Zongheng**

I write slowly and everyone reads slowly. I hope my work will live up to everyone's expectations.

(My Chinese proficiency is not very good, the following is just my personal opinion) I felt that the author was like a student. I only read the first chapter, and the whole story was like a composition. It was very uncomfortable to read. The way of writing online novels is very different from that of literary novels or those literary works. One uses simple words to describe a real picture, and the other uses beautiful words to show a picture. Just like the first chapter of Jianlai and the first chapter of yours, they do not use the sentence-by-line format of most online articles nowadays, and they are also a bunch of words. However, Jianlai does not use too many idioms to modify it. It is like a scene. Jianlai writes about rain as "the rain keeps falling, very, very hard" but the author writes "the rain seems to be roaring." There is always a feeling that you are not reading a novel but reading comprehension. I don't know much about literature or writing. I just stated what I feel is wrong. If you are offended, you can leave a comment and tell me to delete it.

Give some encouragement.