Transmigrate Into a Book: The Big Shot's Persona Has Crumbled Again

New author, trying writing for the first time (>_<) I don't have much writing skills, it's just random writing! Please forgive me for the poor writing! (つд⊂)

This article tells the story of a pervert who broke up a little girl and left him alone. The pervert went through the book and looked for other replacements. Unexpectedly, the little girl awakened the system and followed other girls who were perverts and scumbags. Finally, the pervert found her again...(Lived a happy life from then on) The transition from the beginning to the development of this article is relatively blunt, but after the exciting beginning and the exciting climax, it becomes less important, and the main line of the story is completed in Chapter 14, which is within an acceptable range. The beginning sets a relaxed atmosphere for the following, making the reader feel more like an outsider, and the active author also adds a bit of fun to reading this article. In summary, it is suitable for young people. The small climax further establishes the positioning of this article as Yuri, and also corresponds to the foreshadowing of the previous article. It is endlessly memorable, so it is more suitable for fujoshi to read. However, the author updates too slowly, which becomes a negative point for this article. However, since the author is a hobby, I won't say much more. Overall evaluation: Excellent (a fujoshi would rate it higher) The above are all personal opinions, don't criticize if you don't like it, I hope the author doesn't mess up.

I like this book very much and have always wanted to give it five stars, but I think it will only make people feel attentive after reading it for a long time. This book is a love story about the heroine Lin Qianyi. It is the first novel of this type that I have read, but I feel very good about it and I am looking forward to the following stories. In addition, the author of this novel also worked very hard! I hope you all like this very good novel! ❤

After reading the previous part, I feel pretty good. Now let's get to the point, cough cough Don't miss it when you pass by. It's fate that you got this book. If you come in and take a look, you won't suffer any loss or be deceived. The author's writing style is quite good, the characters are also good, and the overall style of painting is light-hearted. I wonder who wouldn't read a novel like this during their leisure time during the winter vacation. Ps: You can also catch the author alive. (Emphasis added)

The writing is very good. Sister Su Xi is a newbie on the road. It is inevitable that she will crash. No, it is inevitable that there are some bad writing points. However, judging from the layout and language, it is enough to show her original conception and clever description of details. The article appropriately uses contemporary famous memes. Its humorous writing style makes people laugh and is full of philosophy. It is really a rare masterpiece! (No one should see me talking nonsense in the middle of the night...)

Wonderful, my heart loves it, my favorite~

"About not knowing what to comment on" Anyway, this five-star praise is a must ❤️❤️❤️

It's a very nice book. I can understand everything in this book (hehe, one star is missing. I will give it to you when you have the car in it, hehehe)

It's very interesting. It makes me laugh every time, and I feel sad for Su Xi after Chapter 30. In fact, I am from a certain fairy. When I saw the book she recommended, I was curious and read it. Who would have thought it was so good, and the author is also very good. He will reply to the messages of netizens in every chapter. The author is also a new writer. I have to say that the author's writing is really good. To be honest, I have only read Chapter 35. Chapter, at first I thought the author was writing articles about men and women, but a certain fairy said it was a very beautiful lily article, so I read it with doubts. Who would have thought it was so beautiful? As soon as I started reading it, I could see the funny point, and it was the kind of laugh that made you laugh forward and back. My brother looked at me like I was a fool, which made me extremely embarrassed. But later on, I felt a very special feeling, and I can't explain it. It's really amazing that a new author can write to this level. I can only say this book in one sentence: it's very beautiful. I'm not good at talking, so I can only say so much. This is the longest comment I've ever written for the first time, for no other reason than because it looks good.

Good-looking, good-looking, super good-looking