I Just Want to Finish the Plot, but the Empress Won't Let Me

Di Ji: Is it a five-star review? Empress: Have you collected it? The First Talented Woman: Are you following the update? The first one must be the author's, the content is wonderful, the author owns it and sells it himself. It's a million words long, my first fantasy book, tsk tsk [laughing evilly]

Author, let me do the math for you. You write one word per second, which is 3600 per hour. There are 24 hours in a day. You sleep for 6 hours, eat for an hour, and wash for an hour. With the remaining 15 hours, you can write 54,000 words. A chapter of 2,000 words can write almost 27 chapters. But what do you mean by only updating it so little?

How to say it? I have read a lot of novels about villains, and most of the plots are the same. Regardless of the protagonist or the villain, it seems that they are missing a factor that makes the flesh and blood of the characters in the novel-ideas. In many cases, they act with passion, and their work is "smooth sailing, which makes people feel very smooth." This is what everyone often calls "cool writing." However, I personally feel that the charm of reading should lie in the process rather than the so-called "coherent" plot, so I always feel that this kind of book is missing something. I still quite recognize and like this book, and it more or less satisfies my desire for a "villain story." The protagonist also Yes, the other characters are well portrayed. For this book, if you swallow it whole, you will lose more than you gain. (After all, the author will leave some small hints from time to time.) So for friends who are reading this book, I still recommend taking your time. Even if it may have some flaws, it doesn't hurt. Isn't this the joy of reading?

Just started watching the second one. To be honest, I have been playing with people my whole life. Will it be useful for you to change your ways and do good to others in this life? Can you make up for the harm you caused to others by being kind to them after being reborn? In fact, it feels like you will choose another one only when you get tired of playing one. Let's see what happens next.

It can be said that this is the only article in Tomato that is about the fantasy rebirth of villains. The rest of the villain rebirth stories are basically urban. I really like the plot.

If it doesn't collapse, it is a good book. Believe me, a good book will not be like a pearl covered in dust. When I write down the details, I feel like I am asking about the world of mortals.

I've only watched a little bit, but I feel so uncomfortable. Hey, none of the other heroines and supporting characters have firmly chosen this Lu from the beginning of their previous lives. I didn't treat the male protagonist well in my previous life, and I was already defiled by the destiny male protagonist, and I still can't forget my memory after rebirth. This is not a kind of uncleanness. Think about it in the future, when I am with Lu Zaoren, maybe from time to time, clips of the previous life and the destiny male protagonist will pop up. Damn, it makes me sick just thinking about it. It's better to choose the Third Princess. I've always liked Lu, and don't care about Lu's power or anything like that. It's a good one-liner. The salted fish will be messed up for a lifetime. The destined hero will not repeat what he did in his previous life under those who are reborn. There is nothing to worry about. Four stars is to avoid lowering the rating. I will review it a little more and give the actual rating later.

It's nice. I like this harem story better.

1. In other words, the original protagonist has a system, but the villain does not have a system... (Read Chapter 12) 2. Let's do it again. Last time, the original protagonist staged a tomb of gods, sacrificed blood to everyone, and lived as long as heaven.

This book is a large-scale takeover scene. That Di Ji, that is, that Empress, was also reborn. With hatred for the second male lead, I "fell in love with the male protagonist" Lu Wuchen, and Di Ji's cry of "Brother Wuchen" made me want to vomit. It feels like it's shouting, I'm here to take over, old man! After the male protagonist has gone through the plot once and is reborn, the male protagonist still has to walk the same old path and follow the plot. I have read more than ten chapters. I respect you as a man.

This good-looking book actually scored less than 9 points, and there were several "Poison" books next door that actually scored more than 9 points. The author hopes that the heroine who will appear later will have true love for the protagonist in two lives, and no longer fall in love with the Son of Destiny in the previous life, only to find out how good the protagonist is and then fall in love with the protagonist. Who can bear the feeling of being a spare tire? The biggest failure is the third princess. To be honest, the protagonist's attitude towards the third princess is really disgusting. Don't treat her as a human being just because she is not the heroine.

It looks good. If you like harems, you can check it out. But I don't like it very much, so that's the end of it.

This book is really good. The images of each female character are deeply rooted in people's hearts. The emotional experiences of the male protagonist and each female protagonist are also perfect.

Reborn: After being deceived by a scumbag, he looks for a spare tire. (This is my feeling after watching the plot of Di Ji's appearance. The description is too unimaginable.) However, I saw that the author has been commenting on lightning protection, so I gave it five stars. Too poisonous. Can't stand it. All the female protagonists in the previous life had a crush on the male protagonist. This world suddenly fell in favor of the villain male protagonist. Goodbye. Went to see Thief Cao. For those who only like cool writing, I can't stand this beginning.

Coming from Lu Heng, the writing style is very good, the cliché of lots of tomatoes will become stale after a while. I hope the author will use his imagination, the routine is the hot topic, and the follow-up is the selling point. Come on! 😊

Come on, author, I was quite resistant to this subject matter at first, but later I found that the plot was particularly exciting and the characters were described in detail, so I kept following it. (But I think it's enough to say that Emperor Ji's face is like a silver basin. Everyone's aesthetics are different. If you don't like it, don't spray it) But I feel that it is too much for the protagonist to blindly want to return to Earth. You say that you are the one who controls the wind and rain in the fantasy world, reaching for stars and fighting, but you insist on going back to be the rich second generation. This is very unreasonable. If time on earth stood still, there would be no need to be in such a hurry. If not, the world will have changed when we return, so we might as well stay.

