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This book is one of the higher quality Genshin Impact fan works that I have read, but the car was a little too fast and I was worried that the author might not have stopped the car that day and overturned 😂

It looks very good. I drive when I need to drive, and when I shouldn't, I still drive. This makes me very satisfied. However, the priesthood of River God is not very useful. It would be great if it could be used more, but I guess it will be of great use later.

This book really gave me a new experience. Other Genshin Impact fanfics basically have explosive combat power and the plot is written first after the existing official plot and then followed by the plot. It always made me feel uncomfortable and very uncomfortable to read. This book is also not slow in writing but follows the plot closely. Some book friends said that this book is of no use in destroying the protagonist's combat power. Let me help Zhuge clarify. ①The plot has only lasted less than half a month, so I use my abilities almost every day. ②Rewards and punishments are the God of the River. Others are honest and trustworthy and tell you the truth. In the end, you searched so hard that you withheld all the good things. I have to say, this behavior is really a dog. Therefore, Feng Yi in Xiao Zhuge's works never fails to give others what they really deserve. This is the real river god. ③ This book is more about farming than passion. Lsp will definitely love to read it. The author is also a serious person.

Overall, it's very good. The only drawback is that it's too short. I'll give it five stars to encourage the author.

Very flavorful, a bit astringent, but I like it *:ஐ٩(๑´ᵕ`)۶ஐ:*

The author's writing is very, very, very, very good. I like your style very much. Come on, author, let the protagonist marry all the female characters in the Tivana continent, including the female characters among the Seven Gods and the female characters among the Fools...

This is my humble opinion. At present, there is still room. Suggestions for the plot: First of all, the protagonist has never experienced real setbacks. There is a saying that goes well: If you don't experience the ups and downs of life, you won't know the true meaning of life. So you can let him go through the ordeal. Then there are suggestions for writing methods: the author's use of the third person is not very good. You can check some information to improve it. Good use of the third person will make people unconsciously step into the role of the novel, so it should be improved. That's it for me, if there are any missing please add them. 😁😁

No eunuchs, please, this is one of the best Genshin Impact fanfics on Tomato I think.

If you just say that this novel is good, it would be too poor. This novel embodies everyone's yearning for the second dimension of their wives, and their desire to read. The author's imagination is endless, and we will always support it.

The author's character creation is quite good. Compared to other Genshin Impact fanfics, I think this book is quite good. I won't talk about the harem. After all, they are all wives. If you don't like it, just don't read it. Sometimes I feel that the harem is too fast. I hope the author It is not a bad thing to pave the way for the wives' feelings for the protagonist, but too much (in my opinion) gives people a very unreasonable and uncomfortable feeling (although the novel is required to be reasonable, it is also a very unreasonable request). It is only for the author's reference. What I said is just my personal opinion. If you think it is good, please give it a like. If you feel bad, just ignore it subconsciously and don't affect everyone's good mood.

I think this book is good, but I feel that this book lacks a sense of ups and downs. The process of the protagonist marrying the harem is too smooth. I hope the author will add some ups and downs when writing in the future.

I have my own ideas and my creations are very novel, and I hope to continue working hard. Come on＾0＾~

Generally speaking, it's like a Japanese comic. You can fall into the trap, but you can't be too fussy about it. The protagonist can be said to be a person who talks about being evil, but is very brave. The travelers are treated friendly for some reasons (see the subsequent plot), but the protagonist does not have this view. He thinks that it is a peaceful start. In fact, it may be on someone else's chessboard. The gods have no unreasonable comments (directly the Eye of God Army?). The original god is interspersed by Cthulhu. Finally, I hope that the author will not be happy just for the sake of being happy, but must have the humility and planning of Gou, be brave with luck and strength, and be wise with wise brains and actions.

I haven't seen such high-quality Genshin Impact fan fiction for a long time. I strongly support it!

The content is very attractive, and the chapters look clean and neat. Personally, I think it's a bit fast to drive, but it's not unacceptable. It's a good book. As for those who deliberately give low-star ratings, I hope the author doesn't care. There will always be a group of Genshin Impact fans to support you. I will give you a five-star first and ask the author to update it quickly.

This is the best Genshin Impact book I have ever seen. If you still have one, please recommend it to me.

Hurry, hurry, update more, this is probably the most satisfying one written in Genshin Impact to my liking. At least you have to follow it to thousands of chapters. You must not ask for it, and you can't just finish it casually.

The novel is lively and interesting. I suggest the author write more harems to expand the harem.

The storyline is very good, with humor in the daily routine and occasionally interspersed with battles. I like it very much.

This book has clear ideas and fluent language. It is a very good book. Although there are some minor flaws in some places, they are not really a hindrance. The most important thing is whether the author can update it faster. 😀😀😀

It's wonderful, it's wonderfully written, but sometimes it's very uncomfortable for people like us who listen to books. (Funny)

After two days of unremitting efforts, I finally got to Chapter 458. This novel written by the author is beautiful in writing, simple in meaning, not poisonous, very sweet, very pampering to the wives, and not too censorious. It has deeply impressed my interest in harem novels. I'm really looking forward to the author's future articles. I'm also looking forward to the author's resurrection of Raiden Shin and the Yasha sisters. Hehe, I'm actually dissatisfied with the author's saying that I have a little selfish desire to be my wife in the end. Actually, there's nothing unreasonable about it. , Based on the gender of the Rock God and the Wind God, I can see that they have no gender. Wind elves and stones do not have gender, but they have different appearances based on personal preferences. They look like men, but they are women after all. People on the Internet say that Zhongli and Gui Zhong are a couple. I am not convinced that they are our wives after all. I really want to see Gui Zhong become our wife. Of course, the author can write whatever he wants. I am just a little suggestion. The author has the final say on how to write. Also, I heard that the author is a girl, which is a bit unbelievable. Hey, finally, come on, author, please pay attention to your health.

Good book, Genshin Impact LSP's special performance

It's a pity that the original subject matter and content were all good, but the book was eventually buried, which forced the full-time author to turn it into a part-time job and eventually gave up. It's a pity, it's a pity

The writing is good, the story is wonderful, and the links are intertwined. The key is to never drive, and to be a good author.

The quality of the goods is very good, exactly as described by the seller. I am very satisfied. I really like it. It completely exceeded my expectations. The delivery speed is very fast. The packaging is very careful and tight. The logistics company has a good service attitude and the delivery speed is very fast. I am very satisfied with my purchase.

I just realized that I haven't given five stars yet, so I can't arrange it directly. This book is very well written, and the story lines of the characters are also well written. I highly recommend it! I think this one is the best among Genshin Impact fanfics so far.

The writing is very good, I have never seen anything better than this in Yuanshen fan fiction.

The author greatly uses the wonderful fantasies in his head and combines them with the general outline of Genshin Impact. I wrote my beloved Genshin Impact story! It's not an exaggeration, please don't misunderstand me if you don't like it. 😊😊😊!

The first novel I read on Tomato Novels. I was originally attracted by the subject matter, but then the more I read, the more I became attracted to it, and I have been following it until now. Come on, author, if that kind of place can be pictured... Hehe.