The latest plot of 2024, the protagonist has been beaten back in the new world, and now runs to become a Shichibukai nest in the Shampoo Islands to develop power and accumulate strength.
The protagonist is an indigenous person with the White Wolf Fruit ability. The weapon was changed to a sickle in Chapter 6. He set out from the East China Sea on the same day as Ace went to sea. Instead of following the ship, the protagonist formed a pirate group by himself. The crew currently has no other original members except Mr.3 And Ms. Golden Week.
There is no system, no heroine, and the plot is slow.
Reader comments
Come on, author, I love reading Pirates fanfics! But most of Tomato's Pirates fans are tired of watching it! What I love most is to watch the protagonist slowly grow up. I hope it will be more original and the interaction with the original characters will be more moderate. It will not deviate from the original work, but it will also have the protagonist group's own story! (Disadvantages: I feel that the early recruitment was very hasty, and the personality of each crew member is not obvious. If a character wants to be deeply rooted in people's hearts, it is important to have a distinctive personality, so if there are not many crew members, you can deepen the description later)
A very good book, among all kinds of invincible fan fiction, it can be regarded as a clean one. If you are tired of reading all kinds of invincible fan fiction, you can take a look at this book. The sense of immersion will naturally become stronger as you read it for a longer time, and you will basically have some impressions of the prototypes of various characters in it. I don't know how it is for others, but for me it is a very good book. First of all, the protagonist is not like a plot that was eliminated 30 million years ago like being invincible at the beginning and then hiding his strength, but it is not like that kind of book that starts like a snail for a long time. It is a story about the protagonist's process from weak to strong. It is a very good novel. Come on, author!
It is a relatively good pirate novel, but I hope that the characters can be enriched, such as adding a fishman crew member (can be rescued from the Shampoo auction house), a fur tribe, or a giant tribe that can change its size by eating it (preferably the ancient giant tribe because I think the ancient giant tribe is more powerful), and the protagonist's fruit should have some buffs, such as being stronger at night, and the strength is greatly increased on the night of the full moon. Also, I think the protagonist group can have contact with comic characters, Ace would be good.
Yoxi! I haven't seen more than 10,000 readers in more than ten days. Come on! ✺◟(∗❛ᴗ❛ั∗)◞✺
Compared with other books, the biggest advantage of this book is that it is highly malleable. It grew slowly from the East China Sea. Unlike other times, it was almost invincible at the beginning. There is no system, and it does not eat any particularly awesome fruits. It is good to write it like this. There is no need to be like the others. The span of strength is too big. It is good to keep this pace. I hope I can break 1,000 copies! There are thousands of pirate novels, and I have never seen one with more than 1,000 pieces.
Will he steal Luffy's crew?
Come on author, this book is well written. While ensuring quantity, quality must also be ensured. I hope this book can continue to be written.
The updates are too slow. If the system doesn't recommend it, it won't be popular. Now the authors are faster and the competition is fierce. Come on＾0＾~
Werewolf form in the human fruit fantasy beast
If possible, kill Whitebeard II.
Let me comment on 2024. In 2022, I accidentally discovered that this book was slow to gain popularity at first and I didn't particularly want to read it. Later, I slowly read it and found that the characters are all original, which will also make it more difficult to write a book, and it seems that this book is not very popular now. Ratings haven't gone up much now.
I remember that the author came here just out of interest, so I still update it [smile]
I'll give it five stars first, and I'll see if I can change it.
The Pirates fics I've seen on Tomato so far are already pretty good.
Not bad. Come on, don't be too cunning.
I hope the author will give Kavin a fruit of weight [Adoration][Admiration][Like]
Oh, it's so good. This is the first time I've seen some indigenous pirate novels that are very good.
There are very few original characters in One Piece, and the subject matter is novel, but it is also recommended that the time be arranged more appropriately. The description may not be limited to battles, or personal personnel, and the pace can be slowed down slightly. The customs, beautiful scenery and unique customs of each island are also a highlight in One Piece. The character psychology and portrait description can be more detailed to avoid repetition of themes or highlights. Good luck to the author 💪!!!
I have to say that the author's name is quite good. ⊙ω⊙
I originally thought that the main character was just a fruit grown in ancient times, but when I was browsing the bookstore a while ago, I saw someone saying that it turned out to be a phantom beast species. The writing is fake. If it is true, I will wait until his real name comes out before reading it. Keep it first
It's well written, I hope it doesn't crash later.
Why are all the crew members male😂
I think we can add the weapon color appropriately
I haven't read the back part yet, but the author's ancient race is a little weak. After all, Luffy is a sun god. This novel looks really good. I hope you can write it well and don't end it [thinking][thinking]
Not bad, but I hope to see the protagonist have his own territory and subordinates
Come on, author, don't be a eunuch
I like this kind of slow-burning book, the kind that becomes invincible after just a few chapters, which is boring. This book is great. Come on! It's okay to wait for you to update slowly, as long as you don't interrupt the update or make it unfinished!
This book is very good. It is not like other books. The protagonist becomes invincible and lawless from the beginning.
Not bad, will continue to watch it.
Very good meeting officer
Big cheers for the author! (≧∇≦)/, Very beautiful
Yes, there are too many invincible stories, but it is still comfortable to watch this kind of protagonist slowly growing up. It is a work worth savoring.
Really awesome writing
Author, do you know that this is the best one I have ever read among Pirates fics?
