Save Me, I've Traveled Through the World of Stolen Pens

Let me first talk about why I give five stars (personally): 1. There are no poisonous points and the reading is very smooth. 2. The male protagonist's character really impressed me (confession) 3. I don't really like pure novels. Not to mention the plot, the strength is handled very well. The male protagonist has a high level of combat power, but he is not overpowering (I love battle damage). Some novels make the younger brother weak and then set off the male protagonist. 4. I haven't read the original work, but I can't say that the character is 100% correct, but at least it's handled well.

First of all, someone gave Xiaocao's book two stars today. The reason is: this book is not good, and the author threatens him! ! Can you please find a reason to be serious? As long as the reason is legitimate, no one will say anything against you. Let's talk about this book again. I have read a lot of fanfics about stolen pens, but this is the first fanfic I've seen that writes about Pan Zi's cp (maybe it's not the first one, but I just haven't seen it). The writing style of this book cannot be said to be too mature, but the emotions in this book are still very delicate. I think this is an excellent fanfic about stolen pens. Xiaocao's imagination is still very broad. Some of her settings in the book are well written and are not found in other fanfics. I think this article by Xiaocao is very attractive to me, especially the relationship between Yin Yuan, Iron Triangle and Pan Zi. This is my personal opinion. After all, everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables.

The male protagonist was not overjoyed when he got here, which was good. After all, he came to a place that he didn't know much about. Although he had read the book, it happened two years ago. That kind of loneliness, having no one to talk to, that kind of mood, and the fact that I am the only one in this world. This personal fear of disappearing, or the feeling of all the bonds in this world disappearing silently, is really vivid. The male protagonist lives without much worries in a situation where there is not much to worry about, and in an environment that is so thrilling every day, it is very powerful. The thing that attracts me the most is that the male protagonist is not like other protagonists in fan fiction, who has all kinds of hangups. He lives a very cool life. After forming a cp with so and so, his life is still very nourishing. He doesn't! I think this kind of mentality of the male protagonist is very, very normal (applause). In that kind of situation, if you are not careful at any time, you will die, and there is a system that you have never been exposed to (let alone trust him, etc., You trust the system for all kinds of things). In this situation, it is impossible to be very calm and complacent (not arrogant, just telling the truth). For this reason, I decided to follow this book. Finally, come on!

Probably the most true to the original work I've read, but now it's two books. But Dayang is so pitiful, why do you treat him like this, ah ah ah, okay, this is a normal character setting, and it is very similar to me. The reading is not like other brainless cool articles, even though he has something similar to the system (light screen) but...★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆

Dada's work is very good, but I feel that Yin Yuan pays too much attention to other people's feelings, but he doesn't care about himself that much. I have read your comments carefully, so I will write them all the way to the sand sea? , I really want to see the Evil Emperor version of Wu Xie. Then it means that the fighting scenes can be described in more detail. , I feel that the effect after reading it will be more exciting. After that, don't spray if you don't like it.

The fat guy and the innocent guy don't have OOC, and Yin Yuan's bitchy gags are perfectly integrated into it. I really love, love, love, love, love the atmosphere of them robbing graves while talking about each other's poverty [love] [love] [love] [love] [love], my wife's grasp of it is really great! The fight at the back also brings out the atmosphere, and the other characters are not broken either. It's really good-looking! ! !

This book is truly a masterpiece! Yin Yuan has been helping Wu Xie and the others without thinking about himself. He is always hurt by Wu Xie and the others. It hurts so much. Yin Yuan's CP is Pan Zi. Don't hit the wrong CP, otherwise I will polish the black gold ancient sword (•̀⌄•́)

Personally, I think he's one of the best-looking among the tomb robber fics I've watched. Although I didn't expect Yin Yuan's masochistic tendencies, it was quite exciting to see him and Master Pan together, but I felt that he didn't think about himself too much, and I felt a little distressed. In short, this book is very good.

The plot is very good and interlocking. But the age difference between Yin Yuan and Pan Zi is too big. Pan Zi can be Yin Yuan's father, I can't accept this huge age difference. So, I'm sorry, I think I have to abandon the article, But I think from the bottom of my heart, the author, you have written very well. Come on, you are the best.

Silver Dollar is great, he does things that perhaps none of us would dare to do or even think about. He didn't think about hugging the protagonist's thigh, but he thought about protecting him, because he thought they were pitiful, but he didn't think about himself. He himself needed help, but he chose to protect others. The writing style of the entire article is very good, the foreshadowing is just right, and all the holes that the third uncle left unfilled have been filled in. Some people may think that silver dollars are silly, but they are not. Yin Yuan is fighting for the goal in his heart. Maybe we think it's silly for him to keep hurting and protecting others. I thought so even now. The silver dollar belongs to him. I will feel sorry for him, but I will not interfere. I won't let the author change it, because this is the silver dollar. Only in this way can we feel that this is a real silver dollar with flesh and blood. The author uses his delicate writing style to express what he wants to express, and we just understand it. I like the silver dollar and I also like this author. I like this book because it's good.

Please be patient and read it, this book is really good! Really ٩(๑•ㅂ•)۶! ! But the only thing is that Xiaocao wrote Yin Yuan in a way that is both powerful and heart-wrenching (ㅇㅅㅇ❀)...(But actually it's okay, just a little sad. Overall, the book is very good, the plot is okay, not brainless. In short, friends who click in must be patient and read it, you will regret it if you don't read it (●• ̀ω•́ )✧!! Highly recommended!!!٩(๑•̀ω•́๑)۶

It's a rare Tomb Raider fanfic that doesn't take advantage of the brother's CP bonus, and then posts books instead of dramas. Moreover, Yin Yuan's character is a bit self-destructive. I quite like this setting. I watched the first extra chapter in the group and I was a little curious about Yin Yuan's identity before time travel. He is an orphan, and then he plays extreme games with his brothers. Maybe it is because of his bohemian character. Let him play more freely and excitingly. I feel that Yin Yuan is very liberal in sex. Is he also a part-time trainer and the one in the upper position?

