The Navy Starts, and the Twelve Talismans Are Integrated to Beat the Four Emperors

The book is very good! The three views are also correct. Don't end up cooperating with pirates to overthrow the Celestial Dragons like other naval protagonists. I hope that the protagonist overthrows the Celestial Dragons as a navy! Don't let the empress become a pirate!

It's very interesting to watch. The protagonist pursues justice and his strength increases step by step. The three views are also very correct. A pirate is a pirate, and the navy is the navy. It is much better than other pirate novels that include pirates. A pirate will always be a thief.

It's really good so far, and the three views are quite upright. Unlike some fan fiction, once the protagonist knows that he has entered the world of pirates, he must become a pirate and resist the world government in a pirate way.

The first book reviewed in Tomato. The story is compact, the timeline corresponds to the original work, Not the Virgin, Pig's Knuckles has a strong self-awareness, the incident (handling) style is crisp and neat, and the plot logic is basically flawless. Overall, it is a relatively interesting and worth-read novel based on the original comic. This work is positioned as a navy (this is not a simple side, but a choice based on three views of human nature. Pirates and navigators are essentially different). Readers who are positioned as pirates are most likely to be uncomfortable. In addition, the author named the move name of Little Expert [Start][Start][Start][Start][Start][Start] I would like to call you the strongest

Not much else to say, as long as the IQs of the protagonist and supporting characters are both online, it is worth watching, and the timelines of each character are not much different.

It's pretty good. The moral principles in it are very clear and concise. Not bad.

Among pirate novels, this one is really good and worth reading. As a cool novel, all kinds of cool points are achieved without being too outrageous. Unlike other cool novels, where you are invincible at the beginning, it is totally meaningless to look at things this way. As a time traveler and a person from the peaceful era, when you travel to a pirate, you may experience the era of life and death every day, and there must be a period of adaptation. This novel can indeed describe it. It gives Pig's Feet a chapter to lay the foundation for cultivation, and it is a perfect pavement for the next strength. Although it is too slow, I still hope the author can work hard.

It's worth watching here, but it's not the same as the previous One Piece. Instead of being Luffy's brother, messing up the plot, and then becoming a pirate to kill and plunder, in the end I couldn't write much and ended it hastily.

This is one of the better pirate fanfics I have ever read. The concept is novel and the combat power has not collapsed. In addition, the protagonist is also a hard-working genius, which is very good. In addition, it seems that the charm can absorb the power of the same type of fruit. This setting is very good.

It's okay, hot-blooded, that's how One Piece should be written, it looks great!

It's a very nice book, and it has a good control over the protagonist's character. It doesn't kill indiscriminately, nor is it overly merciful. There is also a good ending at the end, which neither deviates from the main point nor randomly changes the original work, and the content is relaxed and balanced. It's a good book.

This novel is the most comfortable among the One Piece series I have read. It does not have a particularly powerful cheat at the beginning. It eats all kinds of fruits before it starts. It grows step by step and pays special attention to the details of the timeline.

It's well written, with a growth-oriented protagonist, watchable, and the combat power is not too low. The pirate character setting is very consistent, and the timeline is not bad. It is based on the official setting of the life card. It is worth watching, unlike many Yunhai fans. Come on, write more and it will become popular.

I have just finished reading more than 140 chapters. The logic is reasonable. Whether it is the environmental logic timeline of the pirate world or the different abilities of the talisman, it is still difficult for the talisman to research a new ability on its own. So far, it looks pretty good. Now let's see how the rhythm develops and the author refrains from spoiling any more!!!

This is the best pirate fanfic I have ever read. It is truly from the perspective of the navy, and it is not a false sense of justice. After all, the Celestial Dragons should not exist. Moreover, his characterization and details are handled very well. I feel that the author is really great and the writing is really good. I originally wanted to give it four stars to make you feel proud, but I still gave it full. Moreover, you also handled the ending very well. In the end, Momonosuke must die. [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

The author's writing is really good. I haven't read many books on Tomato. Many books can't be read after reading part of them [facepalm]. This book is very interesting, at least it allowed me to read it slowly. The only drawback is that there are too few chapters. I just read it for a few days and lost it [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

This is a decent pirate article, there is no comment section to say something amazing, and there is nothing too harmful to fellow pirates. But if you come here for the Twelve Talismans, you will be disappointed, because all abilities have been greatly reduced, which is equivalent to weakening the amazing Twelve Talismans into the growth talents of the protagonist. After the protagonist is completed, the physical fitness of the protagonist can reach the top or even surpass the world of One Piece, but it has lost the remarkable and amazing features of the Twelve Talisman. Therefore, for a regular One Piece fanfic, you can make the fanfic feature that the protagonist gradually maximizes all aspects of his talents during his growth process, and then becomes the strongest hardworking pirate fandom in the world.

