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The volume of this book is over 2 million, and it is all original. There is no reference for the world view or plot. Therefore, the update will be a bit slow. Please bear with me and hope for your support.

Good, very good, very good. The article is not like other family stories. I start with the mecha puppet. The protagonist also has an online IQ. The supporting characters have distinctive personalities. It's not bad. The content is exciting. I hope it will be updated soon. Please add more.

Very good. This book is not like other books that make me feel frustrated and frustrated. The main character and supporting characters are very humane, sophisticated, realistic and smooth and comfortable to read.

😎👣The Emperor Zun arrived and left a footprint. The subject matter of this book is good. 👍Although the author's writing style has shortcomings, it is still very exciting and beautiful. It is worth reading and collecting, and it is worth owning. 🤓The author will continue to encourage you. Keep up the hard work and look forward to watching the exciting chapters in the future. We can only stop here at this time. There will be a new chapter in the future to fight again and conquer this place. 😜Emperor is gone... ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Very good, this is the purest family novel I have read so far.

Speed ​​up updates. 10,000 Chapters per day. Each chapter should be no less than 10,000 words, okay? There are only a few dozen chapters in the new book, which is not very interesting to read.

I read it for dozens of minutes. The subject matter is very novel, but some sentences are incomprehensible, but I will keep reading. Come on, author!

The writing is still good. I hope the quality can be guaranteed. Keep writing. Come on.

The writing is very good, but it is slow and the pace is very slow. If you like cool writing, don't read it. The development is also step-by-step. It has the feeling of a lifetime series. Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it. It was originally a chapter, but it ended at chapter 400, alas.

The author has given this book a good subject matter, and the writing style is also good. It seems to be quite smooth. I hope to continue to work harder. Support the author greatly! Come on＾0＾~

This is my first time watching a family drama, and I personally think it's really good, really good! [Laughing] I personally hate the routine of being crushed by technology as soon as it comes. This book gives me a more reasonable feeling and I can accept it. The other settings are also more reasonable. Ah! That's great! Really good! [Laughing]

I highly recommend this book to those who like family development (if you don't like harem stories, you can quit). The logic is stronger than similar books. It's not a brainless villain who just kills someone. The story development and world setting are very complete. I don't think it needs to be said about the bad ending. I haven't read many books on Tomato that haven't ended badly. Moreover, this bad ending just has a hasty ending and is not a eunuch. I can accept it personally (what's not bad about it) Please recommend the last part of the book. I haven't seen it after reading it for so long, and Shuhuang Square is not very reliable.) The only drawback is the common problem, the character description is stiff, and there is still a problem with the emotional line, but it does not affect the rhythm of the whole book. If you are more interested in the emotional line, you can change it. Personally, I deducted one star for the emotional line, and the others are considered to be above average (there are too many white texts, and peers are setting off, so I can't help you if you don't want to) After reading it, although the character description is flawed, it is countless times better than Xiaobai's novel. The four stars encourage the author to continue creating and not follow the old assembly line path. I also hope to write a sequel. If it comes out, I will give it five stars.

Very good, this novel gave me a bright feeling. I finally understand why the author said in the introduction that it is different from the routines we are familiar with. Other immortality novels are always far away from life and reality. This novel gave me a simple feeling that it was based on fantasy but integrated into the connotation of real life. I saw a lot of people in the comment area left after looking at it, probably because they felt it didn't fit the formula of Shuangwen. The conventional thinking is that the protagonist must be awesome Klass, the whole world must be a foil for the protagonist, and the heroine must be breathtakingly beautiful, eclipsing the world. I think this is also the reason why the rating is not very high. The book is a good book, but its style is unique. Some people like it and some don't. If you are tired of reading mindless and cool articles, you can try it. It really means starting from a young age and reflecting the situation of the entire civilization through describing the experiences of small people.

I have read dozens of chapters and I think it is very good. It is very suitable for my taste. It is not easy to find a good book. I hope the author can keep writing until the end. I will keep chasing it. I hope the author will not chase a lot like me before. After writing, he suddenly disappears. It is really uncomfortable. It is like kissing a girlfriend next to me. When I am about to take the next step, my girlfriend suddenly runs away. It is really uncomfortable.

Damn it, mechas are a man's romance. This is what men should watch, brothers. Everything else is good, but updates are too damn slow. I have some support from the mine at home, so give the author a little. Let him increase his speed.

Recommended excellent books, interesting for ordinary people to read. This hanger can be large or small.

It is very different from some family novels. It has novel ideas and the pace is not slow. In some places, the writing may not be very good due to the rhythm and plot. However, after reading this book, I felt that it is not a brainless novel and it has new ideas and can be rated as a 5-star.

