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Fantasy yet graceful, the twists and turns of the story make people sigh that life is full of charms. It's a short story, but it's still concentrating. A drunken story of joys and sorrows is just a dream. If possible, I hope the author can extend the plot so that readers can continue writing in the front while our souls chase behind.

Five-star praise. Not bad 👍Good luck

Very well written! Unlike some authors who write a lot about psoriasis in a long and verbose way, it's just like a long story about a single character, which is really boring to read. (That month and year). So this short article is really good

This is a very short story, overall it is pretty good, it has a very good beginning, and the plot is attractive enough. I don't know if the author didn't want to continue writing and ended the novel with a dream ending. The dream ending is the most depressing ending for readers. Not all novels are suitable for this kind of ending. It can only be said that the author did not use it very well. If, I say if, the author continues directly from the ending and enters the modern chapter, then I will call it a unique skill.

Awesome, 150,000 words were written on one dream.

This is the only one I have read in full, the others were too long and I gave up halfway through. . It's quite exciting, a little comfort for busy people.

The content is a bit lacking. Although there are problems such as the rapid development of technology and insufficient professional knowledge in some places, the plot is okay and the characters are okay. Although the ending is hasty in the end, it is reasonable and acceptable.

Simple and clear! The ending is not confusing, and there is no nonsense before death! I suggest you write a postscript about the conversation between pig's feet and the emperor in the underworld! I especially want to know if the emperor regrets not listening to the pig's trotters explanation!

"About the fact that I was stunned for a moment when I saw it at the end" We must respect every author who can write a work [smile][smile][smile]

Not bad, there is no bad plot added to slow down the pace, the short story is good

This article is short and concise, without the word "water". The author's article is well written and worth reading.

Although it is an imitation of other works, the overall feeling is very good. My version is better than other works. Keep up the good work! ! !

It's well written, the story is rich in content, and the plot is clear. It's worth reading.

Let's see first, when Feng will subdue the second lady, then we will tell [shy][shy][shy]

Alas, it's just a bit short. Author, could you please work harder?

It's okay. Overall, it's quite enjoyable.

Inexplicable love, inexplicable storytelling

It's creative, but it can be too short. I wish the author can continue to improve.

Not bad, not bad. Looking at the names of these heroines, they are very similar to those born in the 90s.

Wonderful, a wonderful novel! Just this idea gives me 5 stars for Highland!

To be honest, this is the first time I have read this kind of short article. It is not as impetuous as a long novel, and it is not disgusting as a eunuch. The plot is reasonable, and I have always maintained my interest in reading. It is not verbose.

It has a somewhat legendary storyline, wonderful characters, funny people and events, and no repetitive topics. It is a book worth reading!

It's smooth and realistic. I like it, but it's a bit short.

Clear organization and good storyline

The book is very exciting, the story has ups and downs, and the characters are described in detail.

Nankeyimeng is the finishing touch! Make this book sublime! Miaomiao! Wonderful!

One word: good. Two words: exciting. Three words: a little confused. Four words: Five short stature. Leave a message on December 15, 2022.

Although it's a bit short (the ending is hasty), I feel pretty good. It's like a dream. Isn't a person's life just a long dream? Nothing is left after death. [Laugh]

After reading it for a day, I thought it was a novel! I didn't expect it to be Huang Liang Yimeng! ! ! !

This essay by your classmate is well written. The teacher will give you 70 points.