It's really, really good! I was shocked for a long time when I saw that Yin Yuan's CP was Pan Zi. Although I realized something was wrong when Tianzhen said that Yin Yuan should be more restrained, I didn't expect it to be true! Very unexpected emotional line! It's not a particularly long time to read, but I really think it's one of the best tomb robbing novels I've ever read! ! If the overall guess is correct, it is a slow-burn type, right? (?) The details are very well written and the logic is very good. Although I am not very bright, I can feel that the author's writing style and logic are very clear! (Moved) [Suddenly I don't know what to say………………]

It's been a long time since I've written a book review But I must say, this book is worth reading. At least he doesn't have any outrageous OOC, so he can be considered non-toxic. Cao'er, come on! I don't know if you can have more chapters than Mian Chuan

The author wrote so well! The writing is also great. If you don't mind, let's make friends together (*´∀｀)

Ahem! This is the first time I've read a novel about the protagonist and Pan Zi's CP. How can I put it - it's very to my liking!Cp！ [sinister smile]

Xiaocao can't do it! ! ! ! ! ! Although the novel is very good, Xiaocao is not good! ! ! Although the extra is very interesting, it does not mean that Xiaocao is good! ! CP is easy to beat, but Xiaocao is not! ! This is my last voice! Small! Grass! No! OK! Hey hey hey hey hey hey hey

This book is exquisitely written, full of details, and the characters are well and successfully portrayed. The silver dollar makes people feel distressed. A person who looks carefree and unreliable has the least regard for his own life. This book has already reached its second volume. I never imagined that after following it for so long, I still haven't skipped a chapter [whispered: I used to skip chapters when reading novels, but I might not be able to understand this chapter after skipping chapters QAQ] Xiaocao is awesome, and her writing is beautiful! Can do handwork! The handmade work is awesome! The sound is nice too! [Super Small Voice: Xiaocao is a bit cute when she is irritable hahaha] [Show off quietly: I have a bracelet and a hey hey] Very nice, great

The author's writing style is very good, there is a kind of emotion that goes straight to the heart, the plot is also well managed, and the character is not ruined. But I have a question, why does he treat Wu Xie so well? (Not finished reading yet)

This is a novel with online thinking. The author's writing is very good. I like this article very much. From the curiosity at the beginning, my eyes gradually became attracted to the details of the article and the characters in it. They all have their own stories and their own world. The protagonist is not thinking about replacing the people in the original book like other articles, but thinking about helping them better fulfill their wishes and heal more regrets. We also follow the protagonist's slow growth and follow him step by step towards his goal.

It's very interesting, humorous, and very exciting. The character of Yin Yuan is also well portrayed. The only drawback is that the updates are not enough for me to watch. There are too few! ! ! ! ! ! !

I saw probably more than 100 pictures, and then I felt very good, especially Xiao Yin Yuan. I felt that he matched the innocent boy and Pan Zi very well. Hehehe, I don't know why, but inexplicably I want to engrave some evil CPs.

It's very beautiful, the writing is good, and the original character design is not broken, but the main character Yin Yuan is so miserable, it makes people feel distressed [I almost cry]. This novel is very good. I just want to read a refreshing novel, but I can't bear to abandon it halfway [face covering]. It would be great if this book could be more biased toward a refreshing novel. At least Yin Yuan can avoid so many injuries [crying]

This book is the most realistic and exciting among all the Tomb Raiders fan fiction I have seen in Tomato

I think it's super good^ω^, but I can't understand some parts, but the plot is quite exciting. I'm looking forward to the follow-up. Although I read it very slowly, I won't forget to remind you to update it. The author will do my best to update it for you! ! ! ! ! ! ☆ * . ☆ . ∧＿∧∩* ☆ * ☆ (∀)/ . . ⊂ ノ* ☆ ☆ * (つ ノ .☆ (ノ

It's really good. It's logical. It's organized and doesn't mess around with the text to save people. It has that terrible Holy Mother's heart. Everyone works hard for their beliefs, including life. The trust between brothers is not sorry and let me know that you are using me. That is also my heartfelt wish. It will fill up the regrets and it is not abrupt. It's really a very good, very good, very good book. The silver dollar is cheap and very doggy. Hahahaha, it's really funny sometimes. Lian Gou is a crazy person that makes people love him to death.

It's really good-looking. It's based on the original work, but it also has its own ideas. The thinking is very careful, but it seems a bit brain-consuming (the walnut-sized brain protested). In addition, the silver dollar must be good! ! ! Also, Caoer will update soon! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's good to watch, and the interaction between the protagonist and the Iron Triangle is hilarious. The cp of this book is quite special, it is the protagonist, Da Pan, and Ping Xie, but there is very little interaction between them, but it is quite sweet. But the author is really a stepmother who really doesn't love the protagonist. But I have to say that this book is also really beautiful.

It's a really good book. I'm looking forward to the follow-up development. Silver Dollar is very good. Sometimes I always think he's cute? Hahaha, but dear author, please be nice to Yin Yuan and don't let him get hurt all the time.

The author's writing style is excellent, not procrastinating, very coherent, and does not ruin the original work or plot. Moreover, the author is also very nice. He likes and replies to every post. I like this book very much.