From the Start, I Was Murdered, Then Awakened the White Dragon Gene

This book: "Extraordinary city + multiple elements + monsters + system + daily plot + relaxed humor". The protagonist starts at the SSS level, which is basically the ceiling in the early stage, but of course he will always be very strong later on! The protagonist has a strong personality and will not join the official force, and there is no need for the protagonist to be very strong! Sister and brother control, you know (›´ω`‹ )! ! Daily life and plot are interspersed, so I won't just write about one aspect all the time. There is a main line, a plot, and monster fights, where the strong collide! The protagonist's sister appears in about 30 chapters, and the system appears in 20 or 30 chapters (let me mention here, the system is only an auxiliary, the impact will not be great, the protagonist does not rely on the system!) Finally, if you like it, please support the author Jun and leave a five-star rating. Feel free to comment. This is the motivation for the author Jun to write the book, and it is also the result that you can continue reading! Thanks, dear readers! ! !

It's good-looking, but I hope that just one heroine, my sister, is enough

Character: Su Bai is confident at best, arrogant at worst, and even disdains those who are stronger than himself. However, the calm, confident and strong character is a plus for macho male readers. Su Xi's words are white and delicate, which does not fit the image of a heroine, and may dissuade some female readers (no doubt, male-channeled novels can also have female readers). Readers who like cute girls can join. In fact, the most outstanding ones are some supporting characters with few words, such as Pandora's cold and arrogant but Xiaobai's contrasting cuteness, Zhang Xiaoman's cheerful and dedicated (although a bit cold-blooded, but acceptable), Qian Yu, who conflicts with Su Xi's character, and Xiao Hei, who is already very cute, these are all bonus points. Plot design: Readers who are passionate about fighting can close their eyes and enter, but for me, the repetition rate of the battle scenes is high. Watching one scene is equivalent to watching them all. There is not much description of physical skills, but too much emphasis on the description of skills. Especially the front part of the index finger blocks attacks, it's so embarrassing. Speaking of blocking attacks with the index finger, after setting up the invincibility setting, he later rejected it without hesitation. It can be seen that the author wanted to avoid the label of a brainless and cool novel. However, if he overturned it after it was set up in the early stage, there was a sense of fragmentation, so the discomfort when it failed would be stronger than in other stories. It's not as bad as the early stage, giving people a feeling of growth (this is also a common problem of tomatoes, invincible in the early stage, "waste" in the middle stage, and invincible in the late stage, the whole canyon type development) In daily life, the most important thing is the basic skills. The character's personality is clear at a glance. Everyone will know it after watching it. The suggestion is to establish a relationship with a certain female character early. She is hesitant and afraid to face feelings. This contrasts with her decisiveness and ability in battle. It is one of the poisonous points. Writing skills: Judging from the length, yes, but I hope it will be more concise and enhance the literary meaning. Parts of the plot are lengthy. World view design: Slightly toxic, everyone will know it after reading it, but it's just a fun read, so there's no need to worry too much. But readers who value logic should proceed with caution. In short, the above comments only represent my personal views and are not intended to cause disgrace. I also hope that the author can do better. Remember: don't change your character casually! !

It's pretty good. He fights when he needs to fight and goes about his daily routine when he needs to. I like the hero who solves this kind of trouble on the spot the most. It's just that the way to determine the opponent's strength is a bit old-fashioned. The opponent's strength increases with the strength of the male protagonist. When the strength is SSS, you can't meet ST. The speed of strength enhancement is also a bit too slow. But overall it deserves five stars

1. The topic of the article is clear and the text is rich in emotion. It deeply touches people's hearts and resonates. 2. Your wonderful writing is beyond comparison. Kan Jun's classical Chinese is better than ten years of writing. 3. In the past, there was a crazy visitor, and I called him an immortal. The pen falls in the storm, and the poem becomes the weeping ghosts and gods. From then on, his reputation spread rapidly. The literary talent is extremely rich and will be spread unparalleled. 4. The extraordinary literary skills are shown in the ordinary, and every word is precious. Gorgeous rhetoric creates an atmosphere. 5. The cool breeze and cool summer life bring forth the writing style, and all the grace and beauty are his. 6. The pen falls in the storm, and the poem becomes the weeping ghosts and gods.

This book is worth five stars just because it doesn't have any cliche ridicule. It's also very humorous, which is my favorite type. Plus, it's the kind of book that's invincible from the beginning to the end. I like it very much.

By the way, the author, let me comment here, the writing style and the speed of the car are both very well controlled. That is, if you want to retain more people, you can add some foreshadowing and improve it more. I think this book can be in the top few. Just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it. (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

It's pretty good, the subject matter is good, the plot is good, and it's well written. The protagonist is also very gentle and the character description is quite delicate. The most important thing is that the author is very active (emphasis here)

Not bad, not bad, the plot is very good, the expressions are on point, the author is very active, but there are too few chapters, and there are no poisonous points. Please give the author a big boost😘😘😘 It's hard to find a book that suits your taste. The author must not stop updating, abandon the trap, eunuch, and it's unfinished, otherwise hehehe😈😈😈😎😎😎

It's a good book without the bells and whistles of a harem, or a traditional counterattack boy that has a systematic flow. It gives people a desire to read on.