Travel Through the Book to Become a Villain, and Start Apprenticeship with the Devil!

Very nice. The advancement of the plot needs to be accelerated, leaving a lot of pitfalls. The identity of the protagonist, the Master, has not yet been revealed. He is the Demon Lord and the Greed Golem. The overall plot is quite interesting, but not many people watched it.

In which chapter did you capture the master?

This book is quite nice. It's a pity that the score was lowered

Author, please introduce the division of realms.

Overall, this book is still very well written, but I feel that the ending is a bit overwhelming. I don't know what other people think, but I personally think it would be better if the ending was like Da Feng's. Of course, the above is just my personal opinion without any opinions. Finally, I wish the author good luck and hope to write more exciting works.

The writing is fluent, the logic is clear, the plot is clear, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, and the number of characters is appropriate and not confusing. It can be seen that the author's skills are good, but the ending is indeed a bit rushed. I guess it is because I am afraid that I will not be able to stop it and write a thousand chapters. Overall, it is much better than the current slobbery and brainless novels.

It looks good without the driving scenes and the harem.

Is there really a book called "Immortality"? I couldn't find it in many softwares, but it looks okay. The main character NB is finished.

It looks good, it's pretty good, come on, author! !

Come on, author, higher up. (/≧▽≦)/~┴┴

It's pretty good. I love it.

So, the progress of pushing to Master is too slow (doge)

Such a beautiful book, of course it deserves five stars! It's a pity that not many readers have read it! It's such a pity that I missed such a wonderful book!

How should I put it,,, it has a different flavor! ! ! This novel is still very well written, thank you so much to the author!!!

Beautiful and interesting text

So beautiful, so beautiful

It's really good-looking and very to my taste. What exactly did Tiandao promise to Jiang Beishan?

It's not too bad. I watched half of it and then started dancing [Eating Melon] The villain Jiang is still not enough of a villain.

Very nice, very nice, but the ending is a bit sloppy

This book is good, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, it is worth reading

It's very interesting. Can there be a sequel? ! !

This is so right, the plot rhythm is great.

It's pretty good, not perfect either. [Think]

The author is not on this platform, right?

Not bad👍Excellent, come on, come on

I can give it an 8 out of ten points.

Okay, average

Good, good, hahaha

Good looking good looking good looking

It's okay. The ending is not so good.