海贼：开局获得雷霆法则

Momonosuke must die or the star will fall.

This book is well written, but the author adds more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, More, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more More, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more more. ，，，，，，，，，，，，，，，，，，，，，，，，

Although the combat power is a bit exaggerated, he saved Ace and Whitebeard did not die. I love him, but I hope there is no CP. Even if there is, the emotional line should be smaller. If you refuse the harem, the harem will be reduced⭐️

I'll give you five stars. Momonosuke will get three stars if he doesn't die, and Ace and Whitebeard will get one star if he dies.

It's just that the system in the later stage basically doesn't appear. The plot is great and the battle plot is very detailed. It's not like some battles where the picture collapses in the later stage. It would be nice if the protagonist could experience one or two defeats. After all, most fan time travels basically go smoothly, and at most they win miserably. Looking forward to the ending [you taste it carefully] [please ask for more updates]

I'll give you 5 stars first, and Momonosuke will drop 4 stars for you.

The result is very comfortable. We have all watched One Piece, so the knot in our hearts has been relieved. It was mentioned earlier that Ace is not afraid of sea water, why can he still be restrained by the Sea Tower Stone? This detail does not match up~

If the author is here, I will give you a five-star rating, and then I will give some skills to the pig's feet: Yidao Style. Drawing Sword Slash, Thunder God Slash, Yidao Style. Thunder Dragon Slash "Note: When cutting out, a thunder dragon flew over. , Itto-ryu. The thunder dragon comes to the world. "Thunder dragon slashes from the sky."

Finished reading "Pirates: Obtaining the Law of Thunder at the Beginning" at 11:14 on December 23, 2023 by the author [Xia who loves tea] - This review comes from the HarmonyOS 4.0.0.138 (C00E135R4P14) version of HUAWEI Mate 60 Pro+ 16G+1TB (Inkstone Black), which is far ahead!

It's rare to include Whitebeard's article. I've read too many articles about being the boss every day, so it's good to change my taste occasionally. He saved Ace, joined Whitebeard, and made up for the regret, which is very good.

This is a cool article, but Momonosuke would have died

Very comfortable to watch No embarrassing plot five stars I hope it won't fall apart in the future!

The author makes up for the regrets of the war on top. From the time the protagonist first got on the boat with Ace until he later liberated the world, the protagonist's mentality changed subtly. This is also a change in the author's writing thinking, but the ending is a bit busy. In the future, the details, character photos, and plot originality can be further improved. The author spent some effort and it is worth reading. Finally, I hope the author can write original stories in the future.

I feel the same way that Ace Whitebeard cannot die, otherwise he will lose his star. 😏😏

Let's make a prediction. I guess in the end the protagonist marries Robin and has five children [laughing] 6500 hours old readers said this book is good [smile]

It's very well written, please update it quickly.

Xue Xue next door directly picked up Tenzuki Toki and put him to sleep in advance, fundamentally solving the problem of Momonosuke.

The content is rich and colorful, the ending is beautiful, and everything develops in a good direction. The author perfectly presents the kindness and tolerance of an outstanding Chinese person, but I still think it is better for the protagonist to form a pirate group

This is originally very good-looking, the fighting is exciting, the protagonist is decisive in killing, and the villain's IQ is online. It is a very good pirate novel. The score should not be so low, at least above nine points.

Blackbeard must die, otherwise the star will fall

I like joining the Whitebeard Pirates, but if Dad and Ace die, I will give it three stars

Now One Piece 2023 is not over yet-_-||

The writing is good, but Momonosuke must die.

Although the timeline has been sped up and some locations are different, Momonosuke must die. Thank you.

I'll give you a five-star first. It doesn't matter if Yao Zhizhu dies or not! Anyway, Ace and Whitebeard can't die. If they die, I will give you 100 stars... Divided into 50 installments! ! ! You must watch the video to support this. Should I say it or not? This is the most enjoyable pirate novel I have ever read [Like]

The ending was very satisfying to watch, Yi Mu was eliminated, and Luffy became the Pirate King! Ace isn't dead either, Whitebeard is still alive and well! Very satisfied! , Isn't Ace not afraid of the sea water? Are you really scared of being caught?

This is much more enjoyable than other pirate books I have read. Although the early stage strength is a bit weak, it is really cool.

The plot is very good, the writing is a little bit off, but it's really good. Come on, author

So far it's okay, but as for the power of the law, damn it, it's so weak, you are the equivalent of a general at full level, you underestimate the law too much

Momonosuke must die or else the star will fall