Pirate********

This book is a remake, I hope you readers will like it!

Yes, it's quite novel. The most important thing is that Momonosuke is dead👍👍👍

Author, this book is very good (≧∇≦*) Momonosuke is dead. For this reason, I must give you five stars👍

This novel is very good. Your novel about killing pig horns is very enjoyable.

This is the most enjoyable Pirates fanfic I've ever seen on Tomato [laughs]

Nice! ! You have your own ideas, and you are not too rigid about the lineup. A truly free person can be a little more careful when writing. Like the Shao Shao fruit at the auction, why didn't you write it and grab it? Also, I didn't write clearly about Tuntun Fruit! ! Otherwise, it would be very painful for obsessive-compulsive readers like us.

Come on! Author! Even Momonosuke gets full marks, and the novel is so good. If it hadn't only been 5 stars, I would have given you 10 stars!

Very good. He takes a stand based on his initial experience, unlike other protagonists who are crazy about licking!

I was looking for a book in which Yamato was the heroine. I was looking for a book in which Yamato was the heroine. I accidentally discovered this magical book. This book fulfilled all my fantasies about an invincible pirate king. He stepped on the four emperors and beat the celestial beings with his hands. It was very exciting. It was okay in terms of sweetness with Yamato, the heroine. She does not have diabetes. This is very regrettable, but other aspects made me want to continue reading. Five-star recommendation. I hope the author will update faster and let me see more.

It's pretty good so far, I hope it just has a female protagonist named Yamato Harem Literature, Wine and Harem Literature Bar. Currently, Yamato and Robin, the empress, don't have so many emotional dramas.

I have to say, I feel quite comfortable watching it now. I recommend it.

This book is quite good. Although the pace is a bit fast, it is at least within my acceptable range. There is nothing too toxic about the whole book. Although there are a little bit of emotional scenes, it's a good read, so don't worry too much about it.

First of all, I came here because of the title of the book, and then I read the content of the book, the protagonist's IQ is online, and the plot is also good, which won my heart. Finally, I give you a five-star review [like]

The writing is very good, especially the part where Momonosuke is killed at the beginning is very happy.

Camp: Kaido camp. Personality: Suitable for being a navy or a Celestial Dragon, but accidentally became a pirate. It's better than Zerfa's non-killing doctrine. For most characters, he will only kill them if they are defeated. He will save them if they can. As long as they are pirates, they will all be killed, except for Bucky. It's just that the navy is quite troublesome. It's like a dog-skin plaster. It loses and then chases after it. Harem: Although there is only one included in Chapter 80, it is obvious that it is a harem because the groundwork has been laid and the other women will either like him or remain single until death. The male protagonist has a little quirk and likes the female protagonist to wear revealing and special outfits to express herself. Let others appreciate it too. The rest of the pirates are not lewd, they only admire her. It's similar to the way the protagonists of One Piece wore their upper chest half exposed in the later period and changed their pants into men's boxer briefs. If they were modern hot pants, they could be even shorter. This is the outfit worn by Yamato, the first female protagonist. It was worn at the request of the male protagonist, and the subsequent female protagonists will be no different. After all, Yamato is the most conservatively dressed in the original work.

I finally found a pirate novel that I can read.

Throughout the whole book, the concept and story are very smooth, the writing is very interesting, funny but not frivolous, and overall it is very good. But there are also a lot of bad points, such as chapters 99-100, which should be one missing chapter, and there are some other small problems that I can't remember. However, the flaws do not hide the flaws, and it is still a good work. In the end, Luffy's ending was a bit sad, mainly because he felt sorry for old Garp. He was getting old and his grandson was gone. It is set in the article that you can eat the second devil fruit, but if you are strong, you can consume your stamina until the other devil fruit is expelled from the body. If the protagonist has the dark fruit, can he activate his ability to suck Nika out when he feeds another fruit to Luffy, and defeat Luffy by the way? There are just enough fragments of the godhead, and the fruit is also available.

