Instructor He Xiuyuan

Your article is not decorated with gorgeous language, but impresses readers with plain emotions. The sentences are smooth and coherent. The psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the material selection is very novel, the angle is clearly visible, the language is plain yet elegant, concise yet full of meaning, it can be called a model article! This article shows extraordinary literary skills despite its plainness. It can be said to be a classic every word, and it has reached a height that is elusive for us. From an artistic point of view, this article still needs to be improved, but its significance is far greater than the success itself. Also, the use of punctuation marks is even more appropriate. After reading your article word for word, my heart cannot be calm for a long time! How could there be such a penetrating article in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. You made me deeply understand the saying "There are people outside the world, and there is heaven outside the world." After reading the article, I did not dare to reply easily. I was worried that my vulgar language would tarnish this rare article in the world. But I still replied, because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints behind such a wonderful article, it would be a regret in my life. Please forgive my selfishness! No matter how gorgeous the words are, it's impossible to describe the brilliance of this article, so I just want to say one thing: Your little article is so touching! How about… One more chapter? The pattern is open (*^ω^*)

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