The School Bully Is Pretending to Be Pitiful Again Today

The writing style is fine, but the content arrangement is a bit messy. I suggest you write an outline before writing next time, so that the chapters will not be too messy in the later stage. ^O^

This was my first novel, and I was full of enthusiasm for it, but the result was unsatisfactory. In the middle, I stopped updating for nearly a year due to some reasons. Later, I felt unwilling to do so, so I unhidden it and added the ending to Xiao Bai. For my first male protagonist, he should have a happy ending, and that was my original intention. Speaking of which, I am satisfied with it, although the data is not very good. Unfortunately, there is only a hasty ending. I will keep writing, because I like it, so I should stick to it.

Forgive me for not understanding!

Forgive me, I really didn't understand

Although there are hundreds of millions of points of confusion, it is not bad to break it down into short stories. I hope the author will update it soon [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

Very beautiful, come on

This book is the most confusing book I have ever read. I was really dazzled while reading it. I didn't know who was who, but I gradually figured it out later. Although the plot is a bit complicated, it is still good. Keep up the good work, the author. When will Xiaobai and Amu get together? Hurry up. I am so anxious. I am also looking forward to the story of Ji Mojing and the vampire. Come on, come on, come on!

I don't understand much, but I understand 80% of it. Give the author a five-star rating for his efforts. Although I am not good at math and my thinking is not clear.

I really didn't understand it the first time, so I read it several times and it really looks good.

It's so nice and beautiful [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss], I really like Xiaobai Ye and Lin Zangzang [shy][shy][shy]

Ahem, I think it looks pretty, Y(^_^)Y