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The content is very exciting. If you love someone, that person is your whole world. Use everything you have to protect her.

... This book has been perfect so far. The characterization and plot are just getting started. The author should not give up easily. Come on.

Pretty good, at least higher than the average tomato level [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

This book is the best I have ever read. The writing style of the whole text is exquisite and can make people feel the real emotions. The love between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is also enviable. The only shortcoming (the author also realized it) is that the writing at the end is not very good and the story does not end satisfactorily. The other thing is that I remember it seems that the level is from one to fifteenth level, but it has been completed by the thirteenth level (the protagonist can't reach the fifteenth level yet (▼ dishes ▼#)). I think this is a pity. If possible, the author could consider a follow-up. If there are any readers who want to get involved, please rush! [Adoration]

I came across a very rare and good book again. I fell in love with it and am waiting for more updates [love] [love] [love]

The description of emotions is a bit too deliberate. It's not that it's not good to read. It's also excellent for other books, but it lacks some flavor overall. It's not that it's not good. This one is better than the other one, but it could be written better. The overall plot background is not written clearly. One person can point it out later. It can be all or half of it. There are a lot of pitfalls in the plot, so try to fill it in as quickly as possible. The plot progress is neither fast nor slow, but the characters are advanced too fast, but the goal is clear and excellent. The specific cultivation level of the protagonist is a bit difficult to grasp based on the current specific direction, but I think you can. The plot progressed a bit too fast, and the commercial value was reduced a bit, but if the writing is better in the future, there will be no problem with a 1,200-month guarantee. (At present, tomatoes are dying of drought and dying of waterlogging.) The commercial value is still a little low, but based on my reading of your book, there is a high probability that it will not appear in the next world, so the bend has come back again. The commercial value is slightly low, and this book can basically only be guaranteed. It will be better if you have a specific outline. My suggestions are non-professional and only cover the first two years, so just take a look. Everyone has their own scale in their heart. I don't know why, but I really like to read your works. I've been raising them for two days, so I'm a little late. I'm sorry. Let's encourage each other! You see, I have been busy recently, and I have no regrets about the problems in the company. It's just that the article was written in April, and I didn't come until May, so it's a little late, so I'm sorry.

There is a single female protagonist, not ambiguous, and there are not a bunch of female supporting characters. The relationship between men and women is very good, and the love is engraved in the bone marrow. Everyone has a dream of being in the arena, and their arena is very exciting. It's just that the ending was too hasty and left some holes unfilled.

I finished reading it in one go, and I still haven't finished it. It's indeed a very good book. Good luck, author💪

It is a breath of fresh air in martial arts novels. The writing style is not as good as That Year in the Snow, but the plot is novel and may become a rising star. I would like to encourage the author here. (If you don't like your personal thoughts, don't criticize them. If you're a fan, don't make trouble. Are there not many authors of masterpieces who have been ruined by you?)

I like this book, mainly because of the style. I read one on QReading before. I won't mention the title. I really liked it at the time. It's the first time I've found a book like this in such a long time. Please update it for me. Even if you update it once a day or every two days, as long as you keep updating it, we will still be good friends [I understand] [I understand] Don't be too influenced by them, the author. The one I chased was in your current situation, and it was all because of the female supporting actor's problem. Ye Qingcheng is good, but the author admits it. On the other hand, if you (referring to netizens) are extremely addicted, you can still read it. Why can't you read this? It's not a good article. If you want to read something more awesome, such as "Dafeng's Watcher", you should find an experienced author. The author just completes what he wants to do. If the writing is not good, he has already said it. Some people's ideas are really outrageous, so if you criticize them hard, you are considered powerful. As for the long article about Ye Qingcheng, I just want to say that the author only let her have unrequited love. Xu Nianzhi didn't respond and there was no need to be ambiguous. No need to force anything else? There is no emotional intelligence, and there is no ambiguity. On this point alone, you are willing to ignore other people's cool stories and single heroines (who are ambiguous with the female co-stars), but you come here to ridicule them. It's really a double standard.

The writing is quite good. Come on, don't be a eunuch. As long as you keep writing, I will read it. This book is very suitable for me. I would like to mention some more personal thoughts. I would like to see more emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists, although I know that the plot of a romance novel in a fantasy novel is indeed a bit... Unreasonable. Just keep writing according to your ideas. Don't worry about what I think. As long as you don't write the heroine to death and don't separate the male and female protagonists, that's fine [note]

It's good to read, yes, I have a rather picky taste, and this book is quite in line with my taste. Although Ye Qingcheng is in unrequited love, the male protagonist has not had an affair with her, and has always kept a distance from her. This way, it won't be disgusting. The male protagonist is also wholehearted. I hope the author can give Ye Qingcheng a better ending. It would be good to have a lily with Anu. Also, I am not a sailor, I am just expressing my personal opinion.

