Stealing the Opportunity of the Protagonist at the Beginning

The writing is very good, somewhere between top-notch and top-notch. Although the subject matter seems to be a bad game reality stream, the fact that it can be written so rigorously is really eye-catching. As for the plot design and plot rhythm, they are just right. If you plan to keep writing, this rhythm is very comfortable. Every detail can be explained in place. Don't be affected by other readers. Just maintain your own rhythm. There are relatively few to read now. Once the number of chapters increases, it will naturally become popular.

This book is very in line with my taste. I like to read it, but there are too few chapters. But as long as the author keeps updating, I will continue to follow it. I will read every chapter after it is added.

I can only explain one thing. This novel by the author is one of the same type I have read, and it is a relatively good one. Although the subject matter is relatively old-fashioned, the content is rigorous and the plot is interlocking. The author should not care about other people's opinions. He writes with peace of mind. When there are more chapters, it will definitely become popular. Finally, keep up the good work and look forward to updating a few more chapters every day.

This type of novel is not easy to write, and it is easy to go to extremes, either very good or very bad. In addition, due to the limitation of the subject matter, there are not many readers. It is not as popular as urban novels, but the pressure on the author is far greater than that of urban novel writers. I hope the author can write well, but the number of words is still too few at present. .

Don't read this book if you want to read cool articles. This book is slow-paced. The author depicts the whole world bit by bit realistically, giving you a strong sense of involvement. The writing is also very rigorous. I haven't found such a good book in a long time.

This book is really good. I have read many books with a score of 9 or above. Only this book with a score of almost 9 can have the energy to read to the end at once. However, the character descriptions are not as detailed and lifelike as those of books such as God of Death, but it is not bad. The pig's feet are also smart. There are also humorous parts in the book, as well as exciting battle descriptions, and then there is the ability-improving part that most novels have. I didn't go into details about the others. I hope this book will be good, and no one will maliciously score points. I hope readers can appreciate it from an objective perspective, because most readers cannot write such high-quality novels. The author should work hard to update the book. We bookworms are waiting for the book to be updated soon (✪▽✪). The author should also pay attention to his body and exercise more so that he can have the energy to update. Summary: Great book! Readers, please don't maliciously gain points! Author update soon!

The book is a good book, the subject matter is based on the Cthulhu system, and the plots are closely linked, both stressful and relaxing. There are also some laughs, it's very exciting. So me horse Fart The photo is finished, can I update it? After all, even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this! (˙ω˙) Factory

This topic is very innovative, the author's writing style is also very good, the protagonist's IQ is online throughout the whole process, it's great to watch! It's just too short. Come on, author, don't be a eunuch.

It's okay, nothing serious, and there are no major problems with the current settings. It looks pretty good. I usually read this kind of subject. Every time I see the first two to three hundred chapters, I don't want to read it. I have never read the entire book [face covering].

The world view, ideological conception, and writing style are all very good, but the pace in the early stages is too slow. I read more than a hundred pictures, although I didn't finish them all, but almost all of them were in Huaizhuang. I only took one trip to Lianjiabao, but it was also taken care of. Except for that book, I hope the progress will be faster.

It feels a bit like a fairy cultivator in a weird world, but it's really good-looking. And the author's avatar is still Kelsey🥰😍😍😍

I've watched 15% of it so far, and I haven't encountered any unacceptable "poison" yet. Taking the 15% I have seen so far, it is even better than the other novels on Tomato. For the remaining 85%, come on!

The writing is very good. I finished reading it in three days. The overall plot is very good, and the most important part is about the strength of the protagonist and supporting characters and the strength of the aboriginal people. The author has arranged it very well. There is no such mindless plot against high-ranking people and saints. In addition, the author's potion ability can be written in more detail. For example, after upgrading, the ability of low-grade potions will also be improved. Not only the combination of potions, but also the impact of realm improvement on potions. The last missing star is the early details. The author didn't grasp the details very well. I was persuaded to back out several times. Finally, the author should update quickly. The protagonist can be written more confidently, which is not to say arrogant, because he should now know that he has to save seven billion people on the earth. This is not only a matter of rights and obligations, but the protagonist's own character must also start to change, just like Kamen Rider Kato King [eating melon], the world is centered on him

This book must be rated as a five-star book. I have a question. The protagonist can control the fog, so why can't the fog enter the enemy's body and destroy it? Moreover, the fog should be very small. It can enter the enemy's body as long as he breathes. If it is on the battlefield, if the fog enters the enemy's body and destroys it, he will die immediately. Come on, author, update, don't imitate someone else🐟, one chapter will take three hours, one chapter will take five hours, and every holiday will start with ten chapters tomorrow

