National Mecha War: Domestic Mechas Are Killing People Like Crazy

As a refreshing novel, the plot idea is very good, but after reading a few more chapters, you can see that the author's writing style is relatively green. Overall, it is a mecha-war adventure in a different world, with a focus on patriotism emotionally. It can be seen that the author is trying his best to portray the characters, but they are not delicate enough. A few more close-ups could be considered. The image creation of other characters is not sufficient, such as Jiang Zhengtian. When there are too many people to describe one by one, this character is the representative of the entire Dragon Kingdom team and can reflect the spirit of the Dragon Kingdom team. Moreover, he appears more frequently and has enough opportunities to describe. There are also some loopholes in the ability setting. For example, the mecha's movement speed and attack speed are so fast, how can the operator's reaction ability keep up? As a novel with science fiction as the main element, I think some places still need to be more rigorous. Some people may say, "How come there are so many things in this exciting article?" But people can't just stand still, right? Readers can ignore it, but I hope all authors can learn and change. ——I would like to dedicate this subjective speech to the author

Brothers, this mecha novel is definitely the best among the mecha novels. A man's romance, mecha protects the country, and the Dragon Kingdom is unparalleled.

Why can't I put pictures in book reviews?😭I want to put pictures. 😭

Very good novel! I just like this kind of novel about team fighting, and fighting for the country is also my heart's desire. Big cheers for the author! (ง•̀_•́)ง

It's a pretty good book. It can be seen that the author has written it very carefully, but there are still some minor flaws in some details.

I didn't originally read novels about mecha technology, but now I'm short of them. This introduction looks pretty good. After reading it, I found it's pretty good and very interesting. Good luck, author.

To be honest, when I saw Dawei Tianlong, I already saw the advanced version. I saw millions of A-level mechanical beasts appearing in front of the protagonist, and the protagonist suddenly shouted: How dare these little mechanical beasts do their job. I saw tens of thousands of nuclear bombs appearing in the sky. Coupled with the enhanced attack power, it can cause tens of millions of damage to those below. And carry out a nuclear strike. 

A self-motivated author whose writing is greater than his plot. It was a joy to write. The Tomato platform is somewhat lacking in mecha articles, but we don't think this is a mecha article. To attract people to this world, there is a little space of the main god, a game mode for all. Explode the equipment of the mecha, and then upgrade the mecha, which has the shadow of online games. Compared with the old Mecha Infantry, the novels of "Legend of Masters" have less flavor in them. There was some disappointment, it's not that the novel was bad, it just didn't live up to expectations. I am a multi-female protagonist, should the author consider developing an emotional line? It is suggested that the author try to move what the person said before the person's name. I prefer this. Personal preference. For example Reader: "The author will update quickly." Change to "The author will update soon," the reader said eagerly, the hand holding the blade trembling slightly with force, and a hint of coldness leaked out of his slightly squinted eyes. My humble opinion, for reference only.

I originally wanted to give it four stars, but no, since the author worked so hard, I'll give it one more.

Just because of our China, we can become a five-star!

I hope the author can write more. I look forward to writing more. There is so little now.

The author is quite smart, but I feel that all the cool articles have a weakness and cannot last long. Especially the cool articles about data flow will gradually become boring later [laughing and crying] I have read several of the author's works, all of which are short stories of hundreds of thousands of words. They are all cool articles, but because of the fast pace and relatively short length, they cleverly avoid this weakness. Returning to the topic, I think the description of mechas in this novel is more in line with the mecha world in my mind. The worldview and foreshadowing are also more attractive. The overall writing is good, there are no major pitfalls, and the pace is brisk. It's just that sometimes the data is not accurate enough and needs to be improved. There's nothing else wrong with it, it's a good book to read.

The protagonist can get more weapons, such as floating guns, armor that can switch forms. Note, I am talking about external parts. To be honest, it would be better to give Gatling some firepower, and give the sniper rifle to the commander.

Can the author get the protagonist a knife?

I have read Chapter 47 so far, and I will make a bold guess: This world should be another Earth, but for some reason, the people in this world have all turned into mechanical creatures. After undergoing evolution again and again, they have become various mechanical beasts. The wounds on their bodies were caused by their fighting with unknown civilizations in the core area. They are protecting the world. As humans become stronger and enter deeper areas, they will discover this secret. But at that time, the mechanical beasts had been almost killed by humans. Finally, mankind will face the attack of unknown civilization. (This speculation was made after I saw what the tree said and thought of an anime. As for the truth, I don't know.)

I think it's very good. The fifty chapters are very smooth to read. These fifty chapters are worth five stars. I rarely give five-star reviews.

This new book is very interesting. I read all the chapters in one day. Support the author, come on, author. What novel will the author write next? Is it time travel, science fiction, Red Alert, National War or something else (I like to watch Red Alert)

This is the first time I read a novel with this theme. It is very novel. I feel very good. There is hope of becoming a big hit. Come on, author.

It's okay to read, I finished it in one day, and the content is pretty good. Although the pace is a little fast, it doesn't hurt.

With unlimited firepower, why not use weapons with a fast rate of fire, but use weapons with high damage and a slow rate of fire?

What the author writes is still good, keep up the good work ٩(๑•ㅂ•)۶

Magic Lamp: I can grant you a wish. Me: I want to destroy the world. Magic Lamp: This wish is too difficult. Let's change it. Me: I want the author to top me. Magic Lamp: Let's talk about how to destroy the world.

I just reminded you that three chapters were updated right away. If I remind you again, will there be three more chapters?

I want to be a novelist, drop the gun and bullets, and just hold pen and paper in my hands.

Feeling a bit like a brain in a vat? But not entirely. As for the two characters at the end of the latest chapter, it is no surprise that they should be the other parts of the male and female protagonists. The male can be confirmed to be Lu Ziye, and the female should be Liu Xiyan‧˚₊*̥(*︎*⁰͈꒨⁰͈)‧˚₊*̥

Come on! Personally, I prefer this type.

Although this book has some minor flaws, such as the scene about running three kilometers in 20 minutes, which will become a lifelong shame for the author, the content is still remarkable! First of all, the author's attitude is very upright, and the response is more timely than the after-sales customer service, which is very good. But one bad thing is that I can't get any equipment after playing for a long time, and I have to spend money to buy the equipment. It reminds me of a certain money-grabbing game, and I feel very unhappy. It keeps asking me to play in money-grabbing games. I would like to give you a small suggestion: add equipment wear and equipment trading, so that even if many weapons are released later, they will not occupy the warehouse space, and it can reasonably explain the problem of excess equipment.

It's very good to read, but the author's updates are too slow, so I can't read it, but it's still very enjoyable.

It's really pretty, but a little lacking.

This novel is very well written, it would be best if I read another one about King of Fighters.