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Well written! Jia Rui captured all the female relatives of the Red Mansion. The author keeps up the good work. Cao was a model thief and eventually became an emperor.

Better among the red buildings. The plot is coherent, unlike some Red Mansions, which always have dimensionality reduction attacks. The interaction and communication with the beautiful women are exquisite and exquisite. Sometimes it's funny, sometimes it's heartwarming. Not a licking dog, not a holy mother

I have to say that the writing is really good, although the woman eats too much. . . However, it's not a big deal because of the food and sex, but it's more interesting! The only thing I feel is flawed is that Grandpa looks like a part-time time traveler who cultivates immortality. This is not so comfortable to look at. This is just a personal opinion. Please don't criticize me. Thank you.

One thing to say, it's really good, accept the harem but don't accept excessively. The writing is good, it's not easy to find a novel like this.

It's okay, the plot has ups and downs, and it's worth watching. It's just that Sister Feng is too out of touch, which really makes me feel a little uncomfortable. The setting is also a little unreasonable, but it is a novel anyway, and some minor problems are not realistic. Moreover, the protagonist is a bit too soft. It feels like I can give up my principles for the sake of those women. It's uncomfortable to see it, but overall it's worth watching (personal opinion, for reference only)

This is the first Red Mansion fanfic I have read. Looking at the plot, I can tell that the author has really worked hard. I will definitely follow this book closely, so I will update it quickly [smile][smile]

This book is well written and fascinating, and I can't wait to read it in one sitting.

This book is well written and incorporates many modern things. It is very fresh and quite good. It is better than many of the books about Red Mansions that I have seen here. I hope the author can keep writing.

It's not bad, although there are some places that are not very good, but overall it's pretty good and intriguing. Support the author greatly.

As an author who has been steadily updating for a long time, I like it very much, and the author's writing style is also very smooth; the plot setting is generally wild and unrestrained but seems to be full of expectations. He seems to still be full of hope after changing his fortune and destiny for the sake of perfection.

The author's view of patriotism is very positive, the writing is very good, very artistic, and the plot is also very good. I support the cool writing. If there are more war scenes, it will be a super cool writing that combines "War and Peace" and "Dream of Red Mansions" [laughs]

When I first read Dream of Red Mansions, I didn't understand it at first, but I understood it after reading it two or three times. I just felt a little regretful. This novel satisfied some of my regrets from another angle. The novel is also very detailed. It's good, good, keep up the good work!

There are very few good books about Red Mansion. This book is really comfortable to read. The characters are really vivid and vivid. Moreover, the main character comes through time as a gangster. It is quite novel. This kind of writing is more interesting than other novels. There is no lower limit for the operation. It is really funny. Tomato Red Mansion Divine Book, it's a pity...

The writing is good, the plot is very compact, and the context is clear. I just hope that the author will not follow the same pattern as other online articles, and let the male protagonists meet one after another. That would be a bit vulgar. Keep up the hard work, I will keep reading.

I liked it after reading the introduction, so I jumped into the trap decisively. After reading a few chapters, the angle and direction are slightly different from the mainstream, and it's really confusing. After reading some low-scoring comments, I just want to say that this world is a different part of the reincarnation (the original work of Dream of Red Mansions is like this, as can be seen from the last chapter of Kongkong Taoist ferrying back to Cao Xueqin to issue a book). Don't refute it with the so-called rules obtained from real history in your mind. The author's writing skills are relatively not that strong, and it is understandable that he cannot fully grasp the subject matter. The occasional drama is not that serious. All in all, there are no major problems, and he has a good control over the villainous nature of the protagonist.

To explain things in a simple way and understand the world, we must both strengthen ourselves and follow the trend. You have to have friends, and there are also opponents. Fight without breaking. Only then can you become an expert.

Great! Jia Rui is the protagonist in this book. Using such a character did not affect my original experience of Dream of Red Mansions. The author also integrated his own feelings about Red Mansions into the novel. It seems very enjoyable! Like, like, like

The psychological description of the daughter's family is also meticulous. The plot is also very coherent, I just hope that the final ending is not cliché... I don't want to see people miserable, so there is no reason for me to be upset while reading a novel.

