An ordinary college student lives inside the body of a Taoist priest who was sealed thousands of years ago. In the eyes of others, he is an unpredictable weirdo, a master of martial arts, and a top multi-millionaire!
In front of Xuan Dao, he is a breathtaking miraculous stranger, the top expert in Xuan Dao!
Reader comments
Was this plot copied and pasted by a robot? The male protagonist who licks the dog with silk thread is so disgusting
At present, the plot is a bit short. Although many small details have been noticed, and the author's common verbose behavior is relatively less, overall it is not bad. The biggest question right now is whether there will be a female protagonist? Is the heroine single? Is it possible to have no heroine? Is it feasible to put the inheritance of the family line aside and focus on depicting the protagonist Qiu Han? In the current 40 to 50 chapters, when it comes to the relationship between boys and girls, it is too coy. If you are a little more relaxed, the readers are all their own. I can edit as many popular memes, catchphrases, and cars as possible. Also, can the author be more active and interactive? (Suggestion: The theme needs to be written around "There is a thousand-year Taoist priest living in my body". Since the thousand-year Taoist priest is "my" partner, and both parties are male, the Taoist priest is tough and domineering, and the protagonist is indecisive. You can write it based on the personalities of the two running into each other. It is not recommended to go too far in the early stage. Yu pretends to be 13, especially in front of women. Although he is an invincible type, he can rely on the soul Chu Yun in his body in the early stage, but in the middle and later stages, the protagonist needs to learn by himself and become a strong person. Secondly, pay attention to typos when typing. Although there are some, typos can easily affect reading. The author's understanding of the article and the meaning of the expression will cause the reader's interest and mood to waver when reading, which is not good for the interests of both parties. Finally, as the plot develops, the overall reading is faster and more enjoyable, but there are still some pitfalls. The author must pay attention to this. One thing is that it is easy to dig but difficult to fill the hole. The structure must be rigorous. It is best to list an outline or some subtitles of stories. You can write articles together, but you must not write them in vain; you can update them slowly, but the quality must gradually improve; you can write less, but don't give up writing "prose" halfway.
Was this plot copied and pasted by a robot? The male protagonist who licks the dog with silk thread is so disgusting
At present, the plot is a bit short. Although many small details have been noticed, and the author's common verbose behavior is relatively less, overall it is not bad. The biggest question right now is whether there will be a female protagonist? Is the heroine single? Is it possible to have no heroine? Is it feasible to put the inheritance of the family line aside and focus on depicting the protagonist Qiu Han? In the current 40 to 50 chapters, when it comes to the relationship between boys and girls, it is too coy. If you are a little more relaxed, the readers are all their own. I can edit as many popular memes, catchphrases, and cars as possible. Also, can the author be more active and interactive? (Suggestion: The theme needs to be written around "There is a thousand-year Taoist priest living in my body". Since the thousand-year Taoist priest is "my" partner, and both parties are male, the Taoist priest is tough and domineering, and the protagonist is indecisive. You can write it based on the personalities of the two running into each other. It is not recommended to go too far in the early stage. Yu pretends to be 13, especially in front of women. Although he is an invincible type, he can rely on the soul Chu Yun in his body in the early stage, but in the middle and later stages, the protagonist needs to learn by himself and become a strong person. Secondly, pay attention to typos when typing. Although there are some, typos can easily affect reading. The author's understanding of the article and the meaning of the expression will cause the reader's interest and mood to waver when reading, which is not good for the interests of both parties. Finally, as the plot develops, the overall reading is faster and more enjoyable, but there are still some pitfalls. The author must pay attention to this. One thing is that it is easy to dig but difficult to fill the hole. The structure must be rigorous. It is best to list an outline or some subtitles of stories. You can write articles together, but you must not write them in vain; you can update them slowly, but the quality must gradually improve; you can write less, but don't give up writing "prose" halfway.