The reason why the world is beautiful is money and power, interests and status, but also some beauty, some smiles, some looking back, and some eagerness to move.
All this seemed like a long time, but actually it only happened in an instant. Ye Xingchen's eyes were focused, and he returned to the city, guiding the country among the clouds of beauties, and starting a different life.
Reader comments
I write slowly and everyone reads slowly. I hope my work will live up to everyone's expectations.
(My Chinese proficiency is not very good, the following is just my personal opinion)
I felt that the author was like a student. I only read the first chapter, and the whole story was like a composition. It was very uncomfortable to read. The way of writing online novels is very different from that of literary novels or those literary works. One uses simple words to describe a real picture, and the other uses beautiful words to show a picture.
Just like the first chapter of Jianlai and the first chapter of yours, they do not use the sentence-by-line format of most online articles nowadays, and they are also a bunch of words. However, Jianlai does not use too many idioms to modify it. It is like a scene. Jianlai writes about rain as "the rain keeps falling, very, very hard" but the author writes "the rain seems to be roaring." There is always a feeling that you are not reading a novel but reading comprehension.
I don't know much about literature or writing. I just stated what I feel is wrong. If you are offended, you can leave a comment and tell me to delete it.
I write slowly and everyone reads slowly. I hope my work will live up to everyone's expectations.
(My Chinese proficiency is not very good, the following is just my personal opinion) I felt that the author was like a student. I only read the first chapter, and the whole story was like a composition. It was very uncomfortable to read. The way of writing online novels is very different from that of literary novels or those literary works. One uses simple words to describe a real picture, and the other uses beautiful words to show a picture. Just like the first chapter of Jianlai and the first chapter of yours, they do not use the sentence-by-line format of most online articles nowadays, and they are also a bunch of words. However, Jianlai does not use too many idioms to modify it. It is like a scene. Jianlai writes about rain as "the rain keeps falling, very, very hard" but the author writes "the rain seems to be roaring." There is always a feeling that you are not reading a novel but reading comprehension. I don't know much about literature or writing. I just stated what I feel is wrong. If you are offended, you can leave a comment and tell me to delete it.
Give some encouragement.