Shocked: the Beautiful Master Turned Out to Be a Disciple and a Rebel Master

The vehicle is traveling at the speed of light, please pay attention to avoid it. This car... Bah this book, the speed... Bah the quality is very good, the author drives... Bah the update is very fast (❀｣╹□╹)｣*･

The writing is very good, but there is a problem. I have also read several female protagonists, and several of them have the same shortcomings. You must remember the female protagonist, you must have a sense of substitution, and the male and female characters must be well-balanced. For example, if two people look at each other, and the protagonist travels through time, he may not blush, but the woman cannot be too shy. In reality, if a man and a woman look at each other, will the man be shy? This is difficult to express, but it is also where the author is tested

In the later period, the author let himself go, and the whole journey was on the highway. The more I read, the more excited I became! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

The whole book takes the relationship between the male protagonist Su Yu and the female protagonist Mu Wanqiu as the main line, focuses on daily life, and presents readers with a touching but gentle, complex but delicate, sweet but sad love story. Let's talk about the advantages first. In the early stage, the emotional description between the male and female protagonists was very profound, and the psychological activities were very detailed. The main line is obvious, all branch lines serve the main line, and the context of the writing is clear at a glance. The main characters are created very successfully. The idea of ​​women being superior to men is novel and eye-opening, and it was even more eye-opening for me personally. Let's talk about the shortcomings. The writing is hasty, lacks polish, names are thrown in randomly, plot jumps make people confused, and other problems accompanies the entire text. The background introduction is too thin, and it is unknown what happened between the Human Emperor, the Sword God and the Demon God. It is also unclear why the Demon God loves and hates the Human Emperor, and why the reincarnation of the Sword God is still invincible while the reincarnation of the Human Emperor has about zero combat power. Overall, this book is more like a romance novel than a fantasy novel about immortality. Although it has shortcomings, it does not outweigh its advantages. I personally think it is very exciting and can give it a score of 9.4.

After reading this book, I was really confused. I wanted to write something but I didn't know where to start. . . This book is really well written and the plot is very sweet. It is the sweetest book I have ever read, no exaggeration at all. The writing in Jiuxiao Continent is very good, everyone's image is more prominent and the portrayal is great. As for Europa, many book friends feel that the author is being pretentious, but I don't think it is necessary. After all, it is part of this book, and it is a very important plot. It is not inferior to Jiuxiao, so it is worth reading. The most unforgettable part is the ending. I didn't expect it. There was a knife at the end, and it was a giant knife. It really made me so uncomfortable. I read the last few pages word by word, even with comments, and I didn't dare to skip even one word. When I saw it at the end, I felt like my heart was hammered. The picture kept spinning in my mind. The more I wanted to forget it, the more I couldn't forget it. I cried as soon as I finished reading it. Damn, I cry every time I think about it. Of course, some book friends said that this is a perfect ending. After all, life is beautiful only if it has regrets. The last sound Su Yu heard was the music played to him by Mu Wanqiu, the last note. What he saw was the scene of his favorite wife playing the piano for him under the peach blossom tree. It's impossible to say he has no regrets, but it's enough for him. Generally speaking, although this book is not long, the plot is still good, but the ending is indeed difficult for many book lovers to accept, and they still hope that the author will make a big extra story. Stop talking, and his grandpa wants to cry... [Almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

It's pretty good, it's the type I like, but too many updates are not enough.

It looks good and fits my hobbies and interests. Big cheers for the author!

I hope it won't be unfinished, that it will be updated continuously, and that there will be no supervision. That's all I want (๑•́ ₃ •̀๑)

I have an idea. This ending is a bit O. Henry, from the sweet beginning to the grand finale, but suddenly a knife comes at the end of the play, which catches people off guard. It is promiscuous but not disturbing. It fits the label of a single female protagonist. It has a regretful beauty. It is a very good novel.

This book took off in the early and middle stages, but in the later period, the character fell a little (too much fun), (don't teach the author to do things, it will make it difficult for others to write). Fortunately, it was saved in the end. It was originally a good book, but because of some ljdz's author's mentality, Damn [angry]! I couldn't hold back the last few sentences at the end of this book, which was originally quite sweet. [Crying] [Crying] Knife me, right? [Cry] [cry]. Fortunately, the last few readers continued to write, otherwise I would have been depressed for several days (what about the sweet article you promised the author). I hope the author will write a small side story. At least, let this story end happily. Finally, I would like to say that the author can really write about the heroine [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][sending heart] Also hope that some readers will read the entire book before commenting? If not, it means this book is not to your liking. Then what nonsense are you commenting on [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Beautiful, if you take the path of a female figure, you must implement it perfectly. Although there are some flaws, it does not affect

It's really beautiful Among the Tomato Heroine novels, I feel the most comfortable to read is that the single female protagonist is real or fake... I feel that it already has a bit of a harem flavor. Personally, the single female protagonist and the harem don't matter, it just feels... It doesn't feel like a single female protagonist. I hope there won't be any plots such as giving away the daughter.,, Giving away the daughter is really poisonous... I hope the author will live a happy and healthy life and work hard to update qwq

2023.5.19 Finished scattering flowers huh huh huh Let me talk about my overall feelings. The plot is quite good, there are a lot of twists and turns, and I like it. The shortcomings are that there are few fighting plots, complicated relationships, no swords and no specific cultivation level (maybe I have forgotten it). Why is he so weak when he goes to another continent with such a high cultivation level? Isn't the male protagonist's cultivation level quite high? Why is he shot unconscious by bandits? Sometimes he doesn't know someone is following him, and sometimes he is so smart that he will die. My evaluation is that it is better than most Xiuxian Nunzun, and it can be ranked in my top ten. I stopped reading it after reading more than sixty chapters before, but this time I listened to it in two days. The author's books are all very good, and most of them have been recommended. There are only one or two books that I haven't read yet. We are destined to see you again in the next book. [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post]

