One Person********

Five-star praise: Reason 1: The author liked everyone in the comment area, reason 2: The author's writing style is to my liking. As for fan modifications, I think it's acceptable as long as it doesn't destroy the original drama, doesn't discredit the original drama, and doesn't ruin the character.

. . . . Can you make the protagonist more awesome? The protagonist's character is being made cooler. , Now the protagonist gives me the same feeling as the person who bullies the weak and fears the strong! This seems outrageous. I hope the heroine is not Feng Baobao (humble opinion (dog head saves life)) Try to write as cool as possible. Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you. Five stars have been given.

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Well, the plot should not be too far away from the original work. Wang Ye's plot has also been skipped. Chen Duo's plot can be picked up after returning from the outside world, otherwise it will not be like a fan. The biggest highlight of the story is Feng Baobao😍, so we still have to follow the main line appropriately. Come on author, I support you, the biggest shortcoming is that it is too short😂

I would like to give it a 4.3, Mainly because the protagonist's role is not too prominent, and there are many places where the plot of One Person is repeated. I hope that the protagonist's role will be highlighted more in the future. "This represents my own opinion. If you don't like my comments, just ignore them.

The idea is very novel, I can add another disciple to Lin Zifan. I hope the author will update more😇

This book is super good, especially if you like Under One Person. I highly recommend it, very good! The author will update faster!

It's very good. There are not many changes to the original work, but it can add more highlights. It's very good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

Okay, okay, there are not many authors who write Chinese comics these days, so please keep updating. I looked around in the comment section and most of them only watched it for 3 hours like me, which is not enough at all.

It's very interesting, and I've read some of it as well, and yours is one of the few that keeps me reading, always waiting for updates. Most of them give up after reading a few chapters. Come on, you write well.

It's nice to read. It's a very good book, but the chapters are a bit short.

It's pretty good to watch, so the plot of Under One Person is not much different, and the protagonist is not as direct and invincible as Shuangwen. It's pretty good to watch.

This book is not like a cool novel. What he writes is reasonable and well-founded, and he can feel that there is no change, and the plot is also mixed with human feelings. If you compare it with those great works, you will definitely feel that it is not good, but if you compare it with those The brainless Shuangwen forced him to do it. It is a very, very good work. Maybe what I said is a bit wordy, but this is my impression. It is a really good work. I hope it will not follow the routine of Shuangwen. I will keep pursuing it. Thank you.

It's great. I think this is Tomato's best-looking fanfic right now. Good luck, author.

Come up with a name, come on. Very nice... Love it, love it, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

People nowadays read too much Shuangwen They all made themselves look stupid You don't have to read it if you don't like it. No one is begging you to read it. Don't always impose your own ideas on others. Now that Tomato is a literary leader per capita? You can write what you like if you are good at it. You have to come here bb So far it's okay, I just wish the characterization could be more delicate and the important fights could be written more. These two chapters are indeed a bit much to mention in one go. Updates don't matter, quality matters. Big cheers for the author! Support you. (The above only represents my personal views and is for reference only.)

Niubi, this is my first time giving a star, and it's still five stars. I support you. Come on and update, we readers are the motivation for you writers. I believe that if you keep writing, this book will definitely surpass the Douluo Continent comic book. If it were not for one person, this comic may still be made into a comic book. Although you are just borrowing from it, I think it is very good. I am an ordinary reader and I affirm you. Come on, author💪

Overall, it's a good book. I don't like the individual details very much. My only suggestion is that there can be more updates.

It's really good-looking, really, it has very real character portrayals, the plot is also very exciting, and I respect the original work more. I like it, and the writing style is very suitable for my taste. (Crazy reminder (ﾉಥBenefitಥ))

I feel that the plot of the story is very clear (and I am also grateful to the author for his many explanations). I feel that the changes from the original text are not too big so far. I hope that the male protagonist will not become invincible all of a sudden in the future. It feels no different from a mindless and cool novel. Ah, "mainly because there are too few". I hope the follow-up story won't collapse. There are too few good-looking fanfics. Please give your best to the author.

It's quite interesting, and it's the only Tomato book about time-traveling under one person. I hope the author doesn't make it a mess or a eunuch!

It's good to read, I recommend everyone to take it in. The fairy grass in the fanfic Under One Person is not a cool novel. It retains the original work without losing new changes. It is short and concise. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

It's very comfortable to watch. Each character's personality is the same as the original work without any sense of inconsistency.

Five-star reviews are so rare. Finally someone writes a fanfic under one person. So few people write about this. Even if he travels through all the worlds, no one can travel below one person. Too little.

I like your writing and the plot is also very exciting. I like it so update it quickly. Don't make me kneel down to beg you.

So far, this book seems to be very good. The only thing that makes me uncomfortable is the skills,,, but this is inevitable. After all, like my second uncle, I went to the Taoist temple and pestered the Taoist priest to ask a lot of such things. . . Not everyone can do it. . . Come on, author, look forward to updates.

It's good-looking, but the volume is a bit small. I advise young authors to update quickly. (Don't be ignorant (╬ ‾᷅ plate‾᷄ ╬))

Some fanfics are straight out of the Eight Magic Skills, or straight up invincible, mindless and cool stuff, and they are just about brushing up on feelings. But this one is different. The story is very good. It feels like an independent novel. I have been reading novels for five years and I have rarely seen such good fan fiction. 👍👍👍

The author has worked hard. Although it is just the beginning, I have seen a lot of revised chapters. This shows that the author has actively read the readers' comments. Come on! ! Come on! Come on! ! !

| Five-star praise, this book is very good.