not only is it not overly talented or impulsive, but it can also play an important role at every point.

It's very good. There is no heroine, no irritating emotional drama. The storyline is mainly interesting and not so boring. It makes me a person who likes to read enjoyable and dark stories and can continue to read it. I really don't care [salute]

Great book! The story plot has ups and downs and is exciting.

There's no heroine, it's not brainless, there's no sarcasm, and the plot is pretty good. If you check these points, it's better than 90% of books.

This book is very well written and can help me solve my book shortage. I won't tell you what's good about it, but you can read the comments section about what's bad. Nowadays, all professional trolls on Tomato won't let go if they catch the slightest fault. I advise you to read the book and not read the comments. Some people just like to criticize the author from a subjective God's perspective. I hope the author will not be affected and write well, maybe it will become popular later.

The book is still good. It took me just one Qi training period to write 291 chapters to build the foundation! It took too long! I saw Chapter 132 and really couldn't hold on anymore! After looking at the catalog, I ended up at 291...[Face covering] The writing is pretty good! It's just that the pig's feet are pressed too hard!

It's quite interesting. It's not a traditional immortal cultivation novel. The demon cultivator sect starts at the beginning, but I just feel that your demon cultivator is a bit too upright, and the techniques are quite normal. However, the plot is not bad, and it lays the early foundation for the protagonist. It is also an insect cultivator, which is quite rare. I have raised a lot of spiritual insects. The foundation building was slower in the past, and then started to progress faster. Overall, it is good.

I have expectations every day, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The writing is very good, but the "grandpa" appears in the last chapter. I hope he will disappear quickly. I hope to see the author continue to grow stronger through his own efforts.

It's a good book, but I couldn't stand it after reading it for a while. The pace was too slow. . Good Guys Chapter 291 just builds the foundation! But it is undeniable that this is a good book, and it is currently as exciting as A Mortal's Journey to Immortality.

Mortals cultivate immortality step by step, which is in line with common sense and is not exaggerated.

The aura of the protagonist is quite reliable, and it is interesting to see the steady development step by step.

The ideas are clear, the plot is vivid, the language is concise, and it is not muddled.

The writing is good, the article is smooth, and the plot is compact

No system, no harem, serious cultivation of immortality, beautiful!