It feels good. I like reading this type of book. The author will keep up the good work. I am optimistic about you. Can you please add more words? It feels like it's completely inadequate

This book is divided into six volumes, each volume has its own unique charm and characteristics. : The Sword Sect chapter tells about the daily life of Su Yu and Mu Wanqiu; the Heart Demon chapter tells about Su Yu and Mu Wanqiu confessing their feelings to each other and getting together (in this article I want to say: finally getting together, it's not easy); the Human World chapter tells about Mu Wanqiu and Su Yu coming to the Gubar continent (the Western continent). Lu) took care of Wanqiu for more than ten years, and his hard work paid off. The master slowly recovered. He first met the lady Alice, and then the fish man was kidnapped to be his son-in-law, and later he escaped; Magic Chapter: He escaped to study at the Magic Academy because of Louise's pursuit. , Put on women's clothing, changed her name to Su Meier, and charmed thousands of girls and boys. Later, Lucia took a liking to her master and took care of her. She and Su Yu lived a life without shame; the ending chapter was unexpectedly difficult to reconcile... He fought with the demon Ye Baisu, Zhongyue and Wanqiu lost, and Su Yu was pregnant again. When he came to the cafe to see his other self again, Su Yu chose to sacrifice himself for his master to awaken Wanqiu's sword god power, killed the demon god with one sword, and finally passed away on Peach Blossom Island listening to his master's piano... The extra chapter is about Su Yu's supplement before entering the sword sect. The author's writing style is exquisite, the driving is invisible, the brakes are perfect, the characters are vivid, the master is cold, Su Yu is handsome, Zhong Yue's regret... But the ending is hard to understand... Later, the stunning woman never accepted another apprentice, nor played the piano again... The Taiyin fish seemed not as delicious as before. When she tasted the Taiyin fish again, the woman smiled and fed it to the people sitting opposite her, as if he was still there... Later, a man with a handsome face became the senior brother, and the stunning master practiced with him, eating lunar fish and wearing silk stockings to show him. The man also said: Master, I will always be by your side. I like you, master... The woman was startled and said: Do you like master? Xiaoyu...

How to say it. I think this ending is a bed ending, but to be honest. Having regrets is also a kind of beauty, isn't it? Don't think about the knife coming. Otherwise, this novel is still the best among mediocrity. This ending deepens it. I think this is the best article I've ever read. We often think that the protagonist has a protagonist aura, cannot die, is invincible, has a system and so on. But it is rare to stand out and persist for love and die for love. It happens to be a two-way love Please forgive me for not speaking well, self-evaluation (thank you)

This is the second book I have read by the author. The content is lighthearted and funny, and there are also exciting parts. However, the ending feels a bit unsuitable for my taste.

I have read many female novels, and this is a rare masterpiece. Come on, the author, reminders and gifts will be arranged. (Please say goodbye to eunuchs, it's not easy to meet someone who suits your taste)

Everything about the plot is very good. I haven't seen the back part yet. The front part is very good. Sometimes there are some typos, but they are very few and it is easy to understand. I guess the author writes by hand, so sometimes some words will be changed to his similar form.

This book is actually really good [Sending my heart] From Kyushu to the West, every place has a different plot [I learned it] But what I want to say the most is that it would be great if the author could write the process of se se in more detail [shy]

This book is indeed wonderful. Although the ending is a bit regretful, it is generally good. From all aspects, it seems that the male protagonist's personality is not clear and contrasting, but the speed of the car is very good... Mu Wanqiu's character is relatively well-shaped, but Zhongyue's transformation is a little too fast. In the beginning, Zhongyue was willing to give up anything for profit, but later she became very affectionate towards Su Yu. The story may be a bit short, but overall it was pretty good. I originally wanted to give it three stars, but I hope the author can work harder, so I give it five stars to encourage it.

This book has relatively detailed foreshadowing and foreshadowing. The plot can be connected from the title to the end, from Eastern fantasy to Western fantasy, and then combined into one structure. It is novel and eye-catching. This book is very detailed in the description of the characters' emotional exchanges. Both the characters' words and actions can stir people's hearts and make people's hearts feel like feathers caressing them. The ending is a bit sloppy and feels a bit rushed, and there are some minor mistakes in the writing in the middle (which affects reading), but the overall reading experience is very enjoyable and it is a good book.

The writing is very good. When I read about 60, the content made me feel that I am not a heroine anymore 😂😂. After reading a few chapters below, I feel that way again. So far, the writing is very good.

It's very good, and the updates are pretty fast. Although it's a bit short, I still give it five stars. I hope there will be more in the future.

It's really well written, and it's the best one I've seen so far among Master's articles. The only flaw is the death of the main character at the end. People have joys and sorrows, and the moon waxes and wanes. Since ancient times, it has been difficult to have both.

How should I put it, this is the first time I read this kind of novel, which is a bit subversive in my outlook, but I feel very happy and exciting. The plot relationship is a bit interesting. Hahaha, but I still feel like there's not much left behind, so I'll give it 4 stars.

The plot is good, but the later stage is bad, and the ending is a big deal, huh. . . . How to say it. Love it or hate it, the characters are well created and the background transitions are very natural. I also really enjoyed watching it. I'll give it 5 stars. Come on, the author. The second part will be even better [Blow Kiss]

This book is more suitable to be published on female channels. This is a novel about gender-changing female channels cultivating immortality. It lacks the soul of male channels. Those who like to watch male channels should not read it. Wrong rating

Okay, compared to the previous ones, this one is really great

It's very beautiful, very beautiful, super beautiful. I'm asking you, the author, if you can write more, please.