Brother, Don't Come Over

I quite like the content. The only thing I feel uncomfortable about is the double quotation marks 😂😂

The subject matter of this novel is still very good, but the writing style is not very smooth, it looks awkward, there are no punctuation marks, and some sentences have grammatical errors. When reading it, I have to use my brain to think about sentence fragmentation, correct typos and modify wrong sentences. It is always a novel that is not good-looking but not delicious, which makes me uncomfortable. The heroine is very strong, but there are too many villains, probably just to advance the plot, which is not very enjoyable for readers. Writing is not easy, so I gave it five stars. I hope the author can go back and revise this novel when his writing skills mature, and handle the details in place. Come on💪.

It's nice to watch. I didn't understand the first two sentences and thought it was just Qin Ran's "Ran" with the character "fire". When I saw the last chapter of the extra chapter, I instantly understood that Ran is afraid of the cold, so with Qin Ran's character "Ran" with the character "fire", it was destined that they would be together in the end. I still felt a little regretful that I didn't write about my brother and brother. Shen Shenqing's wedding, but they were destined to be together. Their fate was destined in the last life. Then I felt that Ranran's aunt's family did not receive the punishment they deserved. Maybe I read too quickly and didn't see it. In the end, this book is worth reading. I strongly recommend it [laughs]

In this book, the male protagonist is very sweet, treats the heroine very well, and it is also very good-looking. In this book, I have to wait for reincarnation. Their relationship is so real. Thank you, the author, for letting me see a different story.

It's a very good read, and I didn't think the heroine was weak. Rebirth is very magical in the first place. It's normal to not have any golden fingers or space systems. It feels like it's the most normal to rely on yourself to change step by step. Anyway, I like this novel very much, and I really recommend reading it! ! !

It looks great, I like it so much 😍 I hope our male and female protagonists will be together for the rest of their lives, and there will be people who love each other as well. Hee hee hee I never expect that I can attract others. I think this is very shallow. I have to attract myself and let myself have love in order to complete the lonely and long days in the future. Love shines brightly in the bright sun, and longing sinks in the colorful stars.

For me, any novel that I can read from beginning to end is highly recommended. No matter what others say, in my opinion it's pretty good. This novel involves rebirth, sweet pets, and bosses. A cold man will always be so gentle and approachable in front of his destined wife. The male protagonist falls in love at first sight but realizes it later, and the female protagonist's rebirth rewrites the unbearable experience of her previous life. She successfully goes to college and meets the male protagonist. They get to know each other, get to know each other, fall in love and stay together. The love that countless people envy and cannot envy is vividly displayed in Qin Ran and Lin Ran.

It's a fresh and fresh style, not too sinister and cunning. Although there are a few small green teas, they are not very lethal. Generally speaking, it is not very sad. It is the type I like. It has a plain feeling. There are no ups and downs to make people grit their teeth. There are still a few touching points. After all, I cried after watching the extra episode. Haha

It's very good-looking, the heroine is pretty [smile], her smile is very sweet [send heart] [send heart], the male protagonist is very handsome, has a good personality, is gentle and kind, treats the heroine very well, and doesn't look down on the heroine's family background [smile]

I just finished reading it again, it's pretty good. The name of this book is really not that good [laughing and crying], I might be misunderstood. But it is recommended to click in to read the introduction. After reading it, I felt quite calm. What I liked most was the careful details and blatant preference in the process of Qin Ran's love for Lin Ran. Not much to say, if you don't have a book to read, this one is still okay. [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript]

The writing style of the whole book is still very good, the main CP is very touching, and the pink bubbles are full. The final extra chapter is very good, but if there is a foreshadowing embedded in the full text, it will be more interesting. There are a bit too many villains in the novel. Well, although I think the male protagonist is great, these rotten peach blossoms are a bit too vulgar, and there are too many descriptions of the bedroom. Only expressing personal opinions, please do not comment

Everyone must read this book. It's really good. I hope you won't be put off by the comments. It's really worth reading. I stayed up all night to finish it. If I hadn't read the novel before, I wouldn't have read it again. Otherwise, I would have read it again and again. But I will probably read it again in the future. After all, it's really invincible and beautiful. I really love it. 10 Points of praise and recommendation.

