
Global Revival: Playing Lü Dongbin from the Start
全球复苏:开局扮演吕洞宾
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 424k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban High-Concept
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
203Chapters
11Reads
30.1kReads · all time
In booklists 2
The Protagonist Has a Role-Playing System
Preferably with a smaller cast, so each character gets to play their role for a while.
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National Destiny: Playing a Role from the Start
Transmigration System. Resources. The whole nation ascends to victory.
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Reader comments 12
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I gave up when I saw the Shuton boy, and returned to Daozu. Damn it. I was beaten and injured by a little devil. I was also beaten into a dog by a Shutun boy. I was suppressed all the time. It was a mess. I beat a Shuton boy for dozens of chapters.
It started well. . The fight later turned into a mess. . You are really good at water. . A good novel has been turned into poison by you!
The overall creativity is okay, but the combat description is a mess. There are a dozen buts in one paragraph, a dozen that ghost, and a dozen buts. You won't find it weird.
Too watery, too messy
The front part is fine, but the back part is so messy that I feel dizzy.
It's too watery. It took about twenty chapters to defeat the drunk boy. It was just filled with water.
Talking incoherently
It's such a mess, I got hurt even when I hit a female ghost.
What you write is messy, and the more you write, the more messy you become.
I'm not interested in what I wrote here.