The Villain in the Book: the Heroine Breaks Off the Engagement at the Beginning!

The pacing in the later stages is quite good, but there are too many inner dramas. In the early stage, I said that I don't pay attention to the fate of the protagonist. I should kill him directly after he becomes stronger and then develop the next protagonist. I feel full of water, but I am still looking forward to the next plot.

As a newbie, I didn't follow other people's old tricks, didn't listen to my heart, didn't write a diary, didn't fall in love with the "heroine", and didn't start a harem. I innovated the plot myself. Although there were shortcomings in some sentences and plot deductions, as a newcomer, it was a great innovation.

Your writing is very good. There is no plot that rubs the reader's IQ to the ground. I hope you will continue to work hard. Come on, don't give up.

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I also like to write books and have written several! You can't see it without coding. The author's writing is very realistic. In other stories, harems are created just for the villain's value and to defeat the protagonist. There are too many cool stories and they are just mindless. Big cheers for the author! The main thing is that I am not a water lover, so I just have to look at the scoring criteria! No need to spray! Not accepted!

There are very few people with brains, but the subject matter is still a bit... Forget it, forget it, I have to give it 5 stars. After all, I watched it with my brain in mind.

It's more logical and realistic than similar ones. I like this type better. Among so many villains, I would give it the top three. Of course, everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. But if the protagonist is not given an equal point of conflict, it will become a completely crushing game.

I hope it's a harem. Don't be afraid of river crabs. With so many tomatoes, a harem is fine. Try to drive as many girls as you can so that some people will like to watch it.

Very nice villain novel

Come on come on come on come on

In the early stage, he was a salted fish, but in the later stage, he was possessed by the killing god.

I don't know why, I just like my various villain designs. At least I don't act like a dog licker and live my life.

It's pretty good, but there's a lot of inner drama

It's okay, but the villain seems to be a salty fish. I'm really looking forward to the subsequent plot. I'll give you four stars for fear of making you proud.

It's okay, I didn't blindly recruit girls, I have a bottom line

I feel like this book is well-written

Beautiful, highly recommended

Like this kind of book

Suits my taste

Come on, come on, come on

This book is great! I said it!

The villain is offended. Go bankrupt. . .

Really good, really good

It's okay, I just don't know why it's a bit weird after watching it

It's pretty good. It would be even better if there were a few chapters later where she would lead a happy life with a baby.

It's the same book I want to read. I support it. I absolutely support it.

Not bad, not bad, there is only one heroine who is not a scumbag.

Come to fulfill the promise, there is no limit of luck, the protagonist has no ink stains, and the most amazing thing is the women's pill, very creative, good luck to the author

Will you write another book in the future?

Except for the writing, everything is good