It seems that love in midsummer is quiet, but the cicadas chirping on the trees seem noisy. Lin Ran & Qin Ran will be happy, the story is quite good. Maybe what I want to see is Qin Ran's declared love, which should be bold. Maybe Lin Ran had lived too hard in the past and his eyes couldn't bear the soreness. Maybe I want to see that the problems of the house and my aunt can be solved overnight, and I want to call the police. Maybe I forget that there is no way to change the status quo without someone to rely on. Maybe it was because I was too timid and hoped that she would be unable to face the malice of others, but I forgot that she was not that powerful, and she also grew up in a panic from a 10-year-old child to a girl similar to me. She is much braver than me. She grew up like a wild girl. I envy her growth. But if possible, I don't want her to grow up like this. In fact, suffering is meaningless and no one will pity you. I don't hate the image Shen Xi portrays, I hate her actions. She is supported by her brother Shen Yan, who is a delicate and unruly child. But liking is not something you can get by being cute and cute. I still hate her for hurting my Ran Ran. However, her life was very miserable. I only felt pity for her more and more, but I didn't have the courage to pull her out of the abyss. I think Qin Ran could do it. Definitely will

This novel is so beautiful. The love story between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is really beautiful. It is worthy of the fairy love that can only be found in novels. I have just finished reading it at almost five o'clock in the morning, and I still haven't finished it. I highly recommend this novel.

A book that was delayed by the title. It is a pure and sweet story. However, the sentences are not very good in some places. There are no ups and downs in the plot. It tends to be smooth and steady. I really like this male protagonist. He is not awkward, not arrogant, and not paranoid. He is a sunny boy who is only gentle to the female protagonist. He is very strict in rejecting the supporting characters who express his love. He is decisive and straightforward, and does not leave any uneasy factors for the female protagonist. He is really the kind of male protagonist who makes people fall in love with him at first sight. Ps: Let me avoid this: it's a campus love story. If you want to read a story about a big female (male) protagonist who abuses a scumbag, you can take a detour.

It's super sweet. Daily life, even the extra story about life and death, was really miserable. The heroine died, and the hero accompanied her and was buried with her [crying] [crying] Thank you to the author for your hard work [like]

Every stroke tells the story of spring and autumn, every stroke of embroidery is tender, every movement and every movement is infinite, I will hold your hand for the rest of my life. Wherever heaven desires, where the heart goes, destiny is destined to lead a marriage that is regrettable in two lifetimes. We will meet again in this life and finally achieve perfection!!

Super good-looking, the male protagonist treats the female protagonist very well

This book is very good, and it is very touching until the end. The long-lasting love, the extremely gentle Ah Ran, and the strong but cute Lin Ran are all so popular. In the end, I still hope that Ran Ran and Ran Ran can be together in the past and present life, and that A Ye and Si Qing can also have a good ending. Sprinkle flowers [sending hearts]

This is a campus love novel that you can't help but read in one sitting. The words are filled with the unique sweetness of youth. The author uses delicate and gentle writing to outline the whole process of two teenagers falling in love. Every detail is so real and touching, as if it is happening around us. The protagonists in the story are three-dimensional and full-bodied, their dialogues are natural and smooth, and their emotional development progresses layer by layer without any sense of abruptness. The little thoughts hidden in daily interactions, accidental eye contact, and casual body contact are all captured perfectly by the author, making readers follow the protagonist involuntarily and their hearts beat faster. What is particularly commendable is that the author has extremely successfully created the campus atmosphere. Classrooms, libraries, playgrounds, canteens... Every scene is full of youthful atmosphere, making people instantly return to their student days. The supporting characters also have their own characteristics, adding a rich layering to the story. This book is not only about love, but also about growth, friendship and dreams. It makes us believe in pure and beautiful feelings again, and recall that youthful time when just one look could make our heart skip a beat. Definitely worth five-star recommendation!

The heroine is reborn, takes her younger brother to study hard and gets admitted to college, finds out the reason why her parents were killed, drives away the uncle's family who occupy the house, and finds her husband from her previous life in college. They fall in love sweetly, study, get married and have children. They have a three-life love relationship! ! !

It looks good, ahhhhhhhhhhh, I'm crazy. Wow, I like it so much

Good-looking, sweet throughout, not a little bit cruel

It's a wonderful short story, but the heroine acted too cowardly when she was scolded by her eldest aunt. She didn't know how to fight back even if she was reborn.

Very good looking, the male and female protagonists are super sweet! ! ! The male protagonist puts the female protagonist at the top of his heart and dotes on her! ! ! ! ! The heroine also dotes on the hero very much. Before the heroine was reborn, his family was together! ! ! I hope Ranran and Qin Ran will be happy forever! ! !

So beautiful! ! I've been reading a lot lately, and I always stop reading halfway through. I've read all of this book!

I have read a lot of novels, and this one is very real, realistic, and good-looking. Come on😊

Sweet, I like this kind of writing the most. The main reason is that the writing style can be a little more refined, and the punctuation [face covering] is sometimes hard to understand. Anyway, keep up the good work!

It's very interesting, but the extra chapter is a bit touching, and the tear point is too low. Anyway, it's very interesting to read. Keep up the good work, the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

Not bad, not bad, really good-looking