Devil Fruit Era: Obtain the Fish Fruit at the Beginning

As a pirate fan, I still hope to see more elements of national style in the book. For example, since it is called the Six Styles of the Royal Forest Army, can the name be changed to the moves of ancient Chinese martial arts or the names in some poems? For example, the moon step is changed to Ladder Cloud Zong, the iron block is called Golden Bell Cover, the paper painting is called Catkins Sui Feng, etc.

The style I like is to use the ability settings in other people's stories to write my own story. Because I think this is more immersive. For example, I thought of an interesting plot, if a mutated surgical fruit (its ability is not only to perform surgery on living things, but also has the ability to transform living things, plants, utensils, and everything after mutation), for example, if it has such a fruit ability If a person (that person is adding knowledge about biology, plants, technology, etc.) Went to the fantasy world, could he use this ability to graft and genetically modify the elixirs and spiritual beasts in the fantasy world to create new elixirs and spiritual beasts? It's a pity that I can't write novels and only have such a loose idea. 😜

I think it would be good to eat the phantom beast Phoenix Fruit at the beginning, or Suzaku. After all, it can be reborn from the ashes. And if you write a story about the rebirth of Ace and getting the Suzaku Fruit at the beginning, maybe the ratings will skyrocket.

Simply put, this book is pretty good. However, the author's details need to be improved. Although I give this place four stars. If the later author improves the details, I will add a heart.

It's purely to increase the popularity. After reading more than a dozen chapters, there are no surprises but there is nothing annoying at the moment. If the rating does not change, it proves that it is getting better and better!

After looking at it, it looks okay. However, the devil fruit alone and the Haki Six clan are not enough. There are many secret realms. It is recommended to add more general skills, such as a certain boxing technique and a certain body training technique, which should be better.

The update should be much faster, and if only one of the golden dragons can see the pig's trotters, the cow b

The subject matter of the author is very good. Later, I hope that the protagonist can form a team to explore the secret places at sea.

Different from Pirates, the reality is neutral with Pirates, and the concept is not bad.

Come on, the author is very good-looking

It's really beautiful. Come on!

The plot is pretty good, the author could deepen the details and make them more accurate.

It's very good and matches the plot content I want to watch. However, typos appear a bit frequently, so I'm giving it one less star.

It's okay, it looks good, but it's a little lacking.

Cool article and fast pace! Suitable for passing time

Not bad, very beautiful

Same person ah ah ah ah

Come on author, give me 5 stars⭐, don't die young.

Quality Reviews Quality Books

Not bad, not bad, okay

Very good, I like it very much.

Come on, I encourage you.

Please ask the author to be more imaginative!

You can still do it, it's just that the writing is a bit vague.

The author is so awesome! Isn't this wonderful?

Not bad! Come on update! That is, five claws means five fingers, not five claws!

When he grew that knife in the secret realm. Thunder gossip should be shouted out. It will feel more shocking

It's quite beautiful, you can take a look around (o)

This book is OK! I like to watch. The author will update more.

It can be seen that the plot and fighting descriptions are still acceptable.