It seems very good so far. I have seen almost 100 pictures. The development in the early stage is neither too fast nor too slow. It has a sense of rhythm. The author has better control over the rhythm. However, some words are a little wordy. It is still quite exciting. Five-star praise ^ω^ The rest of the story is very exciting, and the subject matter is pretty good. The only shortcoming is probably the ending, which I felt was a bit rushed. Overall it's great

After reading this, this book is really interesting. I haven't seen anything that makes me want to give up. The protagonist is neither a saint nor a selfish person, just a very ordinary Blue Star person. The other characters are also normal and diverse. It is not the kind of novel where only the protagonist is smart and the others are mentally retarded. The plot is also well designed and there is no such thing as a perfect plot. Come on, author＼＼\\٩( 'ω' )و //／／

It's a good book, with a bit of a Cthulhu flavor. However, after reading it for a long time, the heroine disappeared. I hope she will show up soon. Please give the author a big boost. I hope there will be more than a thousand chapters, so I won't be disappointed. [Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

I have been reading this book for a long time, and some may have read it after reading Cthulhu. But I am just the opposite. I think there is a big difference between Cthulhu and Cthulhu. Cryptic focuses on acting, while this one focuses on digestion. Moreover, this is an Eastern and Western fantasy, while Cryptic is completely Western Cthulhu-style. There is a qualitative difference. This book is quite interesting. I give it a thumbs up.

It's really rare. It's very beautiful. I hope the author will write more than a million words every day, so many that I can't finish them all [laughing]

@ Can you add a high-level trick? Name: Life and Death Chessboard Ability: When the holder launches an attack on a single enemy, a special chessboard space is formed. The holder and the enemy play chess in this space (the chessboard will tell the rules of the game by flooding the minds of both parties with information). The winner lives and the loser dies. The side effect is to increase the number of holders. The desire to play chess with others on the second chessboard will intensify every time it is used. The third time it is used, it can never refuse this desire to play chess with others. When it cannot find anyone to play chess with, it will become crazy and will keep looking for creatures to play against. This process is irreversible until death. After washing my face with the Saint, the side effects have been greatly reduced. 1. The holder's failure in the game is reduced from death to serious injury. 2. The first use will not produce a desire to play, and if used no more than three times in a short period of time, the side effects will be within the controllable range and the desire will disappear over time. 3. When the side effects disappear over time, the number of times will be recalculated for the next use. The heroine Nanyue? It's quite vulgar. As someone who has watched the protagonist grow step by step, he can be said to be an elder. I really hate this kind of plot. The protagonist has no emotions at all, but now the author has begun to portray it as ambiguous. When I talked about Nan Yan earlier, I said that Nan Yan has fallen behind the protagonist. This reason is quite ridiculous. It was not mentioned at the same time before, but now it is said that he has fallen behind. In the future, Nanyue will also lag behind the protagonist, so there is no point in being the heroine. Is the author here? Can you talk about whether there is a female protagonist and who she is? If it's Nanyue, let me give up. I don't want to see the kind of plot that makes me sick, so I can leave and don't have to worry about it. I admit that I like this kind of book very much, so I get entangled. But the author can confirm who the heroine is so that I don't have to worry about it. Thank you.

It's non-toxic, the logic is self-consistent, and I didn't feel bored after reading 800 chapters.

To be honest, it's really good to watch. It's the first time I've read so many chapters in one go after such a long period of reading. The plot is very interesting. It's just that the beginning of Chapter 200 is a bit controversial, but I think this is actually a reflection of the protagonist. Although he did not agree with sacrificing a small number of people in order to keep the majority of people alive, he did not deny it and it was even understandable. He doesn't like this approach because he also has the strength to adopt a better solution. I just hope that the plot and settings can be improved later. Thank you to the author for your hard work.ヾ(≧∪≦*)ノ When I saw the maid, I felt that the plot was not particularly unacceptable, but some of the descriptions were a bit embarrassing and jarring. Even if you want to bring a maid, it is the protagonist's own choice. Generally speaking, it doesn't matter, but the description leads the protagonist to be hypocritical. After reading the comments, almost all of them are incomprehensible. Good books need to be polished, I hope the author can become more and more sophisticated in this kind of description! ╰(*´`*)╯