This is the first book I have read about the rise of a cultivating immortal family. There is no comparison. Let me tell you about my feelings: The male protagonist uses puppets as the basis, creates mechas, hot weapons, is worldly wise, and treats others with humility. He leads the family from Qi training to establishing the Great Southern Immortal Dynasty step by step. The male protagonist's character and role are solid. I think he plays a supporting role. I feel that the Golden Toad setting It is relatively clear (maybe it is because there are many interspersed in the middle, and it is also mentioned in the follow-up, which I feel is more interesting). There is a point that the Li family's direct daughter's team should have some effect in the subsequent turmoil based on the character. However, since the first monster war, there has been no drama. I feel that this line is broken more abruptly. The overall feeling is pretty good. All the characters stand up well. There is no inconsistency between the characters. The plot is also relatively compact. There are highlights in each stage of development. In short, it can be watched. It can be watched.

Not bad, not bad, pretty good-looking, but the character collapses a bit later on, but in fact the change in character is very reasonable. The boy who slays dragons eventually becomes a dragon. The protagonist cannot be said to have become a dragon, but his thoughts have indeed changed a lot.

This is a very good read. The background of the story is set well, and there is no darkness in the world of immortality right from the beginning, which creates space for the story to unfold and the protagonist to grow. Some details in the writing are not right, and there is also a lack of handling of the characters' emotions. Overall, it's a very good novel! He was considered a eunuch, but his back collapsed. Some regrets! A three-point critical hit.

A very nice book. It's just that the economic system is a bit messy. There are also general descriptions of emotions. Overall, this book is at least 9.2 Or above. Maybe there are too many children in Tomato, so this type is low.

It looks good, but it's so short😭 it's not enough to look at! ! !

Well written, with a solid foundation and thread, very good!

The writing is very good, but it can be updated more every dayヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉﾞ❀~

The front is good, and the middle is okay. I like watching the children's part, but the children's part is not fully developed; the mecha puppet is pretty good, but when it first appeared, the scene was huge and lucrative, which made me think that he was the only one in the world who could do it; the final ending, as the author himself said, quickly threw out the remaining parts, was relatively rounded; overall, it is not a family story, more like a personal rise, and then the theme of cultivating puppets, the two are relatively novel and worth watching

The writing style is very good, especially the description. I particularly like the vivid descriptions of objects, characters, and scenes. The characters are well created and have distinct personalities. The plot is also great and the pace is fast. The subject matter is good and very innovative. IQ is online, strategic, and good at being clever (this is not a derogatory term). The very bad thing is the emotional line between the male and female protagonists. Two strangers with zero knowledge fell into each other within less than a day of meeting. This is too hasty. Good guy, another cutie pops up who is scheduled to be kissed by a baby. Personally, I prefer stories with a bit of emotional foundation. The author's writing is a bit too fast, like riding a rocket, but the writing is not bad, and it still has sugar content. There are two wives behind me, so it's a harem, so don't enter if you don't like it. The supporting character who plays with bugs is really a bit disgusting to write. Although it is to bury this pit, there is no need to use such a character because the character of this character is not good. All the holes have been filled, and some things that may seem unreasonable will be explained clearly later. Some places are indeed not good enough, but 8.6 Is really not that high. Personally, I feel it is at least a 9. After all, the writing fills in a lot of shortcomings. I have also seen bad articles on Tomato that are around 9. This one is really good. At least the writing has surpassed some authors on Tomato. The ending is also considered satisfactory. Although the latter volume is written very quickly, the author also provides explanations. It has flaws, but deserves five stars.

I changed my review after reading this book. Generally speaking, it is not bad. There is only one problem in the first few chapters (the emotional scenes are cut too quickly, resulting in no foreshadowing and a foggy feeling). Unfortunately, it was the editor's suggestion, and there is almost no possibility of modification. It'll be fine after that. It's pretty good to watch. Don't look at the disadvantages٩(๑•̀ω•́๑)۶

The books written three or four years ago are generally good. I didn't listen to the book and I didn't plan to read it. I got into it after reading a few chapters. I haven't read a book for a long time. It's not long and I read it in two or three days. Generally speaking, the book is not poisonous and has some laughs, but it's not very brilliant. The author didn't finish it well at the end and was a bit hasty. He also explained the reason. You can take a look at the book shortage.

This is the first time I have read a novel with this theme. It is very interesting. Come on, author!

It's very nice, but the tempo in the later stages should not be too fast, and it should not be the same as Eternity.