Villain: The Heroines Eavesdrop on My Inner Thoughts, and Their Personas Fall Apart

Stop writing it. This is the third low-end novel that remains unchanged. The plot is exactly the same, only the names are returned.

Although it is a parody novel, can the author change the plot? Don't write the villain to be interested in all the female protagonists, because some of the female protagonists are too disgusting. They all say they don't want to have anything to do with Bai Xuan. They are powerful but can't kill Bai Xuan for fear of the world collapsing. Then Bai Xuan's men can always kill him. The result is also I didn't see anyone taking action, so I was just talking about it. These women are very green tea, and they can obviously deviate from the plot. Xu Zinan also said that she wanted to kill Bai Xuan, but why didn't she suppress Bai Xuan's development of power? Not to mention that she was afraid of affecting the plot. According to the plot, she should help him but she didn't, which means that it can be changed. So, in the end, she just didn't want to help or suppress them. In the end, if they were written together with the villains like other novels, it would be quite disgusting. The villains are better than the villains, and the heroines are better than the heroines. Don't let the villains be with too many heroines, and on the surface, these heroines are all It was to help Bai Xuan, even if it was fake, I felt resentful in my heart, because outsiders saw it this way, and the heroine never objected. She directly arranged a female villain for the villain, lived happily, and then acted out the plot, and finally brought the female villain back to the real world. This kind of writing is the most meaningful.

I have read many imitations of the same novel, but in fact, the villain does not need to be so cowardly and humble in private and outside of the plot. The plot direction is just a character design during the plot. The villain is not included in the plot. The whole thing is too low. This is a poisonous point of similar novels.

Since you said that the heroine can eavesdrop on the hero's thoughts, but if he eavesdrops, does it mean he can eavesdrop on everything? You've made it so that some people can hear it and some can't. It's very uncomfortable.

The most speechless novel I have read in this category... The men are both low-minded and cowardly whether they follow the plot or not, and the whole plot is very intellectually depressing. Even if it is to talk about the corrective nature of the plot, there is no need to forcefully depress the intellect in order to correct it... It's outrageous... I have to cancel it.

There is no need to write Dragon King so miserable. There is no good male protagonist. It may be a bit difficult to recommend later. I suggest you read books of the same type for reference.

I'll give it four stars, maybe because it's a new author. The logic is not rigorous. I can understand my voice at the beginning. Because it's not far away. Follow up slowly. It seems that the voice can be heard in every house. Then sometimes, I would pretend to sleep in front of him. The voice of the heart can no longer be heard. Then later he said that he wanted to know the plot. So bail. Otherwise, I would need to visit the police station every time I hear my heartfelt wishes. I just can't figure it out anyway, it's too confusing. I just looked at it blindly and without thinking. Anyway, it's pretty cool.

It's very well written, so beautiful. I hope the author will stick to it.

It's okay, but the male protagonist here is too stupid. He forcefully completes the plot. He is ridiculously strong but he still has to be played. I don't understand why he should be so strong since he is going to be played. I hope that if the male protagonist collapses in the later stage, he will not be afraid of reincarnation and forcibly change the plot.

The plot before the male protagonist traveled through time was too hasty and brainless, but that's okay. Later, when the male protagonist traveled through time and found that the plot had seriously deviated, he still wanted to go back. Did the plot deviate and give him a reason? I'm afraid I'm stupid. I also don't like the male protagonist's cowardly and dog-like character (although he is acting, he never depicts his independent character)