Traveling Through************

Surprised or not, unexpected or not.

MiHoYo special show, the plot is similar to Next Door, but the author said that he wrote a book by himself because he couldn't stand Next Door. So far, I think it's okay, at least the prospects are higher than Next Door... PS: The heroine is the God of Thunder ~ Milky Knife! ! !

The book is quite interesting, and some of the plots are quite real. Combined with the elements of rice fraud, it is quite to my liking. Although there are several characters in it that made me very uncomfortable (including the positive characters), I have to say that it is very real, because there are indeed such people in life. Here are some suggestions (for the next book) 1. You can write fewer onomatopoeias, otherwise the number of words will be too high. 2. The layout can be more compact, which will make it more comfortable to read. The layout of this book still looks a bit loose. There are a few sentences that can obviously be placed in one paragraph, and they do have the same meaning, but the author split them into several paragraphs. Personally, I feel that the purpose of the length is a bit lacking. 3. There can be more psychological portraits of the characters, which can make the characters more three-dimensional. 4. Environment description can be used appropriately. This method can also play many roles, such as exaggerating the atmosphere and enhancing the character's image. 5. The description of details in this book needs to be improved, but it is already very good. After all, people cannot cover everything. It is normal to have some flaws, but it can still be better. 6. For those ellipses that serve as dividing lines, one line is actually enough. Just add a few more ellipses. If it occupies three lines, the structure will appear a bit loose. 7. There are some passages in the book that make people feel speechless. The author's method is to type a few lines of ellipses in succession, but in fact it doesn't have to be that troublesome. Just say to everyone: "…" That's it. 8. The character panel does not need to appear so frequently. When it appears again, the previous content does not need to be written again, otherwise the purpose of the word count will be too obvious. I hope the author's next book will be better! ! Be sure to work hard (ง•̀_•́)ง

It's beautiful. It's the best book about beast control that I've ever read (except Journey to the West (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia).

It's okay, but I couldn't beat the instructor at the beginning, which made me feel a little frustrated and even wanted to curse. But later on, the author shocked me. It's really like drinking water. It's only a few dozen chapters and I'm almost a first-time god. The whole book is fast-paced and not draggy. To be honest, it's much more conscientious than the one next door. I hope the author will work harder.

Why do I feel that the content is similar to this book? "I traveled through time to become a beast, I was contracted by the goddess"

Although the pace is a bit fast, I have to say that this is one of the best novels I have read since I came to Tomato.

Although I haven't read it for long, the author deserves praise. There are so few authors like this. (Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it) [Please update]

It looks good, and the writing is good. Is the author a Hakka? Garrytown College, come on, support you until the end.

The pace is fast, but it doesn't affect the viewing experience. It's a very interesting book (although I haven't read much), so go for it, the author (don't be a eunuch).

At the request of the author, write a five-star review^__________^

Well, this comic is quite good, but it has too many words, like a novel. 🌚

Although I am a bit confused at the end, the previous plot is very similar to Yuyou's book, but with Genshin Impact and Honkai Impact 3, they are good brothers and must be 5 stars+ to follow.

It's a very nice book, but I don't know why the author likes to write about pairs of women🧐

What's going on? The score is so low?

Please be sure to make Bai Yu look like a boy or a girl when he transforms.

Isn't the protagonist's new skill name in Chapter 34 the E skill of Genshin Impact?

It's awesome, I used Genshin Impact for the characters and Benghuan for the plot.

Good-looking, the male protagonist is dedicated and treats his partner well

Genshin Impact Honkai Impact is pretty cool (/≧▽≦)/~┴┴

Why do I feel that this book is so similar to a certain book? When I read the first chapter, I felt as if I had read it before. Then when I compared it, I felt that this book was written in such detail, while the other book was written in very detail. I just don't know which book was published earlier [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

The combination of Naruto and Genshin Impact is okay, but why is the bloodline of the protagonist a dragon instead of a nine-tailed fox? [What]

Author, give me a like! ! !

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It's okay, but I don't know why the rating is so low.

After Shyvana is gone, it feels like the plot is starting to fade away. Are there any big events in the future? (Doubt)

Why does a lake fox have ancestral dragon blood? 😂😂😂😂

Good luck to the author who is very good looking! It's very beautiful and super exciting. I hope the updates won't be interrupted.

Although the back part is a bit messy, the front part is very well written👍. And those who are trying to score points should go to hell. A good book is ruined like this. Big cheers for the author, the writing is very good @ Bathpool Hamadala

Hahaha, knives are just fucking knives, I'm laughing so hard╯∀╰