Reborn in Another World with a Red Alert Army

As an author, it's not too much for me to give a five-star rating. Who agrees? Who objects? 😏

I can see that the author is trying hard to write a good plot, but the plot in your mind is different from what you wrote. You may think that what you wrote is good, but we readers feel that our intelligence is insulted. Listen to my advice, remember the world in your heart, and then write this book properly after you have furthered your studies and become a talented person. To put it bluntly, the writing of this book is really unsatisfactory. You can give up. But I don't mean to give up just now, but for the sake of better books in the future. (Objective evaluation, don't comment if you don't like it.)

Not bad, very beautiful

The progress is too slow. It has been so long. There are only a few soldiers. I remember that there are at least a hundred others. And this novel, is it a rebellion or something? I think it is better to rebel if it is a different world.

I don't know why the protagonist feels a bit childish?

Very good, I like it better

Good. . . . . . . . .

Just tear your brain off and kick it, right? 😓

When I saw the red alert, I clicked here.

Good