I'm Just an Outer Disciple

It is exciting, the main line of the novel is clear, and the storyline unfolds step by step. It is narrated in a eloquent way. It felt a bit dull at first, but as the content of the story unfolds, it gradually becomes more and more interesting. The more you read, the more interesting it becomes, and you are attracted unconsciously. The protagonist Xu Jing is peaceful on the surface, strong in heart, firm-willed, clear in goal, eager to learn and versatile, and endures humiliation and goes forward for the sake of the one she loves. She shows the responsibility and courage that a man should have, which should touch the heart of readers. The author portrays the modest, friendly, and enterprising qualities of the protagonist that are recognized and promoted by today's society. It can be seen that the author's intention is elegant and unconventional, and deserves praise. Okay, let's stop here and continue watching the drama!

Such a good book should be rated 9 or above

The plot is reasonable, smooth and compact, with no stallion male videos, no cheating, and no clichés. Low profile development. However, there are indeed many typos, which do not affect reading. Overall, this is a book about immortality that is fascinating even for female readers!

I haven't finished reading it yet. It's well written. Unlike many books on immortality, in order to make up the word count, there are too many descriptions of fighting scenes and no plot support.

Very good, I like it. The plot transition was quite natural and successful. There is nothing harsh and uncomfortable. My level is limited and I can only comment like this. I hope it will not affect the author.

This book has a clear context and a clear theme. The only drawback is that it is easily addictive [laughing]

I finally finished reading it, starting from when Xu Jing picked up the token and was bullied, and then became the peak of Fang Tianyu. Although there are some holes that have not been filled in, and sometimes the sentences are not fluent, but it suits my taste. Xu Jing is calm, not arrogant, not arrogant, has a dream of pursuing freedom, and is firm to her sect. Although it is because of the token, she still gives back to the sect after she has strong strength. Although there are intrigues and plots in the sect. Yudun, but it is precisely because of these that Xu Jing grew up, learned how to restrain and develop, and had a more distant vision. Xu Jing's pursuit is the pursuit of countless ordinary people, longing for freedom, and wanting to be at ease with the people they love. Strength is never an end, but a means. No matter at the national or personal level, I was deeply touched after reading this. Fellow Taoists, I will also break through the ninety-nine tribulations. The journey is high and the road is long. I hope all fellow Taoists will take care of themselves!

This book is very good and suitable for new readers. There are several sentences in the book that connect the previous paragraphs and the next paragraphs, which are awakening actions and enlightenment points. They are really awesome! ! ! Although there are many typos in the book, it does not prevent me from reading smoothly. I can only say that the author's writing quality is really good~

Xu Jing was just an outer disciple with no future at the beginning. After getting a magical outer disciple token, he started his legendary life. He made a fortune in a low-key manner and relied on the token to possess exercises, elixirs, and skills. There were countless strong men on the road to cultivating immortality. But in order to become stronger and to save his confidante, he kept moving forward, and finally found his own way, and achieved a strong and happy ending. There are many highlights in this story, which supported me to read the full text. Powerful tokens, clear goals for progress, constant opportunities and challenges, continuous gains in the path of cultivation, a pretty good story rhythm, innovative training settings, and mysterious characters running through the main line. What I don't like very much is that some of the protagonist's efforts are not rewarded, some of the people he associates with do not add to the story, the heroine has no brilliance, and some characters are annoying. Maybe I am too utilitarian. Some of the plots make me feel conflicted. The protagonist often has to walk at night in brocade clothes, and the token is both a golden finger and a shackle. Although I have finished reading, I feel that this story is a mixed bag of good and bad, and I can't describe it accurately. Maybe the same is true in the real world. The process will inevitably have twists and turns, and it would be nice to have a good ending.

A very wonderful book, unlike other books, it only knows about killing.

It's not bad. It's a way to pass the book shortage. The plot in it is a bit pieced together from the plots of other novels. . But overall, it still has its own content. There are a lot of foreshadowings, the holes are not filled in, the side characters are not explained, and the heroine seems like a pendant.

This book is very comfortable for readers, and the content is not cliché. Neither the male nor female protagonist has a narcissistic character. They pursue their true intentions, be cautious, and reach the end step by step! The male protagonist achieves great things, but also sacrifices a lot.