I still like watching it, but I feel like no one is watching it so I won't update it anymore. It's such a shame.

How can I put it this way? In my opinion, this book is indeed embarrassing, the kind that makes people dig out three rooms and one living room with their feet, but this is only based on the perspective of God. In reality, the heroine will definitely think that she is the only one who has been reborn, and will naturally want to make up for it. Moreover, writing a book is actually not very easy, especially writing a good book, which requires a lot of ideas. People who have never written a book will not understand. The relationships between various characters are complicated, and everything must be taken into consideration. This reflects the quality of a book. Those books that can be conferred as gods take everything into consideration and make people feel comfortable to read, so they can be conferred as gods. I think this book is okay. Some of the awkward points can only be said that the author is not proficient in writing books, but it is already very exciting. Come on, author, and give it a five-star review.

I just started watching it and gave it five stars. Brothers, wait for my follow-up. After reading Chapter 30, the empress of this generation has accepted the protagonist as her direct disciple. A dynasty actually dares to put the protagonist in jail. It's so damn wise,

I highly recommend everyone to watch it, I cannot be the only one to suffer [laughing and crying]

"In that case, I will prepare the travel list in the next two days and send it to Jiang Zuocheng!" Gu Dongfeng said, then turned around to get a pen and start drafting documents. But at this moment, Zhang Tie on the side suddenly said: "Master, is the captain still Senior Brother Jiang this time?" Without thinking, Gu Dongfeng was about to nod, but before he nodded, he caught a glimpse of Lu Feng beside him. Suddenly a bold idea came to his mind. Since Lu Feng is also going to participate in this Dao Discussion Conference this time, why not give him the position of captain. When the sense of responsibility and mission is added to him, why can't he enhance his sense of belonging to the sect? Thinking of this, Gu Dongfeng suddenly opened his mouth with joy, then coughed lightly at Zhang Tie and said: "Hey! Well, this time the captain will not be handed over to Jiang Zuo for the time being!" "Who should I leave it to? After all, Senior Brother Jiang has so much experience. Wouldn't it be safe to leave it to someone else?" Zhang Tie asked with a frown. "What's wrong with this? The leader of the team this time is Elder Lu in front of you! It is safer for an elder to lead a team than for a disciple to lead a team!" Gu Dongfeng said without raising his head. After Zhang Tie heard this, he was stunned. Elder? How did this guy become an elder? Yesterday we were all of the same generation, but now you have become our elder. No one can accept this easily! However, since you are an elder, you can indeed understand if you look a little more handsome! Zhang Tie is such a person with strong acceptance ability.

Is this narration a bit too much? After reading so many chapters, there are not many battle scenes, but there are really many narrations. Too many narrations make the characters not vivid enough, like flowing water. The narrative is straightforward and makes me a little tired. But overall it is okay. This is your first time writing, right? I hope the author can improve his writing skills. 😂😂😂

Overall it's pretty good, a bit lighthearted and enjoyable, but the main character's name is always wrong in the later part, which is quite annoying, so I gave it four stars. , But the ending was basically explained, but the ending felt a bit hasty. I went straight to the end within dozens of chapters. I called it a good guy. The realm also rose as fast as flying. There was also the final battle. She still came back to the earth. Although the empress also came back in the end, what happened to others? But if you say the empress is happy enough or in a good mood, you can take her back and see. This is still acceptable. After chasing for many days, it is the end. It is worth watching.

Personally, I don't think it's okay, unlike what they said in the comment area, as long as the author doesn't write a sad ending when it comes to the finale [awkward laugh] [awkward laugh] Well, come on, author

Except for Di Ji's emotional line which is not good, everything else is pretty good. I have read a lot of book reviews and it is indeed like what they said. Di Ji just thinks of the hero after she dies. My thoughts make her chase her husband to the crematorium. This really cannot be too good for her [Sending Hearts] This man mainly wants to be nice to her again. If it is the same as in the previous life, if the author writes that Di Ji accepts the male protagonist now and does not think that the male protagonist is stalking again, it will be inconsistent with the previous one. My suggestion is really to let her chase her husband to the crematorium. I have read many articles about the female protagonist regretting licking the dog and then licking her back. If the male protagonist knows that she licked the dog back and then treated her well, he will definitely be sprayed. Delayed love is cheaper than the grass on the roadside.

Each heroine has a description, which is very humorous, but there are more and more narrative foreshadowings later. Although it is humorous, the progress of the plot makes me uncomfortable. The heavy words are difficult to adjust. I may be the one who has difficulty adjusting. The overall feeling is not bad. Author, if you are still motivated, please come on

The plot is pretty good, keep up the good work, author! Good grades are gained slowly, don't give up halfway.

Five stars for this type of stuff🌝🌝🌝

It's very interesting. I've been reading this book for so long and I still don't know who the heroine is?

After reading more than ten chapters, there were too many inner dramas. I was bored. I didn't like the male and female protagonists. I died in my previous life and never went back. I have to die again in this life. I'm really speechless. I'm being led by the system. I'd better give it a four-star rating.