Great Qin: The Ancestral Dragon Secretly Hears My Thoughts

The author's writing is good. What Fu Su writes is neither too arrogant nor changes too fast. Everything is a steady flow, which looks very smooth, not bad (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡. The character of Brother Zheng is also well written. There are no big problems. On the contrary, the advantages of Brother Zheng are highlighted. There is nothing I want to skip while reading the whole article. It is well written and really good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡. I feel that Fu Su's writing is pretty good in my memory, and few people have written Zheng Ge so well. It can be seen that a lot of effort has been put into it, it's amazing! I have only one sentence about this book: I admire it! It's not enough. Author, this is too short. I'm very hesitant right now. I'm afraid that I'll push the author too hard and he won't be able to write properly. However, the newly updated pictures are really not enough. [I've been writing for a while and I was too tired, so I have a deep understanding (*￣m￣)] Author, have you been restricted? Why are there only two book reviews??? Based on your writing style, it shouldn't be. Even if it's miserable, it's not like you don't even have a single negative review. There are only two book reviews. I feel like you're so tired of writing (´;;`). It's definitely limited. …Third edit: Is this my problem? Why can't I see other reviews? I can only see two book reviews at the end?

It's great. The military part in the early stage made me, who is sleepy after reading other military novels, very passionate and interesting to read. There are some details in the later part that were not handled well, but it does not hinder the general idea. The span of other historical time-travel novels is too large, and you can become a king and emperor in one go and create high-precision weapons. The story is very imaginary and fictional. This book is more in line with the times and the images of each historical figure are well portrayed. However, the ending is still not satisfactory. It just ends when he becomes the emperor. In fact, I am quite looking forward to the Qin Dynasty unifying the world. The author can definitely continue the series.

It's very beautiful and the characters' emotions are very real, especially the relationship between Qin Shi Huang and Fu Su. Let's talk about the shortcomings, that is, it is difficult to accept that such a historical novel has CP. I have never thought about this Lu Pheasant and Fu Su before. I think it is too advanced and is considered a minefield. The essence of this article is to write about Qin Shihuang very vividly, and to write about the good and real relationship between him and Fusu as father and son. At the end, Qin Shihuang was not killed and Su was succeeded to the throne. I felt very happy. It was a happy ending.

Very good, please keep updating the author Here's a suggestion: Could the protagonist talk more about his father instead of always talking about his majesty? Especially when meeting in person. I think it reads more smoothly this way

It's really good. Although the author made a bit of a showdown in the middle, there is no problem. Lu Pheasant from the front to the back is also normal. The only thing is that the author seems to have forgotten about Yu Ji while writing about her 😂 I don't know if she forgot or I didn't pay attention to the details behind it. Xiang Yu's ending is disappointing. But I think the finale is really, really great. Overall, this book has no CP. Lu Pheasant almost cp it, but it was only three or two chapters. It is not like some books, that cannon can immediately develop a technological power. Generally speaking, it's not a surprise.

Actually it's not bad, it's pretty good-looking, but I feel that Fusu changes a bit too quickly, such as his skills. Wouldn't the people around him find it strange? The author should be more rigorous.

It's a very good book. The author must have researched the information before writing it. This book healed some of the sadness that the First Empress died without a successor. The writing is fluent and the logic is smooth. Watching the male protagonist Fusu prosper the Qin Dynasty step by step with courage and strategy, your blood boils. The male protagonist acts with moderation, governs his subordinates well, loves the people, and is decisive against the enemy. It is highly recommended. I can't stand the praise. In the second half of writing, I suddenly changed the plot for Hu Hai, and it couldn't match the previous one. . . . It's a big bug, so I'll deduct one star. . . .

What about Chapter 335? Was it eaten?

I quite liked this book, but I read it too quickly and lost it all at once. I hope the author can work harder ^0^~! Work hard~

I like it very much, cheers for the author!