This book is very good and will not stop there. It is different from the current popular system flow and has a different kind of excitement. The good looks can no longer satisfy me, so I can only show the author a few more short videos.

The book is not very good, but I almost read it in one sitting. The pacing and details were poorly handled, but it still made me immersed in the story. I could pick out a lot of flaws, but I still gave it a perfect score. In fact, I don't know what I think, but I just like it, and I ignore the shortcomings of this book with this love. After reading it, I kept thinking about it, and I didn't think it was a good work, just a pass. I have read novels for several years, and I have not said that I have high standards, but I have also seen a lot of high-quality works. I usually read books very selectively, and there are very few that match my heart. But this very ordinary novel caught my eyes and gave me a different feeling. This feeling is difficult to describe. But I have come across a book that I read several years ago. The author was a newcomer, and his writing was very poor. There was no outline, and he wrote wherever he thought. Occasionally, he wrote one chapter after another, but none of them was manageable. He was constantly working on it, breaking the fourth wall again and again. The new author incorporated his own inspiration into the text and never tired of it. I feel that this book and that one are both painstaking efforts and full of love and affection. So I watched patiently, and the poisonous points that were enough to dissuade me were left behind time and time again. When I saw Xu Nianzhi and Xu Bulan reaching a beautiful consummation in the end, I was both relieved and disappointed. Finally, I wish the author can always maintain his love. Good night

It's really good to read in the early stages, but I fell in love without realizing it. The writing style is very fresh, and the structural ideas are also very good. The whole text is very comfortable to read. It is one of the better books in Tomato. However, the characterization is a bit insufficient, and I always feel that something is missing. There is also a problem, that is, it is too short. Well, it can be longer. The author needs to work hard.

It's a very good book, but some modern Internet hot words could be removed, which would be a bit distracting. The book itself is a bit more ancient (I guess). After adding those, it feels a bit out of place. I actually like the setting of Ye Qingcheng. After all, writing a book is also about yourself. It is Ye Qingcheng but does not have Ye Qingcheng's ability. It's really sad. I also love knights, but although the Qingfeng in Two Sleeves' awe-inspiring righteousness will be praised, it can't let me live. As a person, there will always be difficulties. I have also encountered them, but I just can't get out like Gu Qingci. So I like the lovesickness between Xu Nianzhi and Xu Bulan, and I hope I can stick to it. Come on!

This novel is the first fairy tale I have read. Although it is only my first time reading it, this novel also gave me a big surprise. It is not a harem novel with multiple heroines, nor is it the kind of protagonist Long Aotian who is invincible at the beginning. Instead, the protagonist comes out step by step on his own, and the characters in it all have reasons for becoming stronger. This is why I like this novel. (Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.)

Good luck to the author. I have always wanted to find a book with this kind of lighthearted emotion. The character setting is also my ideal type. It is still more interesting to have a single female protagonist. Don't be afraid, stick to your own path and write, we will always be behind you! [Sending Hearts] Now I just read the book I Miss You! All the best! The author is great, I will never give up on this book [Sending my heart to you] [Admiration]

At first glance, this book is really a breath of fresh air in Tomato. It is the real martial arts style of gratification and revenge that I have been looking for. The love between children is also true and true without being artificial or artificial. So I chose this book among a bunch of bad books. I really had a hard time with the Soul Master episode. The division of realm strength is very vague. I could just watch it as an alternative sketch. In fact, I can't see any changes in the protagonist's strength in realm, and all the changes in strength have little to do with the improvement of realm. , It's just that the realm has been reached, and the number of people who can kill has increased and become stronger. The combat power system is a bit confusing, and the writing method of high-end combat power is also a bit unsatisfactory. What realm is considered strong? After reading more than 300 chapters, I still don't know what realm the protagonist must reach to survive. Xu Buran is protected, the protagonist is not known, and the readers are not clear about it. Also, after learning that the supporting characters are all brainless, writing it seems to promote the development of the plot, but have you ever thought that it is written for the sake of writing? The first effect of writing it is to disgust the readers. To be honest, I really like the outline and high opening of this book. It's hard to say whether it's low or low, but it's just a bit difficult to read. I will still finish this book, and I won't read it a second time. It is worthy of my desire to read martial arts. The author will also write his own words at the end of the book. I remember that he was afraid that what he writes in the future will gradually become formulaic and market-oriented, thus breaking away from his own pen. This is actually very realistic, and it is a change that we have to face. No matter what kind of amazing and good articles we can write, in reality we are all trapped by life, which will affect our writing. Some readers have abandoned the article, and there are also readers like me who are willing to read it. I hope not to be affected by these things. The income from writing books is not the main source of income. I still want to read the story described by the pen in the author's heart. Come on

