Da Qin: Turn in the Copy of Lingjiu Palace at the Beginning

I don't know what the author is writing about. In a martial arts world, there are some golden elixir stages, Yuan Ying and so on. What is he writing about?

I can't stand what nonsense I wrote. The author should just go to work in the factory!

It's full of filthy words, and the cultivation level is all written nonsense. Whose Yang Dingtian's martial arts is so high? The timeline is messed up. Why didn't Bai Qi die early?

Does a Swordsman in "The Swordsman" have the Nascent Soul stage to make jokes? It's not interesting at all.

He has a bad character and kills too hard.

The protagonist is just a tool man

I don't understand, what is written?

Not great, a bit messy

Very poisonous

Not bad! Author, come on

The title and plot are okay, but if you don't like the protagonist's personality, any little person can bully the protagonist.

The martial arts golden elixir of the sweeping monk is too fake, Qin Shi's martial arts should be much higher