Let's record it, it's pretty good-looking. There are a few small spots that make me feel uncomfortable. Overall, it's pretty good-looking. It's no problem if it's over nine points. 1. The protagonist's first extraordinary appendix is poorly described in reality. 2. Go to Qingmuzhai to bring the maid, but I haven't seen her since, so ignore it. 3. This is the most uncomfortable The Extraordinary Investigation Bureau keeps saying that I'm embarrassed to ask him for help every day, and asks him for help every time. It's free labor. It doesn't mean that you can't help. Don't make the protagonist look like a supporting character. He will be called for help when there is something big. He will never let the protagonist participate in decision-making. He is a pure tool person. He is always called to fight when something happens. He goes to the endless book to ask questions and also asks the protagonist to ask some secret knowledge and exchanges with the book. You can use it as you like. The more you read, the less sense of existence you feel. Sometimes the protagonist is asked to help four or five times in ten chapters. Other players are paid, but the protagonist is not. 4. The book in which the question was asked, the Book of Endlessness, a strange creature created a female soul. The protagonist couldn't walk after hearing it and believed it. The woman said there was no harm, so the protagonist directly gave her the coordinates of the earth. It's a pity that the octopus head is a man, otherwise he might not have given the coordinates of the earth long ago [laughing]

Although some settings are borrowed from Lord of Mysteries, there are a lot of articles in the world, and the things within the framework are what really need to be considered. There are a lot of foreshadowings in it, and they are all filled in later. Overall, it is a rare and good book for Tomato. It stands out among many novices. It is highly recommended. As a bookworm who has been reading for nearly 20 years, I would like to make a fair evaluation: this book is really good-looking, the plot is relatively reasonable, there are no major flaws in the logic and outline, and the various details are not surprising. Overall, it can be rated as fairy grass. The only problem is that the pace speeds up in the middle and later stages, and some of the potion materials are too simple. , The ending is also relatively hasty. If it were written as a tie in the final battle and then added some scenes of regaining the lost ground, in which the unknown class survives in death and awakens the gray mist to become the final boss, and the protagonist uses his talent to almost win and become a god... In this way, it will be more exciting to expand to more than 1 million words... The final summary will continue to follow the author's other books.

It's a book about weirdness, it's not bad, but it's not an invincible novel. I have been raising it for more than a month and have only reached chapter 280. I am waiting to read more than 400 chapters [laughing]

No need to brag, this book looks good to old bookworms, I look forward to the follow-up, come on!

The writing style is fluent, the language is humorous, and although the pace in the early stages is a bit slow, the step-by-step growth is still enjoyable to read. However, after reading too many routines of growth such as collecting life sources in the dungeon - finding potion materials - promotion, it will inevitably feel a little boring. Although the author has tried his best to describe the battle scenes, after all, it mainly relies on potions, and it is difficult to write about flower blossoms. Some battles after the fifth level are even skipped directly. In addition, there is no subsequent description of the Talisman Master's Talisman system, and the online game world at the beginning also changes to the protagonist's solo adventure in another world. The lack of these most attractive parts is also a bit regretful. But the overall flaws are not hidden, and if you can read it to the end, I can give it five stars according to my rating standards.

It's pretty good, but I often watch it and never know who the main character is. It feels like the main character has very little time to appear.

When I first read this book, I felt that the plot was too slow, so I gave up after reading twenty or thirty chapters. In the past two days, due to book shortage, I decided to read it again and found that the latter part was unexpectedly good. In the end, the star was deducted for chapter 200. Taking two maids to Qingmu Village, which is a bit annoying for me who likes heroines without heroines, but because of the game mechanics and the fact that the protagonist does not have any too close behavior with them for the time being, I decided to read on. The great author worked hard on coding, and finally asked if there is a female protagonist. If there is a female protagonist in the harem, please be sure to tell me, because I have stepped into the trap of too many brainless female protagonists ¬_¬｀ and now I don't want to see the female protagonist at all [face covering] After reading more than 490 chapters, I was curious about whether Nan Yan was the heroine [thinking]. Originally, the protagonist didn't have that idea when I saw her return to the game, but the misunderstanding by Blue Star's senior management and the matchmaking by Shenqi's senior management made me less confident, because in general novels, the male protagonist will accept this routine in the end, plus the male protagonist's personality... But I still hope that there will be no female protagonist.

Although the pace of this book is a bit slow at the beginning, it is written solidly and there are no obvious flaws, poisonous points or bugs. The construction of the entire potion system also seems to be a matter of course. What surprised me most was that the plot was smooth in the change from the game to the real world, without any abrupt changes, which made the whole book look better. At the same time, the subsequent plot is also quite creative and does not fall into the routine of killing monsters and upgrading. Unfortunately, the rhythm problem caused many people to give it low scores. I feel this book is above 9.3, I personally give it 9.5 Keep up the good work, author Another point is that the author's writing skills are sufficient, and the combat power system did not collapse in the later stage, and it is quite reasonable. Others can also be written.