Genshin Impact*******

How to say it? Your update speed is a bit impressive, and the content is very good. If the author does more work as a writer and gets a recommendation position, there will definitely be more people. If there are more people, won't he come with a small amount of money? Hey-hey

The writing is quite good, it can be said to be superior, but the updates are slow and I haven't read enough. Don't worry, the author, good books will always be appreciated, and you will succeed (no water characters) (I suggest changing the title of the book, I feel that the current name is not very attractive) (Personal opinion, don't believe me, I am a hot chick)

The author told me that your article is not decorated with gorgeous language, but touches readers with plain and true feelings. The sentences are smooth, the psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful, giving people a sense of aftertaste. From a literary point of view, the subject matter is very novel. The angle is clearly visible. The language is plain yet elegant. Simple yet meaningful. This article is a model article. The literary skills that show extraordinary in the ordinary can be said to be precious every word. Every sentence is a classic. It has reached a height that is beyond our reach. From an artistic point of view. This article could be improved. But his meaning is far greater than success itself. There is also the use of punctuation marks. Just right. After reading your article word for word, my heart cannot calm down for a long time. How could there be such a penetrating article in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. You gave me a deep understanding of the saying "There are people outside the world, and there is a sky outside the world". After reading the article, I did not dare to reply easily. I was worried that my vulgar language would tarnish this rare article in the world, but I still replied because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints behind such a wonderful article, it would be a regret in my life. No matter how gorgeous the rhetoric was, the article was wonderful. So I just want to say, your novel is so touching! How about... Another chapter?

It's so rare, I finally found this masterpiece, I immediately blew my doge

Personally, I think this is the best series of Yuanshen novels I have ever seen. As long as there is no harem, it would be perfect. Also, the author's short and concise style is almost as good as a certain Yin Yu, and it is almost the same as **** Zhanshen.

As of now, it's pretty good. It's a rare unsystematic Genshin Impact novel, but whether there will be a system in the future... I don't know.

Overall, it's not bad. The previous text can also correspond to the following text. At least the logic is clear. Also, I don't recommend writing love lines and harems as they are a bit easy to collapse. But if it's everyone's request, then it doesn't matter. It doesn't have to be updated frequently, the words should be precise rather than too many. Come on:)

Well, that's wonderful... A reward of five million molas...

It's beautiful, but can it be without a female protagonist? (♡ ὅ ◡ ὅ )ʃ♡

It's very well written. As for why I gave it four stars, it's because the updates are too slow. I quickly saw the chapters from the first chapter to the latest chapter. The author is very encouraged.

Our Li Xunfeng went from a little boy barely surviving under the Star Picking Cliff to one of the guardian yakshas. He was so excited when he saw me that he went straight to smoke a round and Pu Yuan. Although nothing came out, hahahaha, this book has great control over the rhythm and advancement of the plot. Why are so few people reading this book? This horse racing is obviously the rhythm of a masterpiece. If Tomato had 10 more excellent books like this and less of those mindless and cool literature, it would no longer be of this level. Come on, author, please read more. I will try my best to support you. I will be your die-hard fan from today on.

Author, don't ask me to raise books, I know you can do it, five updates a day, 5,000 words per update (manual funny)

It feels like the sudden change to Yaksha is so sudden that the story line has changed.

The book is good, but I don't dare to read it anymore at this update speed. What if it disappears. (O´Д`o)ノ

I like it very much, especially since I am also a Genshin Impact player and I like the wives very much. I hope they can update it soon.

The author writes very well

Good luck to the author!

It's a great book, why doesn't anyone read it?

I don't know how to say it, but it's my type anyway

Compared to other Genshin Impact fans, it's superior.

Cheers to the author, the writing is very good_(ง •̀_•́)ง

It's quite interesting... I hope it doesn't have a female protagonist. Big cheers for the author! ٩(๑•̀ω•́๑)۶

This should be the first novel in which a god travels through time and becomes an immortal, and it can also communicate with the real world.

I have always insisted on reading books about Genshin Impact

There is no possibility of the career line collapsing for the time being (I personally suggest that you design or improve the Starry Sky, Demon God War, etc., And there is still time. The seat of fate is not something that cannot be thought of. It is convenient for writing Kuanyuan Shen fan. If it involves the Tree of Imaginary Numbers and the Sea of ​​Quantum, just control it well, don't force it). The emotional line has not been revealed for the time being, so it is recommended to have a single female protagonist. Many Genshin Impact novels (that I have read) did not let go of the women who appeared in the original plot, and then many of them fell apart, except for some with very strong writing skills (but as far as I am concerned, they have collapsed). Of course, do not let the protagonist have various ambiguities with other women just to take care of either one or many. On the other hand, there is only one female protagonist. This is even more annoying. Okay, the above are suggestions, and the following are comments: At present, the writing skills are acceptable, Genshin Impact's self-design is relatively good, and the holes dug are moderate. It is a very good Genshin Impact fan novel.

Please give me more hey hey hey hey hey...

It always feels weird to call someone by their name when you meet a new character. I feel like it's better to overdo it a little bit.

Author: Is there any plot for Youla?

Damn, this novel is so awesome

Nice writing, keep it up