I hope the fruit of the pig's trotter is not just the white wolf fruit, otherwise it will not be comparable to the blue dragon fruit in the later stage. I hope it can be strengthened, just like Luffy's, it will be strengthened in the later stage. Good writing.
Come on, author, I love reading Pirates fanfics! But most of Tomato's Pirates fans are tired of watching it! What I love most is to watch the protagonist slowly grow up. I hope it will be more original and the interaction with the original characters will be more moderate. It will not deviate from the original work, but it will also have the protagonist group's own story! (Disadvantages: I feel that the early recruitment was very hasty, and the personality of each crew member is not obvious. If a character wants to be deeply rooted in people's hearts, it is important to have a distinctive personality, so if there are not many crew members, you can deepen the description later)
A very good book, among all kinds of invincible fan fiction, it can be regarded as a clean one. If you are tired of reading all kinds of invincible fan fiction, you can take a look at this book. The sense of immersion will naturally become stronger as you read it for a longer time, and you will basically have some impressions of the prototypes of various characters in it. I don't know how it is for others, but for me it is a very good book. First of all, the protagonist is not like a plot that was eliminated 30 million years ago like being invincible at the beginning and then hiding his strength, but it is not like that kind of book that starts like a snail for a long time. It is a story about the protagonist's process from weak to strong. It is a very good novel. Come on, author!
It is a relatively good pirate novel, but I hope that the characters can be enriched, such as adding a fishman crew member (can be rescued from the Shampoo auction house), a fur tribe, or a giant tribe that can change its size by eating it (preferably the ancient giant tribe because I think the ancient giant tribe is more powerful), and the protagonist's fruit should have some buffs, such as being stronger at night, and the strength is greatly increased on the night of the full moon. Also, I think the protagonist group can have contact with comic characters, Ace would be good. Yoxi! I haven't seen more than 10,000 readers in more than ten days. Come on! ✺◟(∗❛ᴗ❛ั∗)◞✺
Compared with other books, the biggest advantage of this book is that it is highly malleable. It grew slowly from the East China Sea. Unlike other times, it was almost invincible at the beginning. There is no system, and it does not eat any particularly awesome fruits. It is good to write it like this. There is no need to be like the others. The span of strength is too big. It is good to keep this pace. I hope I can break 1,000 copies! There are thousands of pirate novels, and I have never seen one with more than 1,000 pieces.
Will he steal Luffy's crew?
Come on author, this book is well written. While ensuring quantity, quality must also be ensured. I hope this book can continue to be written.
The updates are too slow. If the system doesn't recommend it, it won't be popular. Now the authors are faster and the competition is fierce. Come on＾0＾~ Werewolf form in the human fruit fantasy beast
If possible, kill Whitebeard II.
Let me comment on 2024. In 2022, I accidentally discovered that this book was slow to gain popularity at first and I didn't particularly want to read it. Later, I slowly read it and found that the characters are all original, which will also make it more difficult to write a book, and it seems that this book is not very popular now. Ratings haven't gone up much now. I remember that the author came here just out of interest, so I still update it [smile]
I'll give it five stars first, and I'll see if I can change it.
The Pirates fics I've seen on Tomato so far are already pretty good.
Not bad. Come on, don't be too cunning.
I hope the author will give Kavin a fruit of weight [Adoration][Admiration][Like]
Oh, it's so good. This is the first time I've seen some indigenous pirate novels that are very good.
There are very few original characters in One Piece, and the subject matter is novel, but it is also recommended that the time be arranged more appropriately. The description may not be limited to battles, or personal personnel, and the pace can be slowed down slightly. The customs, beautiful scenery and unique customs of each island are also a highlight in One Piece. The character psychology and portrait description can be more detailed to avoid repetition of themes or highlights. Good luck to the author 💪!!!
I have to say that the author's name is quite good. ⊙ω⊙
I originally thought that the main character was just a fruit grown in ancient times, but when I was browsing the bookstore a while ago, I saw someone saying that it turned out to be a phantom beast species. The writing is fake. If it is true, I will wait until his real name comes out before reading it. Keep it first
It's well written, I hope it doesn't crash later.
Why are all the crew members male😂
I think we can add the weapon color appropriately
I haven't read the back part yet, but the author's ancient race is a little weak. After all, Luffy is a sun god. This novel looks really good. I hope you can write it well and don't end it [thinking][thinking]
Not bad, but I hope to see the protagonist have his own territory and subordinates
Come on, author, don't be a eunuch
I like this kind of slow-burning book, the kind that becomes invincible after just a few chapters, which is boring. This book is great. Come on! It's okay to wait for you to update slowly, as long as you don't interrupt the update or make it unfinished!
This book is very good. It is not like other books. The protagonist becomes invincible and lawless from the beginning.
Not bad, will continue to watch it. Very good meeting officer
Big cheers for the author! (≧∇≦)/, Very beautiful
Yes, there are too many invincible stories, but it is still comfortable to watch this kind of protagonist slowly growing up. It is a work worth savoring. Really awesome writing
Author, do you know that this is the best one I have ever read among Pirates fics?
I hope the fruit of the pig's trotter is not just the white wolf fruit, otherwise it will not be comparable to the blue dragon fruit in the later stage. I hope it can be strengthened, just like Luffy's, it will be strengthened in the later stage. Good writing.