The Character of the Boss Who Traveled Through the Book Collapsed Again

New author, trying writing for the first time (>_<) I don't have much writing skills, it's just random writing! Please forgive me for the poor writing! (つд⊂)

This article tells the story of a pervert who broke up a little girl and left him alone. The pervert went through the book and looked for other replacements. Unexpectedly, the little girl awakened the system and followed other girls who were perverts and scumbags. Finally, the pervert found her again...(Lived happily ever after) The transition from the beginning to the development of this article is relatively blunt, but after the exciting beginning and the exciting climax, it becomes less important, and the main line of the story is completed in Chapter 14, which is within an acceptable range. The beginning sets a relaxed atmosphere for the following, making the reader feel more like an outsider, and the active author also adds a bit of fun to reading this article. In summary, it is suitable for young people. The small climax further establishes the positioning of this article as Yuri, and also corresponds to the foreshadowing of the previous article. It is endlessly memorable, so it is more suitable for fujoshi to read. However, the author updates too slowly, which becomes a negative point for this article. However, since the author is a hobby, I won't say much more. Overall evaluation: Excellent (a fujoshi would rate it higher) The above are all personal opinions, don't criticize if you don't like it, I hope the author doesn't mess up.

I like this book very much and have always wanted to give it five stars, but I think it will only make people feel attentive after reading it for a long time. This book is a love story of the heroine Lin Qianyi. It is my first time to read this type of novel, but I feel very good about it and I am looking forward to the following stories. In addition, the author of this novel also worked very hard! I hope you all like this very good novel! ❤

After reading the previous part, I feel pretty good. Now let's get to the point, cough cough Don't miss it when you pass by. It's fate that you got this book. If you come in and take a look, you won't suffer any loss or be deceived. The author's writing style is quite good, the characters are also good, and the overall style of painting is light-hearted. I wonder who wouldn't read a novel like this during their leisure time during the winter vacation. Ps: You can also catch the author alive. (Emphasis added)

The writing is very good. Sister Su Xi is a newbie on the road. It is inevitable that she will crash. No, it is inevitable that there are some bad writing points. However, judging from the layout and language, it is enough to show her original conception and clever description of details. The article appropriately uses contemporary famous memes. Its humorous writing style makes people laugh and is full of philosophy. It is really a rare masterpiece! (No one should see me talking nonsense in the middle of the night...)

Wonderful, my heart loves it, my favorite~

"About not knowing what to comment on" Anyway, this five-star praise is a must ❤️❤️❤️

It's a very nice book. I can understand everything in this book (hehe, one star is missing. I will give it to you when you have the car in it, hehehe)

Good-looking, good-looking, super good-looking

It's very interesting. It makes me laugh every time, and I feel sad for Su Xi after Chapter 30. In fact, I am from a certain fairy. When I saw the book she recommended, I was curious and read it. Who would have thought it was so good, and the author is also very good. He will reply to the messages of netizens in every chapter. The author is also a new writer. I have to say that the author's writing is really good. To be honest, I have only read Chapter 35. Chapter, at first I thought the author was writing articles about men and women, but a certain fairy said it was a very beautiful lily article, so I read it with doubts. Who would have thought it was so beautiful? As soon as I started reading it, I could see the funny point, and it was the kind of laugh that made you laugh forward and back. My brother looked at me like I was a fool, which made me extremely embarrassed. But later on, I felt a very special feeling, and I can't explain it. It's really amazing that a new author can write to this level. I can only say this book in one sentence: it's very beautiful. I'm not good at talking, so I can only say so much. This is the longest comment I've ever written for the first time, for no other reason than because it looks good.

Hmm... A high-quality novel, the writing style is funny, occasionally perverted, the car is always there, the author is active, the character is interesting, the writing is also very fragrant, the car is also... Ahem, pure Dafa~ Highly recommended, welcome to visit! (The last sentence seems a bit salesy... Well... Forget it, never mind!) I love the author, and the author loves me! (Making trouble unreasonably)

Well, the author said he would write a book a long time ago. After waiting for a long time, it finally came out, hahahaha

This novel was recommended by another author. When I first read the introduction, I didn't understand why the author didn't want others to read it. However, the content is very good, and you can still see the author's care. Basically, as long as it doesn't end badly, I won't give up on this book, so the author has to work hard!

I would like to thank the author Da Da. Her book made me feel Lily's happiness, and made me play Genshin Impact and replay "Criminal Minds" to feel twice as happy. Moreover, this author is more active and the plot is very good, so it is not a loss to join the server. (The above is my opinion as an author and a reader)

I am not myself; I am here and there, I am everywhere

With such a good book, how could Pangolin not join in the fun?

It's a very good book. It would be a pity to miss it. I like this book very much. I hope the author will write more and it won't be unfinished. It's rare to see good books. I don't want it to be unfinished, even if it takes a long time to update. Come on author, you are the best! (Sorry for the rarity of words, it's the first time I've posted so many words)

I read this book very early and liked it very much. The first time I met Su Xi was because of her continuous praise. Su Xi's writing was a little green at first, but she improved little by little. I laughed throughout the whole article, but after laughing at the latter part, I still had a sour aftertaste. Okay, "good" comrades, you must work hard! (Oh oh oh, I really like it! My previous comments were not reviewed, but now I know about it. I'll come back and change it.)

Love it, love it😍 I was attracted by the introduction at first😏 What fun things will happen when a pervert meets another pervert? Let's wait and see❤️ Lily! !

Another masterpiece! ! (♡ ὅ ◡ ὅ )ʃ♡

It's very interesting, highly recommended, but the author should also pay attention to your health and stay up less late ᵎ(•̀㉨•́)و ̑̑ Come on

This novel is very good. Although the author always said that she did it for fun, she never missed two chapters a day, and her writing skills are gradually improving. The author must continue to work hard and look forward to your next content. (=^▽^=)

Come on, little Su Xi (*^ω^*)

It's very interesting. Good luck to the author. I hope this book will become popular. (Whisper something: Can you let me play a guest role? If possible, I will reply in time [poke finger])

This is the first time I have read a story with two female protagonists. It is so good that I feel like I am not normal. Thank you for the author! ! ! 💪

This Lily article is great, and the author is so cute. It's just a pity for Jiang Mengli, because Shen Xiaoxiao is the prototype of the author, so it's a bit close to reality. People or things in reality will always leave regrets, so I just www. It's a sweet article, recommended reading [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

Very interesting, the author... Is also very cute

The person became bent the year before last, and the book was read this year. The author Ben...

Come on, I believe you can write the best article (✪▽✪) and Happy New Year^ω^

I actually found a girlfriend after reading this book. 😏😏