Pokemon: Starting with an Egg

Although he mostly writes about battles, he writes really well about battles. It's very exciting, step by step, unlike others who always catch mythical beasts. The elf didn't go out of his way to look for it. I feel that this novel is very real, unlike other people who can meet whatever they want. It's very real, but the content is not detailed. Nothing else, just write a little more specific content. I think it looks great overall!

I think the author's writing is very beautiful, but the first few chapters are not connected properly and the writing is a bit dense and he did not pay attention to the paragraphs. However, as a loyal fan of Pokémon, I think the content written by the author is very exciting. I originally thought the content of the competition written by the author was quite good, but as I looked further back, I felt that the male protagonist looked like a scumbag. Although he did not cheat physically, I would like to ask the author, has he ever heard of mental cheating? The male protagonist obviously has mental cheating, so I feel that the male protagonist is a bit scumbag, and the male protagonist is a bit too soft-hearted. He is very decisive in battle, but he is also too unresolute in relationships! ! ! For example, when he faced Xiao Ju'er, he knew clearly that Xiao Ju'er had feelings for him and that the male protagonist had a fiancée, so he should decisively reject Xiao Ju'er's feelings, but the male protagonist hesitated because of his soft heart. I look at him from a girl's point of view, and it would be inappropriate for him to drag on like this. It would hurt his fiancée's feelings for him (of course I'm not sure whether it would hurt Xiao Ju'er because I felt she was too thick-skinned). In one episode, Xiao Ju'er told her fiancée that she would compete with her for the male lead. At that time, I was speechless about how thick-skinned she was to be able to say this. I wouldn't think anything of it if the male protagonist didn't love his fiancée, but the male protagonist loves his fiancée and he and his fiancée have been honest with each other. If she can still say this, isn't this just a mistress who is meddling in other people's feelings? Also, why do the male protagonists have so many peach blossoms and the female protagonists have so few? Does this show clearly show that the author wants to write a scene where the female protagonist is jealous of the male protagonist? I was speechless, but the author described the competition between Pokémon in great detail. Originally, because the content and text space between the first dozen chapters were too close, I was sometimes upset that there was no segmentation, but I got better after that. However, the emotional line between the male and female protagonists and the relationship between the male protagonist and his romantic relationship were really unbearable, so I wrote about my reading experience (I don't even take writing so seriously). However, the author's description of Pokémon and the content of the competition are very exciting. I still look forward to the author writing a novel with this theme again (suggestion: it is better to write without CP, after all, it is not easy to write a novel with CP) (I am just expressing my own opinion, it is up to you whether to write it or not) I believe that the author will write better works.

Although there are some flaws in the front, the back is very exciting. I feel this is the best book I have ever written. I give it five stars.

It's the most exciting Pokémon I've ever read.

The author took the fast route, so many plots were not written, but it is still quite interesting.

Do you know why it's not popular?

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I particularly like the author's style of writing about battles, and I very much hope that the author can continue to do so (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on Thank you to the author for the great update٩(๑•̀ω•́๑)۶

It's okay. I don't know where this book was moved. I guess it wasn't moved very well.

I said it looks great, why is the rating so low? Jumping ideas, I quite like them