The sword is not suitable for hunting, and it is already in the world when you go out. Xu Nianzhi is really like a teenager today, confused, but able to try his best to fulfill a request, meeting lovers and friends on the road... This is how life is, living in progress, moving forward in life. But the difference from now is that compared to us, he has the kind of free and easy passion for fighting for the goal, which is probably what many people lack now. It is said that only love can withstand the long years. We now live within the rules of reality, missing too much "pleasure and hatred", missing too much unrestrained wantonness. This is probably the reason why I like to read Jianghu literature. Here it seems that I can find my young and high-spirited self and become the person I want to be. I hope that after all the vicissitudes of life, you will still live up to your passion and hold your dreams in mind. It's not finished yet, so I'll just comment on it. Come on, the author, the writing is very good.

Very good, keep writing and don't stop updating! [Sinister smile]

It has the style of Jianlai, but it's not exactly the same. It has its own flavor. It's a very good book. Come on.

The book is good, don't worry about it. The author has a mentality of not being too late to finish the book. There is nothing to fault in the writing and plot rhythm. The author feels that his poor performance is because this kind of book is a bit niche. In fact, the writing is still very good. Don't stop updating the book to make it unfinished! It's hard to find one like this.

It's very good. The last Tomato novel I read for three or four years made me think it was really good, and the only one I thought was really good was Cicada's Voice. As far as I'm concerned, this one is really good. The only drawback is that there are too few chapters and it's not enough to read [crying] [crying]

I have been reading online novels for several years, and I can say that this is the best and most touching book I have ever read. The only books that can compare with this book are Ye Fan's later years in "Shadow the Sky" and the fragments in "Dragon". It took me two days to read these 249 chapters on July 7 and July 8. Unfortunately, I am about to be a senior in high school and cannot keep reading. I hope the author will write another 700 chapters after the high school entrance examination next year, so that I can enjoy reading it. Come on, see you next year.

After reading the whole book, I really felt deeply. I feel that this book is not just a book, but more like a scroll of ink painting, but it does not lose its passion. This river and lake is the river and lake that I yearn for in my heart, with love and justice, you and me; each sword allows me to see the river, full of colors. Of course, there are also shortcomings, and the hasty ending makes people a bit caught off guard and feel disappointed. But I still like this book and hope to see more good books like this in the future! ——2023.7.16 Record

This book describes a world of gratification and love between children, just like Mr. Jin Yong's pen and ink, which brought me back to the "Jianghu". Among them, the male protagonist's love for the female protagonist was something that the reader had some suspicions about when he first read it. The author used clever story description to unravel this love little by little, and I couldn't help but feel happy in my heart. Before reading this book, I was still a little confused when my classmate recommended it to me, and it was gathering dust on the bookshelf. Fortunately, it is not too late. This is a good book. I hope more people can appreciate it. Come on, author, sweet dreams.

The novel is quite well written, and is different from the novels currently on the market. (Other novels feel like they follow the same routine. They write books according to the routine, and the writing efficiency is fast, but the content is empty and boring. I can't experience the joy of reading novels before.) It is very refreshing. I hope the author will stick to it and find his own way. Secondly, I hope that the author will continue to work hard, bravely reach new heights, and update as soon as possible while ensuring quality! ! ! (I read more than one hundred and sixty chapters in one day. I'm addicted to reading and can't stop reading.)

It's well written. I've read a lot about fantasy worlds, and I feel that the subject matter of this book is also very novel. Moreover, the single heroine is also well written. Although she has a beauty, she is not half-hearted. The framework is okay, in fact, it is relatively large, but maybe the author did not improve it better due to his own reasons, otherwise it would be a really good novel, but compared to most of the cool articles in Tomato, it is pretty good. The ending is also too hasty and leaves many holes unfilled, which is still a bit uncomfortable for readers. But in general, it can be regarded as a readable fantasy Jianghu novel, which is better than the ordinary novels. There is still a lot of room for improvement. I hope the author can work hard and write a better novel.

Come on, author, the writing is very good, but if there are more details and more space in the middle, I feel that the characters can be more fleshed out. It's best to leave some less obvious foreshadowings for the author. For example, the previous ghost girl had too many doubts. In short, the author's article is the best one I have read in a long time.