The Demon Slayer Became a Group Favorite Among the Demon Clan

Two heroines, identification completed🥳

Find a good book with two female protagonists

How can I put it, the writing is pretty good, but the emotional foreshadowing is a bit sloppy, too fast, the emotional connection is not strong, and the story is not immersed, but the storyline is very good and the characters are well created. Big cheers for the author

Alas, the only dissatisfaction is that this is a new book and it is not finished yet. Every exciting moment is gone.

Very good, very good, very good, say important things three times

I hope the heroine can regain her memory and strength soon and take revenge! Then be with Tian Ge!

It's not bad, overall it's good, and the plot is very attractive, but the narrative pace feels too tight, the plot twists in some places are not handled very smoothly, and it seems very cramped in some places. In my opinion, it could have been developed further, but it stopped abruptly. In fact, you can try to slow down the narrative rhythm a little, I believe it will make the plot more fascinating and full of twists and turns. Then there is a poisonous point. The extra CPs are Luo Yuan and Qi Ming, Luo Ran and Li Mo, but this seems to be different from the ending. I'm really looking forward to Luo Yuan taking Qi Ming away. [Cover face]

It looks good, but not many people see it.

Very well written! It's just hard to wait for the update! It would be great if you finish writing it and then publish it!

Yes, I like dual heroines

The author thinks a lot and adds the imaginative part first before writing it on paper. This is OK.

Beautifully written, an excellent book

It smells so good. I can't help but smile. I'm so happy. Great support for the author＾0＾~

I like this book very much, and the emotional foreshadowing is also very good. Some parts of the knowledge are too simple, but the content is novel and very attractive to readers, and Luo Ji's thinking is very smooth. However, the ending is a bit fast. It would be better if it was more detailed!

I don't know how to stand between White Tiger and Suzaku CP

Come on, it looks good

This book is quite good, but the chapters are a bit short at the moment. It looks good, but the progress feels a bit fast. It's over in Chapter 204, alas. I can't bear it [crying]

I read the author's book before, and after reading it two or three times, I discovered that the author has written a new book. So far, it is very exciting. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Come on! Nice! I hope it can be updated soon. Every time I get to the exciting part, it disappears🌝🌝

I haven't finished it yet, I'm exhausted from watching it, I've eaten too many knives [crying] [crying] [crying] Skip to the end and watch it for a good ending (right?), So that's it. It's not easy to write a story with two female protagonists, so I'll give it 5 stars to support it. The description of the relationship is a bit too hasty. The protagonists skipped the five years of acquaintance at a very fast speed and then developed into more than friends. It is difficult for readers to empathize with them. This period of teacher-student experience can be written in more detail. The names of the two and their flirting (bushi) can also be enriched based on this paragraph. The emotions of the supporting characters have not yet been fully explained. Lin Chu's operation with Yiyu didn't even lead to feelings, which can only make people think that she is impulsive. Baihu also writes about love without any explanation, and then later adds that it is a misunderstanding (is that right?). In many places, the emotional line can be explained first and then the narrative, so that the character's behavior is more reasonable. Ao Feixue, my Ao Feixue, woo woo woo, finally being killed by my beloved Xia Ge is considered sweet, woo woo woo.

I think it's pretty good

Beautiful, a great book

It looks good, but is it just me? Looking from beginning to end, is this between two women, or something [what] [what] [what] [what]

Warygood, this book is very good, but there are so many shortcomings ꒦ິ^꒦ິ

This book is very nice, thank you to the author! (*^ω^*)

Overall, it's really good to watch. Later, it was linked up with Xiao Cangruo and Ye Yuli's dream, which was a bit shocking, but it's really good to watch. The story line is very sweet and the emotional line is full. It's not worth giving it five stars.

Big cheers for the author

It's all up to my point.

His grandma, I stayed up all night to read it, I was so dumbfounded by the knife [I almost cried]

What a pitiful heroine, she keeps reincarnating and dying [face covering]