It is indeed easier to find good non-Tomato originals. When I first saw that this book didn't have the original Tomato logo, I clicked on it and read it since I could still write a million words. Already finished reading. It's not a traditional cool article that has no suspense about whether you'll be cool all the way to the end, but it has a process of slowly growing and getting better. Let's call it a slightly cool article. The protagonist is humble and polite, and is very friendly to the people around him. He does not have the greasy feeling of a villain in traditional cool novels, and successfully removes the greasiness. This is very rare. It has a unique charm in the current Internet environment where brainless cool novels dominate. If there's anything unpleasant about the character, it's just that he's a bit ink. In a fairy tale, he's not decisive enough to kill. The protagonist faces people who have repeatedly asked for trouble and wanted to kill him, but he still gives opportunities many times. It took a long time for Moji to solve the problem. It's not a harem novel, and there's no sense of poverty like a woman is casually in heat anytime, anywhere. The male protagonist is just a Taoist companion, and has no ambiguity with other women. He doesn't even have random thoughts when he sees a woman. The only Taoist companion is a tool to promote the development of the main plot (working hard to practice to save his girlfriend from the old monster). There is not too much emotional description, which is suitable for people like us who hate too much emotional drama. I saw a comment mentioning "Mortal", and I understand why the two are compared, because the characters are indeed similar, both are humble and steady, and both are growth-oriented. As someone who has also read "Mortal", I personally feel: In terms of story, "Mortal" is indeed much more creative and has a much wider perspective. The main plot of this book is a bit old-fashioned, monotonous, and a bit conventional. For ordinary readers, there is not much difference between the two books in terms of the details of the short stories. "Mortal" is a very long novel, and it is difficult to avoid the recurrence of various similar plots. This is a book with just over one million words, but similar situations rarely occur. This character is more advanced than "Mortal" if you look closely at it. "Mortal" has a group of women messing around very annoyingly. It often seems that the protagonist is a little poor, a little oily, loves sexual things between men and women, and starts to double standard when he sees women. The long series of fighting descriptions in "Mortal" can also be annoying to people who don't like to read fighting descriptions. The fighting descriptions in this book know how to stop it in moderation.

This book has a compact plot and lively vocabulary. It is worth reading!

The story is completely conceived, the logic is clear, the language is concise, and the plot is attractive. It is a good novel. The rating could be higher.

The story progresses reasonably. Xiaobai starts to practice qi and slowly upgrades. There are risks in the process, but he saves the day. He uses his talents to become an alchemist, a weapon refiner, an array master, and finally reaches the pinnacle~ In fact, he is still an outer disciple to the outside world, pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger~

The concept is very good, I can listen to it all the time

The literary style of this book is good, and the logical connection is reasonable. The only shortcoming is that the ending is too hasty, but it would be reasonable if it were a series of books.

The writing is good and has a big picture view, but the cheating method has been weakened. I don't know if the author did it intentionally or if it was set up like this. Starting from scratch depends on one's own ability and wisdom. On the contrary, the tokens obtained from the beginning are not very useful at all. Even without the tokens, the final achievement of the pig's feet will not be too low.

The plot is very good, it's a bland story about immortality, but the ending is a bit unsatisfactory.

Although the novel is short, the plot is clear and the ending is normal. A rating of 8.5 Or above is not excessive.

The novel is well written and vivid, making people unable to stop reading and grabbing their appetite.

This is a serious and traditional novel about cultivating immortals. If you want to read a decent novel about cultivating immortals, this book is suitable. Yes, I have seen too many of this genre. Nothing exciting, although there are various problems, but it is still worth recommending.

After reading a few articles, I found that this is a great work. The plot of the work is cleverly conceived and the ideas are fantasy. Readers can learn from the plot of the work how to survive in a disadvantaged environment. Work hard to improve your own shortcomings and have strong reverse thinking! The author is attentive! Come on come on!

This is a good novel about cultivating immortals, and it is somewhat transcendent in the hierarchical concept of cultivating immortals. The end point of cultivating immortals may not be the immortal world, but may be freedom. I feel like this outcome is better than continuing to fight after becoming an immortal. It is also more in line with the original intention of cultivating immortality.

It's very good. The logic is smooth and well-organized at the beginning. Later, I know that the reader's reading fatigue speeds up the progress. Overall, it is very good. It is one of the few good books that I can read from beginning to end. It is worth reading.

It was exciting, but the ending was a bit anxious.

The author is a master of telling stories. He handles the foreshadowing and ending very well, making the development of the story both innovative and logical. It is a very good book!

The rating for such a good book is a bit low. I have been following the drama, it is very exciting.

It's okay, I tried hard, and I'm dictating it. Please review the typos and words. This is the writer's duty.