It's nice to watch, but how can the protagonist, Kaido's son, be so civilized! It should be bold and rough [note] [laughing evilly]

I saw Chapter 18. Killing Momotaro deserves 5 stars. Can anyone tell me if there will be a single female protagonist? I feel like the male protagonist wants to start a harem [facepalm]. Although I don't hate harems, I feel that in this subject, Yamato and I are siblings and can be said to have a confirmed relationship. Now that I have a harem, I want to run away. After watching a little bit of Pirates, I hope I won't let it go too far, but I support that Luffy can be killed later. It's better to die miserably. The cheater must be dealt with. Then Oda comes to the rescue and kills Oda as well [smiles] The protagonist in the article is too invincible. His originally powerful body is already invincible. Adding the Dark Fruit is equivalent to physical invincibility, but the fruit's ability is still ineffective against him. And there is almost no process of becoming stronger. He is almost invincible at the beginning, and the hang-up is too unsolvable. In fact, it is enough to give him a self-created fantasy beast species, and let the protagonist slowly develop the fruits. After all, he has the final say in any self-created abilities. He is already at the top of the world at the beginning. This seems to have no desire to continue. I think it is good to go to sea as a major general or lieutenant general of the Navy at the beginning, and then get involved in major events to promote the growth of the protagonist. In the end, I didn't expect it to be a harem. It's just that the book gave me the impression that it had a single female protagonist at the beginning, so I got into it from the beginning. The main reason is that the protagonist is too invincible, and I still like the development flow. Just my personal opinion [eating melon]

Ok, I have finished reading this one. Here comes the next One Piece fanfic. First of all, five stars are necessary. Momonosuke is dead, but his death was a bit hasty. Why not torture him and then die. I have read the endings of many One Piece fanfics, but I think this one is definitely the best. The pits buried in it are filled, and there are easter eggs. In short, the most regrettable thing in this book is probably the Empress Hancock, I don't know or Did the author forget it or something? Empress Hancock never appeared later, so the emotional line with the protagonist is gone. In short, the ending of this book is the best among the dozen or so books I have read [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying Kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss]

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The overall plot is brisk, with a complete framework and smooth logic. Although the male protagonist is the kind of person who is determined to achieve his goals or means, the story is still lighthearted and enjoyable. (Personal advice after reading this, when you are in a bad mood, just throw it away for the best viewing effect [note]) ૮ ºﻌºაStand guard [ask for attention] [top post]

It's quite exciting. You can read it, but the score won't be that high. There are no obvious shortcomings after reading it, but there are no obvious advantages. After reading it, I just finished reading it. I don't even have any thoughts after reading the book. I personally rated it 8.4.

The whole book is generally good, and it can be regarded as an invincible and refreshing article. For me, a 4-star rating is pretty fair. After all, a thousand people are a thousand Hamlets. Tomato is still a free novel. You don't have to read it if you don't like it. It's not really that bad of giving it one or two stars.

Very, very beautiful. Damn Momonosuke is dead, so happy⊙▽⊙

The writing is quite good, and the killing is decisive. Unlike some novels, it is clear that it is necessary to have strength. He knows that leaving the opponent behind is a hidden danger, but he just doesn't kill him... I am also drunk, so this one is perfect. Some novels have the name of killing Momonosuke, but then they don't kill him until the end. This one really kills him at the beginning, perfect.

This book is really great, I like it very much. The storyline is compact and the characters are vivid and vivid, making people immersed in it and unable to extricate themselves. The author has a deep understanding of the One Piece world, and his interpretation of the characters is also very unique. As a One Piece fan, I give this book full marks!

Although I just read it not long ago, the chapter about killing Momonosuke was really cool [laughs]

How to say it? It's a book that I feel good about, but I always felt uncomfortable after killing the main character Luffy, but Momonosuke was ripped off. I agree with the five stars.

Regardless of whether the writing is good or not, killing Momonosuke must be five stars [punch][punch][punch]