The first time I watched it was average, but the second time I watched it was boring. I was full of complaints and wanted to complain. After two days of idle time, it is quite interesting to continue to explore in depth. It is also suitable for the identity of ordinary people. There are only some confused and good-looking faces that should not come from the author's narration. It is better to add the psychological activities of the protagonist. Overall, there are all kinds of beauties. The little people with the mentality of the market also want to make the country rich and the people strong. Although there are many shortcomings, they can also be called rough gems. In terms of color, it's hard to comment on platform restrictions. I feel it could be a little deeper. In terms of image, it relies more on foil and the drama version of Dream of Red Mansions to fill in the color. The character portrayal is not unrealistic, but there are some shortcomings. The left and right sides are not outstanding enough. The women's chapter is rare in that there are not many omissions, but there are also some shortcomings. The description is not perfect enough, and the appearance is not satisfactory enough. But compared to the others, it is rare. In terms of characters, I still prefer a one-headed male protagonist. There are a lot of supporting characters, but they are not deep enough. Li Wan has two younger sisters, but he didn't even write it down until the end, so why not write it down? This is a rare book that I have finished reading. I hope to keep up the good work.

The character of the protagonist fits the theme very well, but also has more humanity, making him look like a scoundrel but not a real scoundrel. Other characters also fit the original work, and the plot is also very good, without excessive ups and downs, and it is usually comfortable to watch. It can be regarded as the best novel about Dream of Red Mansions that I have ever read. Although there are still many inappropriate things or vocabulary in it, it is not too entangled in these. The book is good.

It's really good-looking, and it's my favorite type. I don't like the book Dream of Red Mansions, but this book made me understand something about Dream of Red Mansions, so I give it a thumbs up. The writing of this book is clear and logical, the characters are well described, and the plots are interlocking and fascinating.

He has a profound writing skills and a smooth literary mind. He dares to write works about Red Mansions. There is really something [like] The style and diction are similar to the charm of ancient Chinese prose. To be able to achieve this, it is not enough to rely solely on enthusiasm and creative thinking. Only long-term immersion and accumulation can it be possible to achieve such a level of ease, like an arm. On the other hand, to make readers willing to read slightly ancient works and sincerely appreciate them, we also need to keep pace with the times. The style, characters, and plot direction include both the tried-and-true ruffian literature and the original plot and character feedback derived from the original work of The Red Chamber. What's even more rare is that the protagonist's ideological level and bottom line are well implemented in all aspects of the article. The content is popular but not vulgar, and the conception is brisk but not easy... As for the interspersed real-life jokes, there are some dramas, but this kind of nonsensical behavior, I personally think, is one of the ways that the author can maintain a very high level of thinking and mentality while the plot is smooth and not boring! All in all, this work can be enjoyed by both refined and popular people. It has both popular elements and real emotional accumulation. It is neither fast food nor heavy. It has a good balance between popularity and connotation. After all, this book is an outstanding book and worth reading [Blow a kiss]

There is no nonsense, the sentences are smooth, the plot is compact, and it is absolutely full of ups and downs. The most important thing is that every character in it has a distinctive personality and unique charm, and vividly portrays the feeling of this person. Looking at the whole book, there is a sense of seeing it all at once. Couldn't stop at all. However, there are a few small flaws in the book. I won't go into details here. Everyone has their own judgment. Many people often forget these when reading a book, especially those who are ignorant fans. I just came back from being a fan of Red Mansion and saw the comments, which made me suspect that there are trolls. Score points there. Let's talk about the characters inside. Generally speaking, novels have a kind of brainless bragging, even better, they are more formal and formal. There are a lot of minor flaws, and the plot could have been better "like this". Your whole body experiences the feeling of the protagonist. Just imagine that you will become that person. Those who are higher up do not necessarily become the protagonists, and some supporting roles also give people a strong sense of involvement.

This Red Mansion fanfiction is pretty good, the characters are delicate enough, and the language is vivid enough.

The writing is good, the story is novel and interesting, the language is humorous, and the theme of Red Mansions is worth watching.

Apart from anything else, the logic, writing style, and update speed of this book are really awesome.

This book is excellent. In terms of language expression, it still has the flavor of Dream of Red Mansions. The early details of the plot are well controlled, but in the later stages, the driving becomes a bit too much. But overall it's still good, and it makes up for the disappointment in The Red Mansion.

A very good work on the theme of Dream of Red Mansions! The author has read Dream of Red Mansions carefully. The subject matter of Dream of Red Mansions is inherently difficult to write about. It is difficult to adapt a novel if you can't understand Dream of Red Mansions. The author really put in the time to write it. Come on, author, come on.

A summary of The Deer and the Cauldron in The Red Mansion. This is a book of flesh and blood, guess which word is the keyword.

The top Red Mansion fanfic. I always believe that only a responsible person who can shoulder responsibilities deserves more rights. Power should be given to those who can support him. Instead of talking about a spoiled child, there are several giants in words and dwarfs in action.