There is no harem, the plot is reasonable, the protagonist's IQ is online, the plot changes at the right time, it is not watery, the fighting and some details are well written. Regarding other cool pirate harem novels, I am still optimistic about this type of pirate novel. Come on author. Happy New Year to everyone.

A world with extraordinary force has no emotions at all, and only fighting in my heart becomes too boring. He works more actively than Akainu, and he fights for such a small salary. It's so damn funny. Overall, it's a good watch for fighting fans.

The author writes very well. This novel is not like other One Piece novels in that it has the strength of a general or a general at the beginning, although this novel has said that. The strength develops very quickly, but it is all achieved through one's own efforts. This novel is very well written.

If you want to see Invincible streaming, don't come. If you want to see the 12 spells, don't come. If you want to see the protagonist's high IQ, don't come here. If you want to see a rigorous and smooth plot, don't come here.

It's a pretty good book. It was very enjoyable in the early stages, but in the later stages it felt invincible and not that exciting. All in all, it was good. This is one of the only books I can read. I also hope that the author will slow down the growth of the protagonist, enrich the plot, and create some interesting little theaters. (ง •̀_•́)งCome on

Reviewing the book, the plot is very enjoyable. From the beginning of the East China Sea soldier to the candidate general of the headquarters, the strength of the process increases very quickly, which is the speed of a normal invincible novel. In terms of strength, he can fight Kaido for seven days and seven nights without any consumption, and a 50-50 fight with the enhanced version of Big Mom. As for the protagonist group, those who could be recruited into the navy were basically recruited into the navy. The ASL trio were deceived into joining the headquarters, Luffy even wanted to be the marshal of the navy, and Zoro was also deceived into joining the navy. I just don't know how the author handles Nami and Sanji. Robin has no hope of joining the navy, but the new navy might join. Generally speaking, except for the timeline being a bit confusing (the Shichibukai appeared too early, earlier than the Four Emperors, which is very unreasonable) the rest are very good and belong to the fairy grass category. The protagonist's personality will also be lovable, with Akainu's decisiveness in killing + Kizaru's provocative style. And wherever it can be crushed, it will be instantly killed, and no more pressing will waste time.

It's so good (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡. I hope to return to the Adventure World to do things after clearing the Pirate World...😭😭😭I don't want this novel to end so soon! ! !

Very good, the character of the protagonist is very appealing, he is decisive in killing, and he is not a pirate. You can always see a lot of pirates in Tomato, which is not interesting at all. Isn't it good to be a navy and help justice? This book is very good Also, I didn't remember to comment on the author until I saw the end [laughing awkwardly][crying with laughter]

I highly recommend it, and I think it is the only fan fiction so far that has a complete plot, compact structure, detailed characterization, closely adheres to the One Piece storyboard, and also adds some of my own unique understanding. It is obvious that every stage is the author's thoughtful and dedicated creation. The Pirate King Roger was executed, and the chaos of the world began, with disorder, evil, and plunder. This was an era of pirates, and an era of naval forces with justice in mind, punishing evil, and decisive killings.

The plot of the book is very good, and the subject matter is also very novel. The plot and story are based on the story of One Piece. It can be said to be a pirate, but not entirely. The main lineup is surrounded by the navy, and then some of the original camp of the plot are also transformed into the navy. The writing is smooth and the plot connection is no problem. It is worth reading. However, I recommend that you prefer the story of the original plot or the pirate camp. I do not recommend reading it. I wish this author can write a better book [eating melon] [laughs]

This book is really good. I have read 170 chapters so far, and there are no bad points. It ranks among the top among the pirate fanfics I have read. I think it is at least better than more than 90% of the pirate fanfics. The author carefully checked the information. There are no faults in the basics, such as the character's age, event timeline, etc. The author's uncertain settings are also noted in parentheses, which allows me to read happily. It is a novel that suits my taste. The protagonist of this book has cheats, but they are not extremely exaggerated cheats. The protagonist has to become stronger on his own. This spell cheat also gives people the feeling that the protagonist is bound to be invincible, but the invincibility is not obtrusive. I like this feeling very much.

I like this style very much. Although there are cheats, getting stronger is through your own persistence and hard work. I hope this book will get better and better.

A very good book. The main character is decisive and correct in his outlook on life.